And that was the story! As I said in the summary, it's crap. So I'm honestly not expecting any reviews of any kinds. I wrote the story Apparently around 2005 at forum under the username of 'Kogome'. I posted the parts seperately and they were much worse then this. I've slightly edited them (i.e. added some spaces and grouped the chatting sequences together) but nothing more. I didn't learn til sometime later that this type of fanfic is referred to as a 'script' fanfic. In other words it's written like the lines an actor would read off of in a movie/tv show. It was the easiest thing I knew how to write at that point and time and it was before I knew much about fanfics let alone any form of writing. In 2007 though when I was 16 going on 17 I got into poetry and my interest in writing really picked up and since then I've been grabbing my older stories like this one and have been re-writing them from scratched keeping the basic plotlines in tact. I know write songs for my apiring career as a singer and draw and of course write fanfics. This is my first yet not so first story on here since my originals were removed sometime ago when my account was hacked into. Anyways, review if you desire, a remake is on its' way along with various others! I look back at this story with nostalgia of old friends on that site from my starter years online and laugh at myself for how I wrote this crazy yet hilarious thing and hwo it makes almost no sense what-so-ever! LOL
peace out! ~BC