Sorry I haven't uploaded until now :( I had tons of school work(no kidding my backpack weighed 50lbs :O) and i had a family vacation until Saturday so yea busy busy busy life. At least in my free time I managed to write 2 or 3 chapters while I had some free time(at night) so enjoy :D review plox D:

Chapter 2

Ash: Maaaaay!

-Ash runs after Ariados and May-

-Ash grabs May and holds on tight-

Ash: I gotcha May!

-May opens her eyes and looks up at Ash-

-Ash struggles to free May when Brock, Max, and the yellow furball comes running-

Ash: Pikachu use thunderbolt!

Pikachu: Chuuuuuuuu!

-Ariados gets zapped-

Ariados:Dooosssss!

-Ariados lets go of web and scurries away into the forbidding woods-

-electricity travels down web towards May and Ash-

Ash and May: D:

-both sit there burnt and twitching-

Ash: Not the rescue I had in mind-twitch-

-May jumps into ashes arms and starts to cry-

May:Thank you ash! Thank you...

Ash:-in a little shock- its ok May, its ok.

End of chapter 2
:D

Pikachu: a yellow furball?

Me: uuuuhhhhh...

Me: Torchic told me to do it :O

Torchic: -eating a icecream- wah?

Pikachu: pikkaaaaa...

Me: O no...

-camera zooms to outside my house by window-

-no noise sparks flying everywhere-