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Our heroes continue their journey as they head to the next gym,but they seem a little too tired...

-heads drooping-

May: I'm tired...

Max: I'm hungry...

Ash: I'm tired and hungry

Brock: -checking map- Fortree city is 10 miles from here

May,Max,and Ash: uuuugggghhh!!!

Brock: There's a hotel a mile from here

May and Ash:aaawwwuuuggghhh!!!

May: -looking ahead- Hey! a milotic!

May and Ash in unison: I call it!

-both race of as Max,Brock,and Pikachu sweatdrop-

Brock: I thought they were tired o.o

Max: I guess not

Brock: Those two seem like a couple :/

May: They practically are, I mean May does LIKE Ash

Pikachu: Pika pika?(how do you know?)

Brock: Yea! how do you know?

Max: I read her diary when she was at that contest in mauville

-Brock and Pikachu sweatdrop hoping for something else-

-to Ash and May-

-while running-

May: No way Ash Ketchum I saw it first!

Ash: So? I called it first!

May: No! I did!

Ash: I did!

May: I did!

Ash: I did!

May: I did!

-Ash crashes into a tree-

May: -laughing- are you ok? XD

Ash: owwww! my nose! hawhaw...very funny!

-May gets all stiff-

May: uh A-Ash th-theres a ar-ariados b-behind you!

Ash: -frightened- -turns around- WAAAUUUGGHH!!!

May:aaahhh

-both take off fast-

-Ariados shoots web and wraps around May-

May: Aaassshh!!!

What will happen next? Stay Tuned to find out :O review please!