Okay well from what I got a few people liked it and that's enough for me but also far warning I had to redo the very beginning of this chapter b/c my zip drive had it up there and I completely lost it. No I take that back I seriously think it ran away it's like no were to be found.
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Title: Sacrifice
Chapter 2: The Mysterious Person
APOV( Adam's Point Of View):
I couldn't see anything , the bright sunlight blinded me just as, I'm sure, it did to Max. The only thing I could make out was a humanly shaped figure thrown in and chained up, just like Max and I. Finally they slammed the door shut again. As soon as my eye's adjusted the person I saw shocked me. I never thought I'd see her ever again and was sure she would never be caught, especially since she had such good control over her power. Something had to have gone wrong for her to lose her control or… she planned to get caught. But why? Their she was although she looked much older and more mature, know it was her. She still had that same bleach blond hair and her sparkling blue eyes, that's how I was sure it was her she also looked a lot like mom… Then she turned in my direction and gasped…
"So-Sophia" I stuttered
" A-Adam is that really you"
She said shocked obviously thinking I was dead from the accident. I don't know why they called it that it was no accident and yes I would know because I'm what made it not such an accident.
" Yeah Soph, is it really you?"
It was a stupid question but I still didn't believe that she was her. Don't get me wrong I love my sister just I didn't want our reunion to be in this type of situation. I was the only one she ever aloud to call her Soph. She hated it when someone else would try and call her that. She would like completely flip out on them, I have to admit sometimes it was actually funny. It really didn't bother her that I called her that I guess was because I'd always called her that ever since I started talking…
"Adam what happened I thought you were d-dead. I mean I went to yours and mom's funeral and everything." She said bringing me out of my thoughts.
"Yeah it's really me he in the flesh" I said halfheartedly trying to cheer her up from the sad subject.
" Wait did you just say my funeral I mean I know they had mom's body for evidence but they didn't have mine. So how could you have funeral for me with no real evidence that I didn't get away alive. Because if they actually had the evidence I wouldn't be here right now I'd be with mom were ever she is, which I'm sure is probably a whole lot better than this dump of a hummer!"
I know I shouldn't have said that I wish I was dead but it's the truth and I'd be with mom and wouldn't be going through all this but then again I wouldn't be able to help Sophia if that was the case now would I?
"It was closed casket, they said the accident was to horrible and you were to disoriented for an open casket. I guess that was just some lame excuse so their wouldn't be any questions about their not being a body in your casket. Oh my gosh it makes perfect since that's why the casket was locked when I tried to open it to see if you were really in their because I really couldn't believe it. All along there had been no body it was just a set up." She Finished her rant going off into deep thought.
" Obliviously because I'm her in the flesh me myself and I, Adam Anthony Sparks." I said trying my best to break her trance and of course it worked.
" Adam it's really you!?! Oh My Gosh I've missed you so much. How are you? Have they hurt you? I swear I'll kill them even if they just looked at you the wrong way…."
She suddenly stopped her rambling and turned toward max after hearing her shift her feet trying to get as comfortable as possible. Then she turned back to look at me with a confused expression on her face. So I decided that it would probably be best if I quickly explain she becomes very rude and questioning max like crazy. Hey What can I say my sister is very protective over me.
Oh I almost forgot. Sophia this is Maximum. Max this is my sister I told you about Sophia. Sophia, Maximum was kidnapped as well don't worry she's nice and on our side she hates these guys worse then you hate spiders. Were sort of friends although we only just started talking a few hours before well you arrived. She actually thought I was one of them until she noticed my chains and handcuffs." I said in a rush.
" Nice to meet you Sophia. But please call me max everyone calls me that." She said trying her best to be polite although I knew that politeness really wasn't in her nature.
" Well hey max, nice to meet you to unfortunately it has to be in this situation."
Giving up the evil act seeing she's a friend and could potentially help us. Also she was trying to ignore the way max's voice was kind of sketchy. Although I just meet max I sort of understood her at times like this. And why she acted the way she did. Sophia was back to being her usually cheery self well as cheery as you can get in our situation. I used to hate the way she was always so happy but then again she didn't take any b.s. either, but right now I'm so grateful to her it because I hadn't seen her in like forever. Which brought me back to my first question. Why was she her?
" Umm… Soph Why exactly are you here?" I said feeling bad that she had probably planned to get herself kidnapped so she could save me. Which would make me feel horribly guilty because there was no saving me but I decided not to tell her that so I wouldn't rain on her parade. because to me I didn't want her to even feel a centimeter of the way I feel like I already do alone-lost-sad(okay depressed I just hate that word)- guilty(because it's my fault I'm alone)-ashamed-frustrated-angry at just about everyone including myself-and in a way I kind of already feel dead inside in a way.(A/N: Well be explained later kind of a foreshadowing, I guess.) So you tell me would you would you want your older sister to feel as miserable as you did at this point. I don't think so and even if somebody would 1st your stupid and then 2nd I'm not you and I would rather die 1st. That is why my perspective is changing with only one plan in mind and that is to insure we escape so I can protect her from this misery.
" It's a really long story, Adam. That I don't want to talk about right now. Can it at least wait tell I get a little rest because I'm really exhausted."
"Sure but I must warn although you've probably already realized these aren't the most comfortable sleeping accommodations."
" That's okay I kind of figured but I don't think it really matters how uncomfortable I am because I'm probably equally exhausted if not more. It was a really long day, you know."
I didn't know but I decided it was okay to wait tell morning, because she really did look exhausted, so I didn't push it. With me not knowing what really had happened only mad me feel even more guilty because I wasn't there to protect her like I should have been. And just imaging what they put her through was enough to make me feel horrible because I knew what they had put me through and from what Max looked like they had hurt her in some kind of unimaginable pain. Max looked like she had been crying for days and she probably had. Which only made me feel even worse that I wasn't able to protect Sophia they way mo always tried to protect us. Although Sophia was my older sister I still felt it was my responsibility t o protect her no matter what, especially after what had happen to mom just because of my stupid ability's ……
So sorry if it's a little short but like I said I gave everyone a fair warning.
But also please don't kill me for the little cliffy I left also you want really get to know what happened to Adam and Sophia's mom until later chapters not the next, sorry.
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