Ryoma's Crush
A.N: Thanks for the reviews haha even though I updated the next chapter the next day ^^. Anyways, can you guys tell me if she sounds like a mary sue? I can't really tell sometimes so yea it will help a lot :D.
Disclaimer: I do not own prince of tenniss
"Talking"
thoughts
Flash back
Oc info:
Name: Nikawa Rin
Age: 12
Year: 1st
Hair color: Black
Eye color: purple
Style: depends
Personality: nice, sweet, caring, can be mean sometimes
Talent: playing the flute and gutair
Skills: ok at sports, good at music, is a pretty good cook
Height: 5'1
Chapter 2
Normal P.O.V
"Lets start packing" Ryoma said, Rin looked up and nods.
"Okay Ryo-kun but what should I bring?"
"Well, whatever you want to bring to Japan, remember we aren't coming back here" Ryoma told her.
"Okay" Rin said and stood up streching,"Do I need to bring blankets, pillows?"
"Yea, you should have enough suit cases"
"Okay" Rin stood up and grabbed a suit case and then went over to her room, she walked in and turned around,"Ryo-kun can you go into my bathroom and put my brushes and stuff in there?" Ryoma nodded and walked in. Rin walked in her room and went to her dresser, She put in all her clothes except, one pair of panties, a bra, some short shorts, and a tank top. She then went over to her closest and put in some of those outfits. (A.N. the suit cases are big like really big xD) Then she went by her bed and sat down, she looked at her night stand. There on top of it was a picture of her parents. Mom dad i'm going to Japan with Ryo-kun and his family. Hopefully everything will be alright, love ya guys a ton. She put the picture in the suit case nicely, then she looked around and tapped her foot on the ground softly. Ryoma walked in with all the bathroom stuff in it.
"I only left your toothbrush and paste in there, oh and one brush" Ryoma said and looked over to where the picture of her parents used to be," Don't forget to bring shoes Rin-chan" Rin looked up and face palmed her forehead.
"How can I forget that!" She walked over to the shoes and left out a pair of black flip flops, then she put in her dress shoes, tennis shoes, and a few more pairs of flip flops. She stood up and looked over to the corner, She had her flute and guitar there,"Do you think I can bring both?" She asked him. She turned around and saw him nod a yes. "Yay!" She yelled with a smile before putting the flute in another suit case. She yawned quietly and fell on her bed. Ryoma was sitting on the side and smirked.
"Is the baby tired now?" Ryoma asked in a teasing voice.
"Nooooo" She pouted and closed her eyes,"Your the bab-" She fell asleep. He covered her up and stood up, then he went and grabbed a pillow and blanket before laying down on the couch. Well Rin-chan, your a true baby, falling alseep like that... but it was cute, really cute...wait! bad thought ryoma get it out. He fell asleep.
The next morning Rin's alarm clock went off. Beep...beep...beep! She woke up and sat up yawning while streching. She turned to the alarm clock and shut it off. Then she stood up and walked over to the suit cases with the bathroom stuff and tooked out the shampoo, conditner, and body wash. She ten grabbed her clothes she left out and walked over to Ryoma. She started to shake him a little.
"Ryoma wake up" She said. Ryoma turned his back to her and snuggled up to the blanket, "Ryomaaaaa wake uppppppp" Rin said shaking him more. Ryoma grabbed her hand in his sleep and pulled her closer to him. Her face heats up as he pulled her on top of him,"R-ryo-kun please wake up" She said with a big blush as she tries to get up.
Ryoma starts to wake up slowly and felt pressure on his body, he opened his eyes to see Rin-chan on him, He saw that her face was red.
"Rin-chan what are you doing?" He mumbled while rubbing his eyes.
"Y-you pulled me on you w-when I tried to wake you up" She said with a blush.
"Oh"
He smiled and let her go before she stood up.
"I-I'll be taking a shower" She said before running to the bathroom with a blush. She shut the door and turned on the water. Her hand went in the water and she sivered,"W-way to cold" She turned it warmer and smiled before locking the door and taking off her clothes. She stepped in the shower and hummed softly while getting her hair wet and putting shampoo in her hair. After a minute or so she rinsed the shampoo off and put in the conditiner. She then started washing her body, After she finished washing her body she rinsed off the body wash and conditner. She stepped out of the shower and opened up a cabnet and grabbed a towl. She started to dry herself off. After she dried herself she put on the panties and bra. She plugged in the dryer and sat it down on the sink. She then put on her blue jean short shorts. Next she turned on the dryer and dried her hair, After the hair was fully dried she put on her red tank top. It was perfect on her, not to tight, but it wasn't loose. She walked out of the bathroom and looked at Ryoma. He was fully dressed and had his shoes on.
"Ready? My mom and dad should be here soon" He said while looking at her. Wow she sure is cute... bad thought Ryoma! She walked in her bed room and put on the black flip flops, then she walked into the bathroom and brushed her hair, her black hair was fully straighten and it was to her mid back. She then brushed her teeth. She walked out and put her dirty close in a paper bag before putting it in the suit case. Rin looked up after putting the bathroom stuff to hear knocking on the door, she opened it and saw Nanjiro and Rinko.
"Morning" She said brightly and let them in,"I just have to put my blanket and pillow in the suit case and grab my guirtar" She told them before walking in the room and did as she said. She walked out and dragged the three suit cases with her. Nanjiro picked up them and put then in there car, then he walked in and saw her guitar swung on her shoulder. (you know like the guitar case?) When Ryoma walked out they went in the car and drove to the airport.
When they got there they went to the right airplane and got on, after a few minutes the flight attendent said, "Please buckle your seat belts we are about to leave to Japan" They did as they were told, then the plane lifted and they were in the sky. Rin looked out the window and smiled softly Good bye old life, hello new life, lets hope everything goes well...
Bad? good? ok? To much info? to less? spelled names wrong? Please review I would love to hear what you think of the story, also please remember to tell me if she sounds like a mary sue thank you ^^
