Making Love in the City of Sin
This one-shot story tells the tale of Bella and Edward making love for the first time. It is a "what might have been" story, as it is an offshoot from my story "My Beautiful Angel." This tale picks up at the end of Chapter 13. Instead of Edward rebuffing Bella's advances as he does in my story, here she is able to convince him to advance their relationship. I hope you enjoy this alternate tale of what could have been.
The backstory is the Cullen's have gone to Las Vegas to celebrate the end of Bella's newborn year…
The next night, the Cullen's split up, with the men going their own way and the women doing the same. Alice and Rosalie invited Bella to a club they had heard good things about. As they approached the building, Bella noticed the long line of people waiting to get in. To her surprise, Rosalie seductively whispered something to the bouncer, and they were immediately allowed in without waiting.
As they entered the club, Bella was taken aback by the atmosphere. The loud music, the dim lights, and it did not slip her notice that there were half-naked dancers both men and women all over the club dancing on top of the tables. Bella laughed "Really. A strip club Alice." Alice just gave her a mischievous grin and they were led to a table in front of the large stage.
With drinks in front of all of them Bella settled in and decided to enjoy herself as this was certainly a new experience for her. Bella's eyes darted around the room, taking in the sights. There were men and women dancing on tables, wearing nothing but their underwear. Bella could not help but to shamelessly stare at the dancers.
The atmosphere was infectious, and Bella soon found herself laughing and joking with Alice and Rosalie. It was then that Alice quietly paid for a lap dance for Bella. Bella's eyes widened as she looked at Alice, feeling a mixture of excitement and nervousness. "I don't know, Alice. I don't think Edward would like it if he found out," she said hesitantly.
Rosalie laughed. "Who cares what Edward thinks? He's not here. And besides, it's just a little harmless fun."
Bella looked at the dancers, wondering who to choose. She knew if Edward saw some naked guy grinding on her through Rosalie or Alice's thoughts he would blow his top, so she decided on a woman. She scanned the room, looking for someone who caught her eye. Finally, she settled on a tall blonde voluptuous woman who had been dancing on the stage.
As the topless woman approached Bella in a seductive manner, Bella felt a tinge of nervousness. She had never been touched by another woman before, let alone had a lap dance. The dancer slowly circled her hips around Bella's lap, brushing her fingers across Bella's thighs as she did. Bella could feel the warmth emanating from the woman's skin and the scent of her perfume filled the air.
As the dance progressed, the dancer's movements became more intense, her body pressing against Bella's with each gyration. Bella's breathing became shallow and ragged as she felt a strange sensation in her stomach. She had never been attracted to women, but the way this dancer moved was driving her wild.
As the dancer continued to grind against her, Bella felt her arousal growing stronger and stronger. The woman's body was smooth and soft against hers, and the way she moved was like nothing Bella had ever experienced before. She could feel herself getting wet as the dancer's hands roamed over her body. As the music reached a crescendo, the dancer suddenly leaned in close to Bella's ear and whispered, "Do you want more?" Bella nodded eagerly, unable to form words as the woman's breath tickled her neck. The dancer then pressed Bella's hands to her own breasts, and the sensation of the woman's nipples hardening under her touch was almost too much for Bella to handle. She let out a low moan as the dancer moved faster, grinding harder against her. The dancer was now rocking her core against Bella's at a furious pace. Bella's body was on fire, and she could feel her orgasm building. She closed her eyes and let out a loud gasp as she came hard, her body shaking uncontrollably with pleasure. As the dance ended, Bella was left breathless and dizzy with desire. She looked up at the dancer, feeling a mix of awe and gratitude for the incredible experience she had just had.
When the dance ended, Bella's body was buzzing with pleasure and she struggled to catch her breath. She looked over at Alice and Rosalie, both of whom seemed just as shocked and amazed as she was. "That was...wow," Bella breathed, still trying to process what had just happened. Alice and Rosalie nodded in agreement, clearly still speechless. Bella could feel her body tingling all over, the memory of the dancer's touch still fresh in her mind. Suddenly, a thought hit her like a bolt of lightning. "I need Edward now! Let's go," Bella exclaimed, urgency in her voice. She had never felt this kind of desire before, and she knew that only Edward could satisfy it. Alice and Rosalie exchanged a look before nodding, understanding the gravity of the situation. They quickly gathered their things and made their way out of the club, with Bella leading the way.
Bella's relationship with Edward had been stuck in a rut lately. Edward had always refused Bella's advances, first claiming she was too fragile as a human, and now insisting they needed to get married first. After her lap dance at the club, she was the horniest she had ever been and couldn't stop thinking about it. As they left the club, Bella's mind was consumed with the desire to recreate the experience for Edward. If she gave Edward an erotic dance as good as the one she received, Edward's objections were sure to fall by the wayside.
When they got back to the hotel, Bella couldn't stop thanking Alice and Rosalie for the amazing and crazy night they had given her. She felt so grateful for the experience, as it had opened up a whole new world of pleasure and desire for her. She hugged both of them tightly and asked them to wish her luck. Finally, Bella made her way to her room to find Edward. She felt both excited and nervous as she approached him, wondering how he would react to her newfound desire. She found him reading on the sofa and greeted him with a warm smile, "Hey, how was your night?" she asked.
Edward looked a bit uncomfortable and hesitated before responding, "Emmett and Jasper took me to a strip club."
Bella felt hopeful thinking maybe Edward had gotten a similar lap dance and was now as ready as she was. "Oh, did you have fun?"
"No self-respecting woman should take off her clothes for money," Edward said, looking a little disgusted. "I refused to go in and waited in the car."
Bella's hopes began to plummet, but she decided to give it one more shot. "What if it was me dancing for you, Edward? Would you like that?" Bella started to sway her hips in a seductive manner, similar to the girl who had given her that amazing lap dance. She reached Edward and straddled his hips and started moving slowly against him.
As Bella slowly rocked her body against Edwards he looked like he was going to shoot her down yet again but Bella refused to let that happen. With a burst of determination, she leaned in and kissed him with all the passion she could muster.
At first, Edward's body remained still and his lips were unresponsive. But slowly, he began to relax and his body started to respond to Bella's touch. She took this as a sign to continue, and hesitantly opened her mouth, swiping her tongue over Edward's lips, hoping he would reciprocate.
Finally, Edward's lips opened, and Bella felt his tongue touch hers. It was a sensation that she had never felt before, and she loved the way it made her feel. Their tongues danced in a sensual rhythm, exploring each other's mouths as they made out on the sofa.
Bella reveled in this new side of Edward, the way he passionately returned her kisses was making her crave him even more. As she continued to rock her center against his, she could feel a good-sized bulge pressing against her, and it only added to her desire for him. The longing she felt was almost painful, and she knew that she couldn't hold back any longer.
As their kiss deepened, Bella's hands moved down to Edward's pants, unbuttoning them and deftly unzipping the zipper. Edward made a move, as if trying to get her to stop, but Bella was too lost in the moment to notice. She kissed him harder, feeling his arousal growing with every passing moment.
Finally, Bella broke the kiss and looked into Edward's eyes. The desperation in her eyes was clear, as she whispered, "I need you so bad, Edward. I want to make love with you. Our first time should be right here, right now in this beautiful room. Please, Edward, I need you."
Edward's fear was evident in his expression, but he slowly nodded and smiled at Bella, giving her the go-ahead. Bella was overjoyed, she couldn't wait any longer. She slowly slid down Edward's body until she was on her knees in front of him, her eyes locked onto his.
With a look of anticipation, she slowly took hold of the sides of Edward's pants and pulled them down, revealing the quite noticeable bulge in his boxer shorts. She looked up at Edward and smiled, loving the way he responded to her touch. He still had a deer in the headlights look, but it was clear that he was into it.
As Bella gazed upon his body, she realized that she had never seen a naked man before. The thought made her giddy with anticipation and she could feel the heat between her thighs growing more intense. She couldn't wait to explore every inch of his body and show him how much she desired him.
As Bella reached for the waistband of Edward's boxers, Edward's fear was evident in his expression, but he slowly nodded and smiled at Bella, giving her the go-ahead.
With a sense of excitement and wonder, Bella carefully pulled down Edward's boxers, revealing his long, straight penis. She marveled at the sight of it, admiring its smooth texture and perfectly formed head. As she looked at it, she estimated that it was about 7 inches long and had a shape that somewhat resembled a long hot dog. Although lacking in girth, it was perfect, and as it stood fully erect, it seemed like it was calling out to her, begging to be touched and explored.
Bella's fingers wrapped around Edward's hard length, feeling the warmth and smoothness of his skin. She hesitated for a moment, unsure of what to do next. Though she was a virgin, she knew that she wanted to explore every inch of him and give him as much pleasure as she could.
As she began to move her hand down his length, she marveled at the way he responded to her touch. His body quivered with pleasure, and she could feel the heat building between them.
But then, to her surprise, Edward's body suddenly jerked, and she could feel his penis twitching in her hand. She looked down just in time to see a large glob of semen shoot out and hit her on the shoulder. Before she could react, another long ribbon of semen spurted out of his penis, landing in a long line in her hair and going down her face. She closed her eyes for a second as the sticky fluid trickled down her skin.
Bella looked at Edward and could see the embarrassment etched all over his face. She knew he was mortified, but she also knew that this was only a small bump in the road of their sexual exploration together. Bella reached out and gently took Edward's hand, giving it a reassuring squeeze.
"It's okay, Edward," she said softly. "Really, it is. We're both new to this, and mistakes happen. And it's not like it's the end of the world or anything."
Edward looked up at her, his expression one of disbelief. "But I...I just...I can't believe I did that," he stammered.
Bella smiled gently. "Hey, it's okay. Like I said, we're new to this. We'll figure it out together. And if nothing else, at least we know that you're...um...capable."
Edward looked down at his now wilted penis and he groaned. Bella sat next to him, wrapping one arm around his shoulders.
"Listen to me," she said firmly, lifting his chin so he was looking at her again. "We have all the time in the world to figure this out. And honestly, Edward, I couldn't be happier that I get to figure it out with you. So let's just take it slow, okay? We'll explore each other's bodies, and we'll make mistakes, but we'll also learn and grow together. And I promise you, we'll get right in the end."
Edward looked up at her, a small smile creeping onto his face. "Thank you, Bella," he said softly.
Bella leaned in to kiss Edward but he quickly said "Bella before we do anything else, could you clean your face up? That long stream of ejaculate hanging down your face is quite distracting," Edward said in a worried tone, gesturing towards her face.
Bella couldn't help but burst out laughing. She had fantasized about having sex with Edward so many times, but somehow, this situation had never presented itself in her mind.
As Edward watched Bella clean herself up next to him, he couldn't help but feel a little embarrassed. He never imagined that he would end up ejaculating all over her face, "I'm sorry Bella. I didn't mean for it to be like this," he said, feeling a little dejected.
Bella turned towards Edward, her face now wiped clean, and gave him a reassuring smile. "It's alright, Edward. We're both exploring our bodies and discovering new things about ourselves. We can't be perfect all the time."
Edward nodded, feeling a little more at ease with Bella's comforting words. "I understand. Thank you for being so understanding."
"It's not a problem Edward," Bella said as she hugged him tightly. "Now that we are intimately involved, let's loosen up our terminology a bit. How about we call this little guy a cock or even Edward Jr. if you like?" She lightly placed her hand on Edward's now soft penis, making him shiver with pleasure.
Edward let out a chuckle, feeling more comfortable and relaxed in Bella's embrace. "I don't mind either, Bella. It's nice to let go of all the formalities," he said, enjoying the sensation of her touch.
"And all that semen I just wiped off my face is cum," Bella continued, gazing into Edward's eyes and noticing his reaction. "Don't worry, Edward. You'll soon be intimately acquainted with my pussy too."
Edward felt a nervous energy at Bella's words, but he couldn't help but smile at her teasing. "I'll try my best, Bella. It's a little overwhelming being naked in front of you, to be honest," he said, still feeling a bit self-conscious.
Bella couldn't resist a playful smirk. "Don't worry, Edward. You're doing just fine," she said, giving him a reassuring squeeze. "And I have to admit, you really surprised me with that facial. Who knew you were into that kind of thing!"
Edward looked mortified again "No Bella. I would never…."
Bella chuckled and cut off Edward's mortified response. "Relax, Edward. I was just teasing you. We both need to get comfortable with our bodies, and now that I've seen yours, it's only fair that you get to see mine," she said, her tone light and playful.
With that, Bella pulled off her shirt, revealing her lacy red bra. Edward stared at her chest with wide eyes, transfixed by the sight of her breasts. Bella couldn't help but feel a sense of satisfaction as she watched his reaction. She unhooked her bra slowly, savoring the anticipation of revealing herself to Edward for the first time.
As her breasts slipped free from the confines of her bra, Bella felt a rush of freedom. She had never been topless like this in front of anyone since she became an adult, and it felt empowering especially with her new vampire body. Her breasts were the perfect size for her body, neither too big nor too small. They had a natural, perky shape that made them look almost weightless.
Bella glanced at Edward and saw that he was still staring at her chest, his eyes dark with desire. She felt a surge of arousal at the thought of his hunger for her.
As she looked at Edward, she noticed he seemed to be salivating. Bella took this as a good sign, and decided to encourage him further. "Please do something here, Edward," she teased. "I'm topless and ready for some action. I promise not to shoot milk in your face when you touch them," she joked, recalling Edward's embarrassing premature release. Bella laughed to herself, knowing she had to keep that story to herself. She didn't want to embarrass Edward any more than he already was.
As Edward's hand slid onto her plump breasts, Bella let out a sigh of relief. The sensation of his delicate yet strong hands was sending waves of pleasure throughout her body, and she found herself craving more. She couldn't wait for Edward to take her nipples into his mouth and suck on them, sending shivers down her spine.
"Please, Edward," she breathed, "suck on them. I want to feel everything with you."
Edward's lips curved into a smile as he leaned forward, taking Bella's right nipple into his mouth. He started to suckle slowly, his tongue flicking across the hardened nub. Bella's breath hitched as she felt the intense sensation coursing through her, making her body quiver with desire.
With a sense of excitment, Edward moved to her left breast and continued his ministrations, his hand gently kneading her right breast at the same time. Bella was completely lost in desire, her mind consumed by the pleasure she was feeling. Every touch, every stroke, sent her higher and higher, until she was teetering on the edge of ecstasy. As she looked down, she couldn't help but smile when she noticed his cock had miraculously recovered. Vampires must have an incredible recovery time, she thought, feeling a surge of excitement. She was so turned on now that she knew exactly what she wanted, and she couldn't wait for Edward to give it to her.
"I see that Edward Jr. is ready for another go. Now I want to have some fun with him, so please try not to blast me immediately again," she said with a mischievous smile.
Edward seemed much more relaxed and eager now, quickly settling back onto the sofa and gazing expectantly at Bella. She knelt down before him, her gaze fixed intently on his cock. This time, instead of touching it like before, she leaned in slowly and brought her lips to his dickhead, as if she was going to kiss it.
She took a deep breath and leaned in, her lips hovering over the tip of his member. Her desire to feel him was mind boggling as she pressed her lips against his head, feeling the softness of his skin against her mouth.
As she slowly opened her mouth, Bella's eyes never left Edward's face. She wanted to see the pleasure that he was feeling as she took him inside her mouth. The sensation of his penis sliding inside her mouth was incredible, and she couldn't help but moan softly as she tasted him for the first time.
As she continued to glide her mouth down his length, Bella couldn't help but fantasize about the sheer eroticism of taking Edward entirely into her mouth and moved her mouth swiftly down his shaft. However, just as Edward's member reached the back of her throat, an unexpected gag reflex overwhelmed her, causing her to nearly bite down in surprise.
Bella quickly recoiled, her coughs resonating through the room while she sat on her knees in front of him. Edward's face twisted in concern, his hand instinctively moving to protect his sensitive area. Little did Bella know, her unintentional nip had caused him a slight moment of discomfort, but he masked it well. He didn't want to burst the bubble of their intimate moment with an awkward revelation that she almost bit it off.
"Are you alright, Bella?" Edward asked with genuine concern, his right hand still discreetly covering his still hard penis. Bella raised a finger, signaling that she couldn't speak at the moment. Edward leaned forward, unsure of how to handle the situation, and awkwardly began to rub her back with his left hand. He realized he had no experience dealing with such a predicament - what was the protocol when a woman choked on his... well, you know.
After a few more moments, Bella finally managed to speak. "Sorry about that. I thought that was what I was supposed to do, you know, based on the small snippets of porn I had watched when I was human," she confessed, a hint of embarrassment in her words. "The girls in the videos seemed to like doing that. I guess it's different in real life. Are you okay?"
Edward reassured her with a gentle smile. "I'm fine, Bella," he replied, his eyes sparkling with amusement. He couldn't help but feel a surge of excitement as he watched Bella, topless and engaging in this awkward conversation.
Bella wanted to try again as there was no way in hell she was ending her night on a note like that. "Sit back on the sofa, Edward. Let me try that again. I'll be more careful this time."
Edward settled back onto the sofa as Bella positioned herself in front of him. Taking a deep breath, she started by gently stroking the base of his shaft with her hand, her touch sending shivers of pleasure through him. With a playful wink directed at Edward, she then wrapped her lips around the head of his penis, her gaze locked with his. Slowly, she began moving her head up and down, giving him a blowjob for the very first time.
Bella's body hummed with pleasure as Edward's dick slid in and out of her mouth. She loved the way it felt, the way it tasted. She couldn't help but think about how different it would have felt if she was still human, but she quickly dismissed the thought. She was grateful for this moment with Edward, for being able to experience this with him and she knew Edward would never have done this if she was still human. As Bella's speed increased, she decided to take things further. She gently cupped Edward's balls in her hand, lifting and rolling them around. Edward moaned in pleasure, his body stiffening as he approached his climax. Bella knew what was coming and was ready for it this time. When Edward started to cum, she kept her mouth tightly sealed around him, feeling his release hit the back of her throat. The taste was unlike anything she had ever experienced, and she found herself enjoying it immensely. Finally, when Edward's orgasm had subsided, Bella slowly pulled her mouth back, allowing his dick to slip out with a pop. She gazed up at Edward, a seductive smile on her lips as she savored the taste of him on her tongue.
"Wow, that was amazing," Bella said, beaming at Edward, who was now sporting a contented smile. "See, I told you practice makes perfect."
"You were right," Edward said, still lost in the afterglow of their shared experience. "I feel so much more comfortable now."
"I'm thrilled to hear that," Bella said, moving closer to Edward. "And now, I want you to return the favor. Shall we make our way to the bedroom?"
Edward's smile widened at her suggestion. "Lead the way," he said, taking her hand and following her eagerly.
Edward POV
As Bella's words washed over him, Edward felt a surge of excitement run through his body. Despite his reservations about taking their relationship further without being married, he couldn't deny that he wanted more of what they had been up to. Bella had always argued with him when it came to intimacy. When she came back to their hotel room tonight he had no idea that this would be the result. Then there was the incident with his accidental release on her face. He had been mortified, certain that it was the end of their relationship. But Bella had surprised him by not only brushing it off but also going on to give him even more pleasure than he had ever experienced before.
As Bella stood up, she extended her hand towards Edward, who took it willingly as she led him towards the bedroom. Once they arrived, Bella looked over at Edward and then glanced down at his now-soft penis.
"I think you should lose the rest of your clothes, Edward. You won't need them tonight," she said, smiling deviously.
Edward couldn't help but feel a rush of excitement at Bella's words. She was still topless, and Edward couldn't deny that she was the most beautiful woman he had ever seen. He quickly took off his shirt, now completely naked.
Despite feeling a bit nervous about being with Bella without clothes on, Edward couldn't deny that he was enjoying himself immensely.
Bella climbed onto the bed and met Edward's gaze. "Why don't you finish removing my clothes, Edward," she said, with a seductive grin.
Edward knelt down at the foot of the bed and unbuttoned Bella's jeans, pulling them down her shapely legs with care. As he looked up at her, he couldn't help but feel a sense of awe at the sight before him. Bella was a goddess, and she looked even more stunning in only her underwear. He gazed at her red lacy underwear and hesitated for a moment, wondering if he was really ready for this.
Taking a deep breath, Edward pulled down her underwear, revealing Bella's naked form to him. He was struck by the sheer perfection before him, unable to tear his gaze away. Every inch of her body seemed flawlessly crafted, a work of art that left him in awe.
Her long brown hair cascaded around her, framing her face like a halo. The soft strands fell in gentle waves, accentuating her delicate features. Her eyes sparkled with a mixture of anticipation and desire, drawing him deeper into her captivating gaze.
As his eyes traveled down, he couldn't help but marvel at the exquisite curvature of her neck and collarbone. Each graceful line seemed to be carved with precision, inviting his touch. The gentle rise and fall of her chest showcased the allure of her breasts, perfectly shaped and begging to be explored further. Her nipples, already hardened and pointy from their earlier endeavors, beckoned to him like an irresistible invitation, as if they were calling out to be suckled again.
His gaze continued its descent, tracing the contours of her toned stomach with admiration. The gentle curves and defined muscles spoke of her dedication to physical fitness, adding to the allure of her form. He could barely resist the urge to run his fingers lightly across her smooth skin.
And then, his gaze reached her most intimate region. It was a sight that took his breath away. Bella was completely bare. It was evident that she had shaved before becoming a vampire, and Edward couldn't help but feel a surge of desire. Her delicate slit looked enticing, beckoning him to explore it more fully. The mere thought of what he was about to do made him feel light-headed. He had never desired Bella as intensely as he did in that very moment, as he stared at her spread out before him.
As Bella beckoned him closer with her hand, Edward couldn't resist any longer. He moved closer to her, his mouth close to her ear, and whispered, "You are so beautiful, Bella. I can't wait to explore every inch of your body." Bella shivered at his words, and Edward knew that he had made the right decision by following her lead.
Edward had always been intrigued by Bella's body, and now that he was finally able to explore her in this intimate way, he was both excited and nervous. He leaned in closer to her, taking in the sight of her womanhood up close. This was the first naked female he had seen up close, and he was amazed by Bella's beauty and the way her thighs trembled with anticipation.
With a deep breath, Edward lowered his head and swiped his tongue along the length of Bella's slick slit. The sound of her loud moan sent a jolt of desire through his body. He knew that she must want the same attention he had received from her.
As he continued to explore her with his tongue, Edward felt a growing urge to part her tight folds and delve deeper inside her. He could feel Bella's knees clamping around his head, locking him into place so he could not pull away.
With newfound confidence, Edward directed his full attention to Bella's pleasure. He gently parted her knees with his hands, positioning himself to have a perfect view of her face as he indulged in licking and sucking with increasing intensity. As he witnessed her ecstatic reactions, thrashing on the bed, the sounds of her loud moans and the sight of her writhing body only fueled his determination to continue, to bring her ever closer to the edge of ecstasy.
Finally, Bella let out a loud cry, begging him not to stop. She warned him that she was about to climax and pleaded for him to suck harder. Edward redoubled his efforts, determined to bring her to the heights of pleasure.
And then it happened. Bella let out a scream, arching her back and her body shaking uncontrollably as she climaxed. Edward felt a surge of pride and satisfaction as he watched her come undone, knowing that he had been the one to bring her to this incredible release. It was a moment he would never forget.
Edward felt Bella pulling him up, urging him to lie beside her. He did, and she wrapped her arms around him, hugging him tightly. "That was incredible, Edward. I can't believe how amazing that felt. Thank you so much," she said breathlessly.
With Bella's head resting on his bare chest, Edward felt a sense of relief that he had been able to satisfy her in such a way. He wrapped his arms around her, holding her close, as they lay there in the aftermath of their passion.
They stayed like that for several minutes, basking in the warmth of their closeness, their bodies entwined in a post-orgasmic haze. Finally, Edward leaned down and pressed a soft kiss to Bella's forehead. "I love you," he whispered. Bella lifted her head and smiled up at him. "I love you too," she said, before snuggling back down into his embrace.
Bella POV
After experiencing the most mind-blowing orgasm, Bella was completely contented, lying in the arms of Edward, naked and snuggled into his muscular body. The feeling of their skin touching each other sent a shiver down her spine. As much as she loved being in his embrace, Bella knew that the night was far from over. She wanted to make love to Edward, to feel him inside her and to explore each other's bodies completely.
Bella opened her eyes and gazed down at their naked bodies. She noticed that Edward was fully aroused once again, his cock standing tall and proud, begging to be inside her. She couldn't take her eyes off him; he was all she wanted at that moment. She leaned in closer to him, pressing her body against his, and whispered, "Edward, I want you to make love to me. Take me for the first time."
"Are you ready now, Bella?" Edward's voice was low and husky, his eyes dark with desire. Bella nodded eagerly and shifted to the center of the bed, lying back with a smile on her face as she spread her legs wide.
Watching as Edward sat up and positioned himself between her legs, Bella's could not stand the anticipation. She gazed at him, her eyes glued to the impressive sight of his hard cock so close to her pussy. All she wanted was to feel him move forward and become one with her.
As Edward moved forward, his cock met the tight entrance of Bella's pussy, and she gasped at the sensation. Slowly, inch by inch, he penetrated her, and Bella felt a wave of pleasure and relief wash over her. Though there was some initial resistance, Edward persisted, pushing through until he was fully seated inside her.
As Bella watched, her body flooded with an indescribable happiness. Her joy was momentarily interrupted as Edward broke through her hymen, but the pain quickly subsided, replaced by a growing sense of pleasure and fulfillment.
Bella's gaze drifted down, taking in the sight of Edward's cock buried deep inside her. The connection of their pubic regions was a visual that excited her beyond belief. "Okay, Edward," she gasped, her body pulsing with pleasure. "You can move now." She clung to his shoulders, her eyes fixed on his as he began to thrust in and out of her. The sight of his muscles tensing with each movement was mesmerizing. The sensation of being penetrated by him was overwhelming, and she craved more.
As Edward moved faster and harder, Bella's moans grew louder and more urgent. She wrapped her legs tightly around his waist, pulling him in deeper with each thrust. The friction between their bodies grew hotter and more intense, and Bella loved the sound of their bodies coming together with each thrust. Edward leaned down and captured Bella's lips with his own, kissing her deeply as he continued to drive into her. She responded with equal fervor, her hands roaming over his body, exploring every inch of his muscular frame.
As Edward picked up the pace, Bella met him with her own wild and passionate thrusts. The rhythm between them was intense, and Bella knew she needed to take control. Without warning, she flipped Edward onto his back, eagerly anticipating the new position. With his muscular physique sprawled out before her, she felt a sense of power and excitement surge through her body.
She straddled his waist, positioning herself over his throbbing erection, and began to move with a fierce intensity. The sensation of him filling her up, combined with the sight of his chiseled torso beneath her, sent her over the edge.
As she rode him harder and harder, her breasts bounced up and down with the rocking of her hips. She cried out to the heavens, her voice echoing through the room as she approached the peak of ecstasy.
"Edward," she moaned, "I'm coming! Come with me!"
As her orgasm approached, Bella's movements became more frenzied. She was lost in a sea of pleasure, her body moving in sync with Edward's. The sensations were too much to bear, and she screamed out as she came harder than she ever had before.
With each wave of pleasure, her body convulsed in ecstasy. She could feel Edward's cum shooting deep inside her, intensifying her orgasm even more. Her movements slowed as she rode out the intense waves of pleasure, savoring every moment.
Finally, she collapsed onto Edward's chest, her body still trembling from the intensity of her orgasm. She knew that she had just experienced something truly incredible. For a moment, they lay there together, lost in the afterglow of their passion.
"That was amazing Edward. Thank you for making our first time so special," Bella said, breathing heavily.
"No, thank you, Bella," Edward said, hugging her as they both came down from their high. "That was truly an unforgettable experience. I have to admit, I was initially hesitant to give in to your advances, but now I realize how wrong I was. I'm so glad you showed me the way."
With that, they snuggled in bed, enjoying the warmth of their love.
Now, that is what would have happened that night, with just a few changes in Bella's and Edward's actions. If their night had ended this way, I still don't think they would have stayed together long-term. Bella had changed too much from the girl who had fallen in love with Edward when she was human. Although they certainly loved each other, their differences would have become more apparent as time passed, and neither of them would have been happy in the long run.
I believe that making love like this would have greatly benefited Edward, as it would have opened him up to love and new possibilities much sooner than it happened later on in my story. If you enjoyed this short one-shot, I think you would love the story it was spun off from, "My Beautiful Angel," which focuses on Bella's life right after her transformation into a vampire and roughly the first 7 years of her vampire life.
In that tale, Bella doesn't end up with Edward, but he isn't portrayed as a bad guy. Their relationship just didn't work out, and Bella goes on to have an amazing and fulfilling life. She attends college, pursues her dreams, and eventually finds her mate in Garrett who is a perfect match for her in every way. Edward, too, finds love and eventually gets married, which is told in another story I'm currently writing.