Important Info:

Okay I realize it's short and I was a mean writer leaving a cliffy but jeez some one could at least reviewed and if you didn't like it at least tell me… So im now getting worried that it's no good but my plot line that I have think is really awesome so could you please give it a chance!!~!!

And if you think it's to disastrous please tell me so I can just stop although hi would really love it if you guys would give it a chance I mean seriously I thought it would be great.

But if you do like it and review for me to continue her is a little info that is need more the basic and stuff like DOB's and the date that it set in also keep in mind I'm not going to spoil the next chapter so when in the name category and it say's new character to come it's talking about the new character to come in chapter 2. Okay hope that wasn't to confusing…

* = that I used decimals instead of writing out ½ and ¼ so sorry if that bug you but it was just more convenient!!~!!

So there it is just in case and trust me it's important but if you maximum ride fans don't like it I can always change it a little and make it with the twilight characters……

So please review and tell if it sucks butt or if it's pretty good or at least a good start but also I just want to tell you that it gets much better if you ant me to continue!!!~!!!

Thanks a bunch, *hoping you'll give it a chance*

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Name:

Date of birth/ birthday

( keep in mind that max and fang made there's):

Current Age:

Maximum Ride

December 13th ,1992

16.5 years old*

Fang

April 13th , 1993

16.25 years old*(4 months younger than max)

Adam Sparks

December 18th, 1994

14.5 years old*

New character to come

December 16th, 1993

15.5 years old*