hey guys ive decided to keep the story going!
BTW I DO NOT OWN ANY CHARACTERS (yet) IT ALL BELONGS TO JAMES PATTERSON (although the computer program idea was mine)
i know the last chapter was mega uber corny n... well ull see...
also sorry for the 2 year wait . i kinda ent been on much... but its going to have the newer stories incorperated into it.
CHAPTER 2 Fang POV
Now im 16 im looking at the world in a whole new light... IRRITATING... I shut the computer down after looking at the thing i made before THAT happened... it almost brought tears to my eyes ALMOST but it didnt...
its only been a year since i left the flock, but still i cant help shake the feeling of missing Max. if only things had worked out like that kiss. but i guess that was kinda impossible... i know i was supposed to make some kind of new flock or something but my mind keeps going back to Max and HIM, the start of everything. PERFECT MATE MY ASS! why cant it just be the way i want for once! My life was so bad. I want her back, but its too late. Maximum Ride holds grudges and what i done was unforgivable... a note? why did i only leave a note?
Max... she's probably somewhere with Dylan right now, laughing about what an idiot i was to have given her up. to have left her behind.
Angel POV
I'm allowed to miss Fang right? even thought it was mostly my fault he left? Max hasn't reacted hardly at all to his dissapearance even though today is Total and Akira's 1st anniversary. she smiles and then sighs. i dont read her mind anymore. i dont want it to be confirmed... that she doesn't care.
Angel, sweetheart this is only a step to bringing Max down. be patient.
SHUT UP! I can't take it anymore! this stupid voice inside my head! it's been there since i was kidnapped. it's the thing that has made me act the way i have.
Max changed. I'm not sure if it was good or not. she didn't just seem to not care about fang but she didn't look at me anymore. noone else noticed but Max hates me. I know it. i just want my mum back. i want max back. If noone else is going to do anything i will!
im going to find him... find Fang.
Well there you go and if you hadnt realised Chapter one never really happened... it was a type of virtual program Fang had created around the time between book 4 and 5... i know this might seem odd but it gives a better base for writing the story.
after 5 reviews i might post another chapter but it might take a while cuz im in the middle of exams...