OK so i got my first review from vampiresandhorses43ver thank you for telling me what needed to be fixed honestly right after u wrote it i just uploaded the story again and fixed it up.

Bella's pov

After graduation Miss B Alices' mom,

I think she has a crush on charlie too,Alice's mom and charlie brought us out for Pizza Alicewas mad because she wanted an after graduation party after party.

and I met Rosalie she was very nice but she had gotten a surprise that had to make her go wherever she went it was sad how she had to leave early.

"Alice are you kidding me your mad because we didn't have two parties?"I asked she looked up she had a smile on her face,really what is wrong with this girl?

She put her head back down and back up again took a bite of pizza and blurted out in a playfully mean tone if it was possible "NO! Bellbert I'm mad because you only took twenty pictures for graduation that's why I'm mad."

"Alice behave yourself your at a restaurant" Alice's mom said to Alice

"okay mom"she said looking down.

"So charlie.."Miss B trailed off talking to charlie.

The next day Alice an I spent a whole eight hours packing.

"OK Albert I think your car and the moving van are stuffed."I said to Alice before our long trip to California we were actually going in two separate cars my car is getting pulled behind the moving truck that I'm driving and Alice is driving her yellow porsche,mine is a Bugatti veyron it was blue and cute I was mad that I wasn't driving it,but at least I was bringing it with me.

Alice and I could only talk to each other through our phones so we made sure they were on speaker while we were driving, Charlies ordered us to because it would take sixteen and a half hours since me and Alice were going I have a feeling we would talk the whole time.

Right before Alice and I left Charlie And Mrs.B gave us each five hundred bucks,We said our goodbyes and hoped into our seperate cars.

After Three hours of driving I saw Alice talking on the phone to someone when I was driving but who? so I just kept driving and ignored it.

Alice's quick pov

While I was singing to a song in my car my phone rang "live your life aye aye aye aye you steady cha-" "Hello"I said in my sing song voice that Bella hates.

"ALICE! hey"it was Rosalie my friend who I met a couple of months ago and gotten very close to.I purposely told Bella she was a long time friend Rosalie was very nice she was never mean so she would get along with Bella ,What Bella did not know was that Rosalie left early to go back to California and we would meet her at a McDonald's.

"Hey rose. whats up"I asked her

"Oh nothing I just got back in Cali"

"Oh Bella and I will be there in twelve hours so you can rest"While I was talking I looked in my rear view mirror and saw Bella looking straight at me I looked down to quickly for her to see and said"hey rose sorry I got to go I think Bella might get a little bit suspicious so bye"

"Oh okay bye Alice" Rosalie said really sad.

"Oh rose no hard feelings well see you at McDonald's okay the one by your house" I said to her with my soft voice

"OK bye Ali"wow my friends and our nick names.

Twelve Hours later

While I was following Alice around the road I saw the weirdest highway names I laughed to myself then all of a sudde all of sudden "I'm sitting in a room made up of only big white walls and in the hal-" I just loved My ring tone "hello?.Alice "

"Oh hi Bella since we've been driving for twelve hours and since were already in Cali want to stop for something to eat? please" I looked towards her car and saw her making a pouting face through the mirror "OK Alice fine" I told her "but were are we going?"

"Oh bellmo thank you good thing I plan ahead follow me"she half yelled through the phone well it was like a shriek.

When Alice pulled up to a McDonald's I got so excited I haven't eaten that for like a year(A/N:I Havent had mcdonalds for 1 year now its strange lol) I pulled the key out the egnition and locked the doors and jumped out the big moving van and I ran into Alice "lets go Albert I'm starving" I flinched a little at my own voice because I sounded like Alice.

Ok i need more reviews im trying to write a new chapter everyday cuz i know what it feels like to wait a long time for a story and i will have polls for my readers to take to depend on what happpens next but it starts when bella meets edward it not quite far from now but bye everyone and please review eveven if you are blind or cant use your fingers our somthing else my second fan fic i hope its better than my first wich i stopped writing