I
was just wondering if you're going to make the Cullen's come up in
the
pictures that Bella is taking?
Yes I am even though that is a good idea
The
way you change point of views is
kinda confusing. When it
changes try and put like BPOV or EPOV all the time.
Does anyone else think that way? If so I'll try to change it.
I
love this story but don't exactly understand is Bella a witch or
something
similar and does she even know that she's 'special'?
I'm
confused please write more ASAP!
Bella is human, she is just extremely smart and that will come into play more later. No she really doesn't think of herself as special, she thinks of herself as pretty ordinary.
What ever I change in the story, like Edward's father's name or the type of car Bella drives is on purpose. The car thing just because the car Stephanie Meyers but in her web site I though was ugly. But that's just me. And changing Edward's dad's name to Anthony was just because I don't see Edward as being a junior. Most of the ones I know have father issues.
Any other questions just ask and I will post a response o.O
Please forgive me by David Gray
Drive by Incubus
Edward's pov
Ha ha Eddy can't get the ball back Alice
I had been shooting baskets minding my own business, when all of a sudden; Alice stole the ball from me. She then proceeded to dance around with it keeping it just out of my reach.
Grrr.
All of a sudden Alice froze then gasped dropping the ball then I heard it.
Boom
My head immediately darted up to where Bella was thinking she had fallen. She was staring shocked at the other end of the room, I followed her gaze. A small freshman boy was lying on the floor unconscious.
The teacher ran over to the young boy and scooped him up screaming "Class dismissed" as he practically ran the boy to the nurse.
Wow. That's a first. I turned back to Alice. "I guess I'm going to go get changed back."
"Yea me too, I'm gunna go tell Bella. See you at the house Edward; I'm going to catch a ride with Jasper because I have an essay I have to redo. I think I might actually right a new one, my old one is now on the internet and the teacher assumed I got it from there not that I wrote it. Stupid man it's not my fault I wrote it 20 years ago. Perfect time to start after this I'm off to the library"
I walked into the locker room and started to get changed and stopped when I realized I get about an hour alone with Bella. I rushed to get ready faster. I wanted to spend as much time with her as possible, before my family showed up.
Bella's pov
Well that's not something you see everyday. I shook it off and started to put away my music player, when I looked back up, Alice was sitting next to me on the bleachers.
"Yipes!"
"Hey Bella, I just thought I should give the plan for today. As you know Emmett and Jasper, have to go to the weight room for the team. Rosalie has cheerleading practice, and I have to write a paper, so I'm going to wait for Jasper I'm actually going to go to the library now to start" She smiled and winked "you and Edward are on your own, he's in the locker room now getting changed."
"Okay." I wasn't sure how he felt about being alone with me but I was okay with it, I hope it's not acward (sp?).
"Well great then," she said excitedly "let's get down form here."
"You go first, I might shake it too much, and then we'll both fall." I stared jealously as Alice practically floated down the bleachers, stupid, graceful, grr!
Just as I was about to turn around to climb down, Edward sprinted over to us coming to a stop at Alice and speaking to her softly, I looked down at them both and tilted my head to the side and smiled when they looked up.
"I'm going to come down now okay guys?"
"Alrighty I'm gunna go to the library see you at the house Bella, Edward." Alice said waving as she walked away.
I turned around to start to climb down and…
HAHA YOU THOUGHT I WOULD LEAVE YOU HANGING DIDN'T YOU.
Edward's pov
Bella turned around to climb down and I got a nice view of…Gah Bad Edward.. What is wrong with you? Okay, I watched her footing carefully and as she went to put her foot in around half way down she slipped I reached up to steady her around the waist, she ended up falling completely, man I love having vampire strength, I caught her. Wow never mind, she weighs what 115, 120.
"Oh my gosh I'm so sorry,"
"It's okay Bella, no harm no foul." (D I find it necessary)
"Well thank you for catching me." She leaned up and kissed my cheek, my eyes went wide. "But you can put me down now, I know I'm heavy." My mouth fell open she thought she was heavy, with my eyebrows raised I said shocked.
"Heavy, are you kidding, you weigh what 120 tops. Easy peasy" I sung one arm down and grabbed our bags. As I started walking, she started to complain more.
"Oh yes Mr. strong man, I think your internal scaled is a little off. I weight about 135, last time I checked. Put me down."
I sighed and placed her on the ground and kept my arm around her waist a little longer than necessary, I loved the feeling of her in my arms… I shouldn't think like that. This angel is far too beautiful to want a monster like me. I hope she didn't notice.
She bent down and picked up her bag, I touched my cheek wear she kissed it, it tingled.
Bella's pov
Uhh, what was I thinking, why did I kiss him. Even if it was just on the cheek, I need to get a hold of myself if I keep this up he'll know I like him. No Bella forget those feelings you don't have a chance with a guy like that, he's too beautiful. I can't deny though it felt good to be in his arms.
The rest of the walk to the car was in silence. We walked up the car and he ran ahead of me opening my door for me, "your carriage awaits milady, my I take your bag?"
"You may." I smiled and let out a small laugh, he is just all over the place. I waited until he got back into the car and asked him
"Do you think we could stop at my house really quick, I want to drop off my stuff and through my clothes in the dryer so I can give you your clothes back?"
"I don't mind you having my clothes but yes I'll give you a ride, we have time since we got let out of class."
"Yea the way that kid got hurt, does that happen a lot?"
"No actually I've never seen that happen before."
"Well that might happen a lot more now that I'm here. I'm the clumsiest person on the planet. No joke."
He raised an eyebrow at me, "I'm not kidding, I'm a giant bruise most of the time."
"Well that won't happen with me around, I'll catch you like I did today." I smiled at him, he's being really sweet.
Edward's pov
Oh man Edward can you be anymore obvious. That's so stupid, don't worry I'll catch you, I'm such a dweeb. Her smile is so beautiful though I could stare at her forever.
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Yay, my longest chapter yet. 3 ½ pages in word, sorry I took so long. READ AND REVIEW!!!
