Thanks for the reveiws guys if you did! I love getting reveiws so far they've only been about grammar so I'm doing well!!!!!
Happy Thanksgiving
I will try to use better grammar. I've been editing the first chapter and second so I haven't had time to write.
Edpov
I walked into the hotel room and quickly shut the door and set down my few bags on the bed. I reached down into my pocket and got out my little Iphone. Then scrolled down to my email Renee sent what looked like an apologie letter. I started to read,
Edward,
I so sorry I didn't tell you sooner I wanted you to know, but I couldn't put it into words. I really wish you would come back. I know I should have told you, and I want you to come back until its born. Also how's Forks I hear some of the girls are quite the gems.
Hurry up and forgive me.
I emailed Renee and told her that Charlie was fine. That I hadn't started school yet so I hadn't met any girls. I didn't mention anything about her pleas for me to go back or that I was stuck in New york for a week.
I got in the shower to get ready for the . Charlie would love the passes. Maybe later on in the year he and I could come back for another game.
About 30 minutes later I was ready to go. I walked down into the lobby. Then walked out into the cold. I was so glad I put on a jacket before I left. I got into the nearest cab. The driver asked to where was I headed I answered I was going to Yankee stadium.
AlPOV
" Bella don't you love the clothes we bought" Rose asked Bella. " Yeah They're great Rosalie" Bella answered. In truth Bella, Rose, and I were the best of friends, she just never showed a liking of shopping. We had just dropped off the outfits we bought and gotten into the taxi. It was really crowded in here with the family and all.
I looked into Jaspers eyes. They still were golden a sign he still hasn't given up on the life Carisile designed. That was one of the many things I loved about him.
BPOV
The drive to the game was short. I was next to Esme. Who was still quitely talking to Carisile. I was the first one out. Carisile payed the driver and got out after me. I got my pass out as I got closer to the gate entrance. I showed the man at the gate my pass and walked on towards my row. The others followed after me. I soon found my seat it was in the very middle. I sat down and Emmet sat next to me and put a hat on my head.
Bells you need to support the team dude the hat proves your not a Red soxs' fan. Emmet thought. I looked up and saw a man who looked about my age sit down next to me.
" Hi I'm Edward Swan" He said I tried to hear his thoughts about me but, I just couldn't. " Hi I'm Bella and this is my brother Emmet" I told Edward.
If you reveiw this chapter I'll give you a short sneek peek of the next chapter
Also Una the anonymous reviewer can you please keep your opinions to yourself I'm trying to keep the peace on both sides but I can some what agree with what you wrote but its rude to the Jacob lovers and i'm Edward lover.
