Jessica: YAY!!! MORE REVIEWS!! And THANK YOU QUEEN OF SUGAR!! I'm SOOOOO glad that you liked that chapter, truth be told it's so far my favorite out of all the chapters so far. Don't worry 'bout Naru-chan, he'll still go to the Academy, after all he's not completely emotionless and wants to be surrounded by people his own age, not just older men and woman. Although, when he graduates the Academy, him and Mitsu-chan will both be lower Jounin level, but with Naruto slightly more powerful. I'm trying to give them both a fair amount of power, with their teachers and all and not give them both superpowers that make them invincible…of course with the Rinnegan, Mitsu-chan will be hard to defeat, and with Naruto learning all of his father's abilities, he'll be a speed demon making him hard to defeat also. These two will definitely be a good match for each, if I decide to pin them against each other some time soon. Also, to answer Game-girl209, Mitsukaiko is a girl, and girls usually have better chakra control then guys. Also, the Kyuubi half that Naruto got is more malevolent (though he's still protective) then the half in Mitsukaiko so for Naruto, it's a lot harder to control! Also, I completely agree, Jake is a bastard.
Jake: HEY!! I RESENT THAT AND I'M RIGHT HERE!!
Jessica: But he's still a friend, so at the same time pretty cool. You know how some friends get together but then realize it doesn't work out they break up and usually stop being friends, that's not Jake and I. We're still friends, but there's still the awkward moments, you know?
Alice: -ignores the two who are arguing- Wow, she usually doesn't talk that long unless it's at the end of story. Did she just give away some spoilers!!
Tiffany: -nods- I think she did…
Jessica: "She" is RIGHT here, idiots!!
Trevor: You made the demon angry…
Jessica: I am not angry…merely annoyed…ALSO, for those who have read my other story of TD, do you think I've matured? None of my friends think so, so we're hosting a bet…Though I HIGHLY doubt anyone will review and say I'm mature or not because of some bet…
Jake: Don't you have something else to tell them? –sitting on Jessica's bed with Miranda-
Miranda: Wait, I'm confused…do we just type what we say? And why is Jessica typing my questions?
Jessica: Yes, that is how we do it, and because it's fun! Oh yeah, thanks Jake! Um, I'm taking votes on pairings! Now, before anyone votes for Sasu/Mitsu, I have to say anyone else is acceptable because I already have someone in mind for Sasuke, AND IT'S NONE OF THE KONOHA GIRLS OR TEMARI, -winks- you'll soon see. Though if you want to, you can wait to vote, because I will be creating new OCs soon, but if you vote now, I will end the vote on the…lets make it the 20th chappie. Don't worry, if I plan this right, this story will be a few chapters ahead of my other TD, so yes, that's enough time. Don't forget, I may bring in a character or two from another anime or something, like KH…hell, considering my mind I'll probably bring a character from a book. –snickers- Bring Jacob from New Moon or something. No, I'm kidding on that part.
Alice: I got a question…
Jessica: Uh-huh?
Alice: Why are we making this chappie when you just published the other one today?
Jessica: …I'm an authoress demon who, when she gets an idea will start to type it, and won't stop until satisfied. However, that doesn't mean that's the only reason. I'm trying to get ahead of my chapters, so that way I can post them up every Sunday. Or Saturday. So yes, this chapter is being made on the 10th, but I won't post it till the 17th. Heck, once I finish this chapter, if I get more inspiration I'll start the next chapter. I have no school tomorrow, soooo, I have plenty of time to make the next THREE chapters, because right now I have plenty of inspiration and ideas. I'll also leave you on a cliffhanger on purpose, and start the next chapter where I left off, sometimes.
Miranda: Is she done? Does she do that often?
Jessica: -twitch-
Miranda: Uh…did I make her mad?
Jake: Nope, you just irritated her a little, though she won't do anything cuz your new…
Jessica: Jessica is going to annoy the couple on her bed and continue…Anyway, I've been listening to songs from my musical, and I have to say some of them are giving me the inspiration. Especially Stranger To The Rain. It's a good song, and if any of you have heard or seen Children of Eden you know what I'm talking about. For those who haven't…seriously, listen to some of the songs from the musical, they're good. Didn't I already say I was in this musical in the second chappie?
Alice: Yesh…
Jessica: Oh…Anyway, we'll have…Pein do the dissy!!
Everyone else but Jessica and Miranda: Oh GREEEEEAT.
Miranda: Who's Pein?
Jessica: You'll know soon enough! –portal appears and Pein steps out-
Pein: Dammit, I was hoping Itachi would be asked to do the dissy instead of me…
Jessica: Awww, you don't wuv us? –teary puppy dog eyes-
Pein: Uhhhh….
Miranda: O.O Did a portal seriously appear and a guy popped out?!
Jake: Yep.
Miranda: -passes out-
Jessica and Pein: -looks at Miranda and turns to Jake- Your girl is a wimp.
Jake: -eyes roll-
Pein: -to audience- Jessica does not own Naruto, KH, or anybody else except my niece, Mitsukaiko. Poor girl…
Jessica: Thank you, and please…-brings out rope- PLEASE stay for the story! –ties up Pein and Akatsuki members who try to rescue their leader-
Torn Destinies ~rewrite~
By: Jessica, co-written by Alice, and sometimes Jake
Started: 1-10-10
The Future
"Try again, mei (niece, and I'm thinking it's said like 'me' or 'may' idk), you're making this a lot more complicated then it seems." Scolded Pein to his niece as the said girl tried to complete one of the Rinnegan special abilities, controlling gravity. It was harder then it looked, though it sounded simple. However, speaking and doing are two completely different things.
As always, it was raining, which was appreciated by both orphans, as the rain clearly described their souls.
"I'm trying, uncle, but it is complicated, since gravity is unheard of to be controlled." Mitsukaiko sighed and relaxed, before opening her eyes, revealing the Rinnegan. Without using seals, Mitsukaiko concentrated on the gravity around her and then focused on pushing the gravity down making anyone except her and Pein fall down to the ground. Grinning, she looked at her uncle, and saw him nod. He usually didn't give much praise, but a nod was better than one any day.
"That's good enough on the gravity part. You must practice it on your own now. When you are able to control gravity decently, I will then show you some jutsu that will compliment nicely." The redheaded girl nodded, and stood up to face her uncle.
"What now, uncle?"
"Now…It's time for your taijutsu training. 400 of the usual, mei." Mitsukaiko nodded and started with the push ups. When she got to around 250, Pein smirked and snapped his fingers, making the twelve year old fall down. The redhead glared at the older redhead, making Pein smirk with a twinkle of amusement in his eyes.
"Dammit, did you have to increase my gravity weights in the middle of push ups?" sighing, Mitsukaiko started all over again, as she was supposed to restart her training all over again should she mess up.
"You know I only have your best interests in mind, mei." Mitsukaiko grumbled and hours later, taking longer than usual because of the doubled weight, she finally finished, panting. Pein shifted into an unusual stance, and standing up, Mitsukaiko mocked him. Their feet were spread apart, the left foor was in front of the right, and their arms made an X, with the right in front of the left, hands forming fists. Mitsukaiko made the first move, flashing directly to her uncle, and broke her X, using her right arm to make a back hand blow to Pein's face. He blocked it with his own right hand, and Mitsukaiko dropped to the ground and tried to kick his legs out from under him, however the man jumped up in the air. The redheaded girl smirked, predicting this and a shadow clone jumped out of hiding, and tried to kick Pein in the face. However, Pein counted this attack by doing a spinning, creating a rush of air around him and making the clone poof into oblivion. Mitsukaiko scowled, and backed off, deciding to take on the defense. Flashing through seal, she smirked.
"Mind Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique!" Pein however smirked, the genjutsu not affecting him in the least. Mitsukaiko cursed, that was her second best genjutsu, and her best hadn't been perfected yet. From the sidelines Deidara raised an eyebrow.
"I thought this was a taijutsu only spar, hmm?" it was a rhetorical question, since usually the two would use other techniques along with their taijutsu.
"You'll have to do better then that, mei." Mitsukaiko grumbled something along the lines of 'stupid sadist' but other than that, she said nothing and tensed as Pein charged at her. Mitsukaiko blocked the first punch, and kicked away the second. She got a hit in and back flipped away from her uncle, whose mouth was bleeding from the punch she aimed at him. "Hmm, not bad, that was the first time you hit me. Congratulations, mei." Suddenly Konan appeared, scowling.
"If you two are done, lunch is ready. Or do you two want to skip that too?" she asked, reminding them that they had not eaten breakfast. Suddenly Mitsukaiko and Pein's stomach growled, answering for them. The blue haired woman smirked. "Thought so, now come along you two." As they walked along behind the blue haired woman, Pein and Mitsukaiko continued on talking about strategies, using their taijutsu style.
"Our taijutsu, Hishou Kami (Soaring Spirit) focuses more of flexibility and defense, unlike most Taijutsu styles, which focus mostly on brute strength, and sometimes speed. However, that can cause some problems. Strength is no good if your opponent can dodge most stikes, and speed fails against the best defense. Our style is like the Hyuuga's Juuken, but at the same time they both are very different. Now, what you are doing wrong when you attacked me, is your focusing on just hitting me, which is not the point of our style. Our style allows us to have a high tolerance for pain, and at the same time be flexible enough to dodge most attacks."
"I know, but how am I supposed to beat you using defense?" Pein smiled at his niece and replied in a cool voice.
"Because, when your opponent is attacking you, you can keep on defending yourself until your opponent finally lets out an opening as they become more tired. That's when you strike with the Setsujoku Kamigami (roughly, Revenge of the Gods), which is the second part of our family style, the offensive part. I haven't taught you it yet, I want you to focus on defense for right now." Mitsukaiko nodded and the three had finally reached the kitchen, where everyone else was waiting.
"Hey, Mitsu-chan. Are you going to let out Amaya and Kyuubi today?" Kakuzu asked her and she nodded.
"I might as well, Amaya said she had something to teach me anyway." Itachi shook his head at her.
"You train to hard, Mitsu-chan, you need to take a break." Pein scowled.
"Yeah well, a break might not be acceptable right now with the Chunin Exams coming up in two months. I'm allowing Mitsukaiko-chan and her team in to the Exams, along with two others." Immediately, there was an uproar, except from Mitsukaiko who had known this was coming; after all she was the one who requested it.
"WHAT! You can't be serious, if you send Mitsukaiko back they'll recognize her and want her back! Not to mention Zabuza is a missing nin, they'll surely execute him!" shouted out several people at the same time. Pein glared at them all, succeeding in making everyone quiet down.
"No, not with a strong enough genjutsu they won't. As for Zabuza, another village can not attack another village's nin, unless they want to cause a war. Zabuza is now an Ame shinobi, which means they can't do a thing. Besides, if they do try to execute him, Kisame and Hidan will step in, won't you?" the two said nin just stared a their leader in disbelief, but nodded all the same. "Good…Now what's for lunch? Mitsu-chan and I both missed breakfast, we're starving!" the said redheaded girl grinned at her uncle as the food passed around.
"Guys, this is a good thing. After all, I'll get to prove my strength. The only bad thing is that Naruto is in Konoha, and if we meet up he might recognize me, genjutsu or not." Pein nodded, and after swallowing a bite of his food he replied.
"Ah, but that's the thing. He won't recognize you. The genjutsu I have in mind is one I created, not too long ago. Probably just before you got here, mei. It changes not only your looks, but your voice, which shouldn't be too much of a problem, and your smell. However, I couldn't find a way to change a chakra signature, so that will have to do. If Naruto thinks he feels Kyuubi chakra coming from you, just claim you are a Jinchuuriki of a different Bijuu. However, the Ichibi Jinchuuriki is probably entering, as I have heard from our spy network that Sound and Sand are planning an invasion of Konoha. I have also heard that Orochimaru is the Sound Kage." Everyone's, except Konan and Sasori's, eyes widened.
"WHAT!" everyone, except Zetsu and the two who knew, yelled.
"How is that possible? That bastard probably took the title by force! I say we go to sound and rip off his please don't finish that sentence. Ladies are present." The darker half of Zetsu grumbled, while the light side rolled his eye.
"We still have use of Konoha, so we can not let this happen." Pein interjected, muttering, though everyone heard him, he added, "No matter how much I want the place to burn to the ground…"
"All right, so my mission is: enter the Exams, pass, and protect Konoha, correcto?" Mitsukaiko asked, grinning. Maybe she'd see Sasuke again.
"Yes, but try to make it seem as if your Chunin level, and not higher. Because we can't deactivate our Rinnegan, and it will show through any genjutsu, I want you to wear shades." Mitsukaiko nodded and as she finished eating, she downed the glass of milk in front of her and stood up.
"Well in that case, I should train more if I'm going up against Orochirape!" Pein stared at her sternly.
"No. You are not to face Orochira…I mean Orochimaru. I want you to just focus on defeating as many sand and sound ninja as you can. Is that clear? Leave Orochimaru to the Hokage and me." Pein sent a smirk at his niece as she gawked.
"Wait, you're going to-"
"Does that surprise you? After all, if a village's ninja get to the third round they are required to come and see them fight. To see how they fare against the other genin. Of course, I already know you'll do quite fine." With that, the discussion was over and Pein left in a lightning strike. Mitsukaiko shrugged and waved to her friends.
"Well see ya guys later. I'm going to go and get Amaya and Kyuu-chan out. She said she had two things to give me, and a move to teach. Oh…joy." She said with as little joy as possible. You see, not only did she have Kyuubi sealed inside her, but she had a guardian…spirit, or demon. Amaya liked to be called a guardian demon, as she said angels were too stuck up. Anyway, Amaya was a panther demon, but her and Kyuubi tended to always…fight. When she was in the personal Akatsuki training grounds, she flashed through some signs and suddenly two beings were in the area with her.
One was a male, who had wild red hair with black at the tips, blood red eyes, two back kitsune ears instead of human ears, and nine red tails swishing behind him. He was wearing red pants and a skin tight black tee. The second one to appear was a woman who had wavy black hair and midnight blue eyes. She had two black panther ears and she had only one black tail, but was still as strong as Kyuubi. She was wearing a black kimono with a dark blue obi, and there were blue panthers on the kimono. They were both also bare footed, something about demons hated covering their feet and making them slower, or something.
"For the last fucking time, I am a PANTHER, dog." Mitsukaiko sighed, but was expecting it. She winced as she prepared for the torture to come. Pein was a sweet, innocent little angel and went easy on her compared to the two demons training.
"I'll start calling you a panther when you prove it, kitty litter! Everyone has seen me transform into a mighty fox, but as far as anyone else knows, YOU could be a cat pretending to be a panther!"
"Uh…guys?" Mitsukaiko tried to break in, but the two ignored her, which annoyed the redheaded girl.
"YOU WANT PROOF? I'LL SHOW YOU KAMI DAMNED PROOF, DOG!!!" with that, the woman transformed into a semi-large panther, which was all black, and her eyes now a glowing yellow. Not to mention her larger teeth and how she was large in size. Kyuubi gulped and ran for his life around the training grounds. Mitsukaiko, despite wanting to get her training started, couldn't help it and started laughing, as did the other Akatsuki members, who had gone out to the training grounds to see what the ruckus was. Since they had already met the two and befriended the two great demons, they weren't scared to laugh at the comical scene. Then they heard Amaya speak.
"HOW'S THIS FOR TRANSFORMATION YA DAMN FUCKING DOG!! I'M A PANTHER, SEE, SEE!! A FUCKING HUGE GIANT ASS PANTHER THAT CAN EAT YOU WHOLE!!!" Mitsukaiko laughed some more as Kyuubi made a girly scream. Deidara fell onto his side, laughing and out of breath.
Itachi, who was also chuckling, turned to Mitsukaiko, "Maybe someone should stop them before Amaya eats Kyuubi, Mitsu-chan?" the young girl nodded and fell down laughing after Amaya said something else that made Kyuubi scream another girly scream. She crawled to the wall and tried pulling herself up, but she was laughing too hard.
"-THEN I'M GONNA SLOWLY CUT OFF WHAT MAKES YOU A MAN WITH A FUCKING RUSTY SPORK!! THEN I'LL STUFF IT ALL DOWN YOUR FUCKING THROAT AND THEN I'LL CUT YOUR TAILS OFF AND STRANGLE YOU WITH THEM, KYUUBI!!!" Mitsukaiko, laughing, knew she had to stop this fight before Amaya did what she promised. She slowly got up laughing, using Itachi, and stood, before laughing hard again as Kyuubi made another girly scream. She slowly walked to them, laughing and shouted out to them making them stop, and also making them start blushing.
"Ok, ya two lovebirds. Stop planning your honeymoon and get over here!" this made the two blush even more and Amaya went to her human form. The two demons glared at her and Mitsukaiko nervously sweat dropped, while Kisame, Deidara, and Hidan snickered. She glared at them and they innocently whistled. "Amaya, you need anger management issues… Kyuu-chan," to which the Akatsuki started to snicker at, "You need to learn how to scream like a dude." Once again, there was laughter but it stopped after Kyuubi glared at them all. The Akatsuki and Mitsukaiko sweat dropped as he stuck his tongue out and went to a corner of the training grounds, after saying one more thing.
"You're just jealous I'm beautiful!" Amaya coughed slightly and straightened, hiding her smirk which everyone could still clearly see.
"Fine, since you're so…anxious to get started, first things first…you have no weapon. But today, we're going to fix that." The demoness held out her hand and a warm light surrounded her hand, and suddenly two long whips appeared and Mitsukaiko's eyes widened. The whips themselves were pure black, but the handles were the color of a dull blood color. "They are made of the toughest material, and are very flexible, which will make it an ideal weapon to use with your taijutsu style. As you can see, they are smooth, but if you want to REALLY strike pain into your opponent, focus your chakra into the whips and sharp thorns will appear. These thorns are durable, and will never break. However, they will dull, so in order to sharpen them just send MY Youkai into the whips, they will sharpen themselves. However, it takes time, so make sure they are sharp before you go into any battle." As Amaya focused chakra through the whips, crimson thorns appeared, growing out of the black whips. "They also match your theme colors. Nice, eh?" Mitsukaiko nodded and Amaya handed them to her. "Should you ever find yourself in a sticky situation though, like you're tied up or something like that, you can make the whips come ALIVE by sending chakra into them. But that is for later. I want you to train with them, and learn to incorporate them into your style. Ok? Now, I'll give you the other item after I teach you how to transform." Everyone's eyes widened considerably.
"Transform? You mean into a fox?" Amaya grumbled at Mitsukaiko's question.
"If you want to, then yes. However, if you let me finish, you'll know that you can transform into ONLY three things, of all different sizes, every time. Since you're a human, you can transform into three different species. Since Kyuubi is a canine demon, and I'm a feline demon, we can only transform into our primary transformation and two others. My main transformation is a panther, and the other two are tiger and leopard. Kyuubi-baka's main transformation is, obviously, a fox, but his other two are wolf and dingo…Which, technically IS a wild DOG."
"You wanna fight, kitty litter?!" growled Kyuubi. Amaya glared at him.
"Bring it, dog breath! However, I would like to finish teaching the cub first."
"Last time, she's a kit!"
"Cub!"
"Kit!" Mitsukaiko sighed helplessly and looked at her family and friends.
"SHUT UP!! Amaya, Kyuubi can call me kit, since that's what fox children are. However, panther children are called cubs, so if Amaya wants to call me cub, she can! Any questions?" the two demons blushed and shook their heads. "Good, now how do I do this transformation?"
"First, which animals do you want to be transformed into?" the demoness asked the pre-teen.
"I've already thought of them. Sorry, Kyuu-chan, but I'm going to go with eagle, because their wings are strong and their vision is best at seeing from up high, a shark, because they are strong swimmers and can attack in the water, and my last one is a jaguar because they are strong fighters, even more so than the tiger, despite the tiger being larger." Kyuubi made an indignant noise and turned away from her, crossing his arms. Amaya jumped, pumping her fist into the air.
"Ok, pick the animal you want to transform into first, and after that we'll go onto the second thing I want to give you." After Mitsukaiko picked the eagle to be her first choice, Amaya nodded. "Ok, cub, picture the animal in your mind, picture and keep it there. I want you to focus on the picture, but now push chakra into your limbs, getting them ready for the transformation. Now, while still focusing on the picture, take some of Kyuubi's chakra and surround your body with it. Now focus, and picture yourself changing from a human into an eagle. FOCUS." It took a few PAINFUL tries, but suddenly the redheaded girl found herself suddenly shorter, and her body tingling, not only from the pain but from the sensation of having a new body. Mitsukaiko opened her eyes, revealing now intense, golden orbs that stared in confusion. As she went to talk, a screech from her beak, which she noticed she had. "Cub, in order to talk, you'll need to think what you want to say. It's a lot easier and safer, that way only certain people hear you." Mitsukaiko nodded and sighed, which was a sight to see for the Akatsuki.
"Um…Can anybody here? Anybody at all?" there were nods, as she directed her thought to the two demons and Akatsuki. The redhead grinned in her mind. "Cool! I wanna try flying!" despite Amaya's protests, which Mitsukaiko argued against, the young girl ruffled her feathers and opened her large and magnificent wings. Flapping them, her efforts speeding up slowly, and finally she got off the ground. "Woohoo! This is fun!" she giggled and swooped down, then up, doing twists and turns and all that stuff. Finally, she came back down in fifteen minutes, after hearing Amaya scold her for taking her time when she needs to learn one more thing. Right now, it was a little after one, since not much time had gone by.
"To transform back, just do the same thing you did before, careful not to end up with feathers for skin, or a beak for a nose and mouth. I've seen that happen once, to my last charge. He wanted to be a monkey. I had a bit of a laugh when he ended up with a tail after he tried to transform back and was hairy all over! Oh, good times, good times…Anyway, so yeah, FOCUS. I can not state how important that is. Now, go." Mitsukaiko did, a little scared by Amaya's story, and focused like her life depended on it. "Good job, you didn't screw up! Now…this final object, could cost you your life." After everyone heard that they paled but Amaya laughed it off. "Eh, more than not, he's already had dinner, don't sweat!" Mitsukaiko glared at her and Amaya sweat dropped. "ANYWAY, I have a contract for you to be able to summon a creature that people have only heard about in myths. It summons an ancient race: the Shadow People, a race of special demons. However, you will try to summon Akanara, the heir of the clan. (Evil Shadow) He's not really evil, he just likes to scare the shit outta people. Here, why don't you summon him to meet him." she gave Mitsukaiko a scroll and had her sign it with blood. Mitsukaiko did so, noticing how few names there were on the scroll. "Akunara is very picky of his summoners. I know he'll like you, though." Mitsukaiko nodded and done the correct hand signs.
"Summoning Jutsu: Akunara!" a big cloud appeared and a…a black human shaped creature appeared. The said creature had blood red eyes, long claws, and pointy ears and fangs. He stood still, looking over everyone before finally speaking.
"Hmm. Amaya, why have you summoned me here? Are you gonna let me have a little…feast?" Amaya laughed as the Akatsuki, including Itachi since he didn't know this bloodthirsty demon, tensed.
"I am not the one who has summoned you, Akunara." she pointed at the young redhead and not objecting to the feast part.
"Yeah, it was me who summoned you." the shadow laughed.
"You're nothing but a brat, brat." Mitsukaiko growled, ready to protest, when Akunara interrupted and continued. "Fine, if you can fight me and survive for ten minutes, I will agree to be your summon." The redhead nodded, eyes glaring with anticipation and determination.
"You got yourself a new summoner…" normally the young girl wasn't cocky, but the shadow just pissed her off. Akunara charged at her and she dodged, however he went INTO the wall, making Mitsukaiko look all around. Finally, in another wall, Akunara appeared and threw a shadowy kunai at her and she threw one her own, only to see the shadow kunai go right through her own. Shadowy lines tangled up her body, tying her down. Surprised, the redhead smirked, as her whips fell out of her sleeves. "Take this!" struggling with effort, she was able to send chakra down the whips, letting them come alive. Laughing, Akunara just stood there as the whips come toward him…and went through him. Mitsukaiko stood there-what else could she do- shocked, but not really surprises since he was a shadow and so far, nothing seemed to be able to touch him. She growled, narrowing her eyes, as suddenly Akunara rushed at her and went through her. The girl gasped; her body felt terribly cold, it felt as if her soul had frozen. Akunara smirked and went to knock her out. However, Mitsukaiko wouldn't give up. Forcing chakra through her body, she was able to move, and able to dodge the kunai aiming for her neck, and instead it moved toward her arm. She gritted her teeth as the kunai punctured the flesh, but she didn't yell out. Taking it out, she flung it to the ground. Just as Akunara rushed toward her again, she dodged and moved back.
'Mother FUCKER! Solid things can't touch him, they go right through him. My whips couldn't touch him, he goes through and into walls. He's a FUCKING SHADOW FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!! Wait…a shadow…shadow…! That's IT!" she made some hand signs and smirked.
"Time for the sun to come out and play…Sun Blast: First Realease!" a ball of white light appeared in her hand, growing bigger and bigger, brighter and brighter, finally, she threw it at him, putting a tracking jutsu on it. The shadow dodged, but the jutsu followed him. "That should keep him busy for the last six minutes. "she thought, with a smirk as she leaned on her knees, panting. That jutsu had taken a lot out of her.However, the jutsu kept the shadow man bust for two more minutes, obviously not what she was hoping. Akunara, feared by many, feared few things himself, but of all those few things, light was the worst possible fate for a shadow. He ran around, trying to dodge it, but the ball of light wouldn't stop following him, getting him pissed off by the second. He had to give the girl credit. While fire could barely hurt him, light could. As light is the opposite of dark, and a shadow IS a dark entity. He finally had enough. Focusing some magic toward the ground, he said;
"Sea of Nightmares arise from thy ground and wash away thine enemy." a black wave of darkness erupted from the ground, washing over the ball of light, and destroying it, and once gone the wave left behind a slight evil residue on the ground. Mitsukaiko glared, trying to come up with more plans, but so far not having any luck.
"Nice jutsu sweetie, but it looks like I destroyed it. Now to knock you out under 3 minutes…" the redhead gritted her teeth. No way in hell was she going to be knocked out and lose! She jumped away from Akunara and decided to think some more.
"The fucking hell! This mother fucking dude is unstoppable! Dammit, new strategy. He destroys my most powerful light jutsu like it was nothing. What could he fear? Shadows…What do I know about them? People hardly know anything about the Shadow People, except that they say they are demons…hmm…maybe earth could…no, solid…water? No…maybe, I could try to distract him? Shadow Clones could work…might as well try it." because the jutsu is so familiar, she could create clones without the hand sign and saying it. Ten clones appeared beside her and ran around Akunara.
"Which one, which one? Which clone is the real one?" they all shouted. Suddenly Kisame could be heard saying, "I HATE it when she does that!" everyone except Akunara and Mitsukaiko smirked, both too involved in the battle. Akunara turned around and growled.
"Damn, I can't tell which is the real one. I don't even USE chakra…" he thought. He shrugged. He'll just reuse his Sea of Nightmares and then he'll see which is the real one. Just as he was about to say the words, a bell rang out.
"Time's up! Akunara, she stayed in the battle for as long as 15 minutes." said Amaya, which shocked Akunara and angered Mitsukaiko.
"FIFTEEN MINUTES! NO WAY IN HELL! YOU SAID-" a mouth covered her hand and she looked up to see Itachi.
"No use getting yourself killed over this." he told her. She huffed and walked away.
"Anyway, deal's a deal, ya stupid shadow!" she said. Akunara smirked.
"Got guts, I see that. All right brat. I'll be your summon. Maybe we can battle again sometime when you're stronger." The young girl smirked and shook hands with him.
"It's a deal bastard." Akunara smirked and disappeared in a poof of black clouds. Amaya stared at her shocked.
"Not one of his summoners has he allowed to call him anything other then Akunara-sama. Including me! I knew he would like you!" Mitsukaiko glared at her friend, making the demoness sweat drop. "Um…Akanara says ten minutes, but the real test is fifteen minutes. Saying ten minutes gets his opponent to drop their guard if they have survived for that long and he can knock them out easier that way. There has been only one person Akanara has killed in the test, and that person had severely pissed him off. Here's a piece of advise: Don't insult his family, he's the next in line for the crown in the demon realm." Mitsukaiko looked at her friend confused.
"Demon realm? Don't you mean summoning realm?" the black panther demoness shook her head.
"Nope! Summons are actually demons, though minor." At the confused looks she got except from Kyuubi, she sighed and explained: "There are three classes of demons, and subclasses of those three. The three classes are: Minor, being the lowest rank and able to be defeated by a Chunin at least, Greater, being of a mid-level and able to be defeated by Anbu and Kage levels, and the last is the Legendry, which contain only the Bijuu and two others. These can not be defeated by any human…well, unless you seal them into something." Amaya sweat dropped as Kyuubi growled and stuck his tongue at the panther. "SO immature…"
Meanwhile, while she was talking, Deidara, Hidan, Tobi, Kisame, and Mitsukaiko had gotten together and were whispering about how the two demons should just get together. However, due to their extraordinary senses, the two demons heard them and sent a fire Youkai jutsu (courtesy of Kyuubi) and a shadow Youkai jutsu (courtesy of Amaya) at them, making them scream in surprise at the low, but still painful attacks.
"Brats…" the two great demons said at the same time, making the humans who weren't trying to put out the fire that the two jutsus caused sweat drop.
"Anyway, for the minor demons you have five Subclasses, the head honcho, King, Queen, or boss, whatever you wanna call them; the next in line, or heir; the Commander; the soldiers; and the…well…civilians if you wanna call them that. The soldiers have a ranking system like you ninjas, but a little more powerful. The next class, the Greater demons, they have only two Subclasses: the head demon, the boss summons are greater demons; and the second subclass is the soldiers. Ok, I see you're confused on how that works. You see, on your summons, you have the boss, the most powerful of the summon, and the rest. The Boss is a greater demon, and the second powerful summon is a minor demon boss. It keeps going like this. A summon has an unlimited amount of summons, but you usually only call out four or five of the summons, depending on who you are, but really there is a whole army you can summon if you have the chakra or Youkai for it." The panther shrugged and flopped down. "Train with those three things, well…maybe you should grab something for Akanaru when you summon him just to train. He hates wasting his time on 'trivial' things, as he said to me once." She sighed and poofed into smoke, followed by Kyuubi. Mitsukaiko sighed, and looked at her friends/family.
"Anyone know how to use a whip?" Hidan got a perverted look o his face and Deidara snickered at the face and question. Glaring, she flung the whip at them, making it snap at them. "NOT THAT WAY YOU PERVS!!!" frowning, she glanced at the whips she had flung. "I meant to hit you…How hard can it be to use a whip. Just flick and swing."
"It's not that simple, all weapons have a certain way to be mastered, whether or not it's supposed to be easy to use them." Kisame scolded and Konan nodded, agreeing.
"Every weapon has its own way of doing things, and the user must learn how to work in sync, or he will never accomplish anything." The blue haired woman advised, and her niece nodded.
"All right, I'll train with them and in two months I'll be good enough with them." Her family and friends all nodded.
"Are you going to go show Xion, Axel, Haku, and Roxas? They're probably waiting for you at the fountain." Deidara asked her and she nodded.
"Oh yeah, oops! I gotta go, they're gonna be mad for sure! I'll be back for supper!" with that she dashed away, running towards the town square, where her friends were waiting impatiently.
Behind the Scenes:
"Wait a minute! Why are we being dragged in?" asked a confused Roxas. Jessica grinned.
"Because, frankly…when I finished 385/2 Days all those weeks ago, I was beyond pissed, and felt that you three deserved better! Not to mention you guys rock!" she explained, not really answering the blonde's question.
Axel sighed and straightened up, uncrossing his arms. "She kidnapped us for her little movie/story because we're some pretty awesome characters and she wanted us in her story."
"Oh, I see!" smiled Xion and Mitsukaiko grinned, but Sam frowned.
"Can we continue rehearsing please? We're not finished!"
"Take a chill pill, dill!" Tiffany said and tipped his chair back, making the young 'director' fall. As he went to get up, Jessica grabbed some tape.
"You're not going anywhere, and to shut you up…" needless to say…the three from KH now knew not to piss of Jessica.
Jessica: Yes! I was severely pissed off at the game for the STUPID ending. I CRIED…TWICE!! OMFHH, I was like, "WHAT THE HELL! THEY CAN'T DO THAT!!! FORGET SORA, ROXAS DESERVES HAPPINESS TOO!!!" Seriously, Xion, Axel, and Roxas are my favorite characters in that entire game and the ending sucked. For those who have played and defeated the game, you know what I'm talking about unless you like Sora. I mean, Sora iand them are cool, but playing from Roxas's POV, and playing as him throughout the whole time, you got an insight to see what the three were like, and that they are human, not nobodies. Demyx rox too! XD But yeah…I HATE the ending…And I will forever rant about this, and I will complain to the game directors…Not really because I'd probably get killed but…
Alice: WE GET IT!! YOU HATE THE ENDING!!
Miranda: Um…I agree with Jessica, actually…
Jessica: Wait…I thought you didn't know what anime was, or stuff like that.
Miranda: I don't…but one of my friends plays that game and I watched her play it. The ending was sad.
Alice: -_-''''
Jake: Wow…my ex and my girlfriend are getting along…
Sam: That's…not good. You do know what exes and girlfriends talk about when alone, right? YOU.
Jake: …You're trying to get me worked up…
Sam: Whatever…Anyway, enough of that, Jessica has another thing to say, didn't you?
Jessica: -blinks for a few times before remembering- OH YESH! I'm trying hard as hell not to make Naruto and Mitsukaiko into super powered beings, but at the same time get them powerful enough for what's coming. Akanara, yes, IS a needed character. As for the whips…Naruto, fem Narutos, twins of Naruto, they usually either get a sword, or a spear, or even a bow. (I might consider that weapon also, but maybe not). However, in all the time I have read a fanfiction, not once, have I seen anyone using a whip for a weapon. And for Mitsukaiko's attitude, it fits her perfectly. She's is fiery, hot tempered, cold, calculating, and sadistic. (that side hasn't shown yet, lol, but it will when she fights Naruto). Of course, I'm trying not to make her a Mary-sue either, which I don't think she is. Anyway, so yeah…Her transformations are also important (reasons will be shown later) but right now…they aren't. However, I wanted them to be up and out of the way so I wouldn't forget to write that she learned transformation and later write she transformed into a wolf, when people didn't know she had that power. As for the gravity thing, I read somewhere that the Rinnegan allows to 'revive' a body and use it for your own (Mitsukaiko won't be learning this technique, and in my story not even Pein/Nagato knows it), can repel all and any genjutsu, create any type of jutsu (note the Sun Blast Mitsukaiko did earlier using a light type of chakra, more powerful than fire), able to perfect taijutsu to an amazing degree (thus, the Rinnegan control over ninjutsu, genjutsu, and taijutsu) and able to use all 6 types of chakra easily. I heard somewhere that the 6th type is gravity, though I may be wrong. It's an interesting possibility though. As for light and darkness, let's say they are chakra types too, but not of the required 6 chakra types, thus harder for any to learn. See, I HAVE matured and gotten smarter!
Alice: We see that but we won't admit anything.
Jessica: -twitch- You have five seconds to run.
Alice: I'm gonna run now! AHHHHHH!
Jessica: GET BACK HERE!!!
Sam: They'll be back. Anyway, please review. It makes Jessica calm down and be a little more sane. If you don't review, Jessica gets sad and emo…like Sasugay.
Sakuke: -glares and beats him to a living pulp-
Sam: U…Uncle….