Thanks for the reviews. I am mainly commiting to this story, so if you read my others, I probably won't update on them for a short while. And now I'll respond to a few reviews.
Elmethea-alright, i'll add that Faust Wyrd in at one point in the second part. And no, he didn't literally blow up the east coast. Well, you know how Percy caused mt. st. helens to erupt just cause he lost control? Imagine if Annabeth had died... he would have gone completely berserk. I want chad to be at least 2 or 3 times as powerful as the average demititan. So, the way I think it was that he basically sucked up the majority of San francisco into a wormhole type thing.
Sssssserpenssossiaa- Don't worry... He won't die (Maybe Yet ;) ). It wouldn't fit too well with what I have planned.
Wacko12- This story will involve more of the primordial gods, definitely.
And here we go.
"What!" I managed to sputter out through my lips that felt like they couldn't work. My heart was racing a million miles a minute and I could barely stand, so I just let my legs go out and I crumpled onto the floor.
Jackie just stood there with tears streaming down her face. "I just... d-don't know... I've f-felt this w-way for a while... since I-I met you..." She cried with tears leaking into her mouth. "I g-guess I liked you, e-ever since I met y-you. I guess I s-should have e-expected that y-you wouldn't-t have f-felt the s-same w-way-"
I cut her off by placing my lips against hers. All my anger suddenly just... faded out of me. I didn't know what I was doing but all I knew when I kissed her, was that it felt right. It was like we were made for each other. Our lips molded together, and I kept my eyes open, and enjoyed it while it lasted.
All that registered on her face at first was shock, then confusion, then a dazed expression. Her lips started to hold their own against my own and moved together.
After another few seconds, which felt like an eternity in heaven, I broke off the kiss, and wiped away her tears that were still sitting on her cheeks, and hanging on her jaw. I softly kissed her black hair and brought my lips to her cheek, and placed a small gentle kiss there, too.
With her eyes open, I could see that her eyes feflected pure happiness, and the tiniest bit of confusion. I leaned into her ear, brushing her hair away from it, and whispered, "I do love you. I always have, and I'm shocked that you didn't see it. I thought I was horrible at hiding it from you, and everytime I'd look at you, all I could feel is... happiness, and the need for you to be mine."
I pulled away, and looked at her. Her face flickered with the light from the overhead of the train, and the purple strand of hair danced in the light. She spoke softly, "And I thought you didn't love me... but you probably won't now that you think I betrayed you. But all I was told was that I was supposed to bring you back to camp, and that you'd be safe there. I was thinking that when we got there, I could tell you I loved you, and that we'd live happily ever after."
I was getting ready to tell her that I'd love her no matter what, but we were interrupted by Grover bursting in through the doors, looking breathless, and huffing. "They... found... us..." He managed to stutter out, before falling to the ground and blacking out.
"Oh no... No, No, No! This can't be happening!" Jackie said, with fear in her voice. "Oh, gods damnit! We've got to get you out of here!" She grabbed my hand and started pulling me out the door, completely in a panic.
"Jackie, what found us?" I asked, concerned as to what was bothering her so much.
"The gods! They found out! We were planning on switching trains and heading to South America, so that you'd be safe, but they found us!" She screamed this, and pulled me out of the train compartment completely and when I bent down to grab Grover, she said, "No... We don't have enough time... He knows how to defend himself well enough..."
She pulled me down the hallway and when we were at the end of the train, she pushed open the heavy metal door, and a gush of wid hit us, almost freezing us. "What are we supposed to do?" I yelled over the howl of the wind.
She looked at me for a moment and screamed, "Jump!"
I felt a strong gust of wind, and Jackie grab my hand, before I was pulled off the train, and into what I did not know. All I saw was a flash of the ground we were going to hit, and then a strange twirling sensation, and then I blacked out.
PJO-PJO-PJO-PJO
I felt someone gripping my hand and whispering in my ear. Their breath tickled my earlobe, and after a few moments, my hearing returned. "Be quiet!" Jackie whispered silently. "The gods have us as prisoners right now! They know all that happened... we're getting ready to be brought before their court, but they want you to be kept alive until then!"
My eyelids flickered open. "Where are we?" I whisper asked her, my voice echoing off the walls.
"We're hidden under a temple in Zeus' palace, I think. We will be brought before the whole Olympian council soon... I think they'll kill you and probably me too."
This fact startled me, but what I was scared for more was Jackie's life. She may have accidently betrayed me before, but now, she was the girl I loved. "Jackie, I just want you to know that I lov-"
I was cut off by a loud clanking sound and a voice roar, "Bring me the prisoner and my traitorous granddaughter!" The voice echoed and boomed like thunder.
"Granddaughter?" I asked Jackie, with an eyebrow raised.
"Shut up! My grandfather is Zeus ok?" She spat the name like it was a deadly poison and would kill her to keep it in her mouth for a moment longer.
"Then who are your parents?" I asked her as a light above us started shining.
She seemed to consider this for a moment and then nodded her head. She looked up at the light and yelled, "My parents are Percy Jackson, son of Poseidon, and Thalia Grace, daughter of Zeus!"
I bet you definitely didn't expect that ending... Review.
