Title: 100 Compliments
Author: Emo Barbie
Disclaimer: I own NOTHING!
Extra: I've been working my butt off to finish a book and an essay for tomorrow, so finally, since I'm done I'm able to update. I ended up trying to put more detail's, since the book I just read: The Great Gatsby's which by the way, was kind good, was soo well detailed, with so many big words O_o I wanted to make mine more like it...but sadly it didn't work out, cause I'm not really that kind of person. Unless I actually have the intention of doing XD. So here ^_^ ya go.
{My next update, or soon update will be on Too Kind a Heart K}
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Extra, Extra:
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Part: 13/100
100 Compliments:
Compliment 88
It was nostalgic to see the trains, and hear the whistle of the steam engines. Trains were still a use of transportation, but there not as commonly used as planes or buses, even cars were more frequently used for those long trips then trains were now a days. It was almost as if trains were a thing of the past that just refused to be forgotten.
"Oh! Look at that one Dr Cox!" J.D stated pointing towards an on coming train, it was much larger then the passenger trains that had stopped at the station, but this was not stopping. It was on a different track.
"It's a cargo train, Newbie, of course their going to be bigger then a passenger train. Their what carry all the things a passenger train can't carry." Dr Cox spoke as if he were informing a small 2 year old, in which a way he felt he was.
"Like what?" The other doctor raised an eyebrow.
"Cars, Newbie, cars, the only overly large things that other passengers bring. Then again..." Dr Cox turned his gaze towards the overly large suitcase, stuffed with god knows what kind of junk. It was only a four day deal, yet the kid seemed to have crammed a whole two weeks worth of crap into his suitcase.
"Look! That one's different too! It's red!" Dr Cox rolled his eyes at the train, it was another passenger train, the only difference was that it was a different color.
It wasn't as annoying as it should have been. The older doctor should have been ready to slap the kid with his childish behavior and immature shout outs. He was like a 6 year old in a candy shop eager to take in all the different flavors that there were, eagerly pointing out his favorites to his parent.
"Our train!" The older doctor was pulled from his stare as he quickly snapped his eyes away from J.D towards the arriving train. The bellowing whistle it produced echoed threw out the station, which to Dr Cox's much surprise was actually quite packed. Not as packed as an airport or bus station, but packed for a train station none the less.
Dr Cox followed shortly after the skipping grown man, in fact, he hadn't even been sure that a grown man could actually skip, let alone do it with a giant suitcase in his hand. Then again, when it's J.D, anythings possible.
They boarded the train will little delay and J.D was sure to take the window seat. It probably would have been a better idea to have sat across from the kid, but instead he had chosen the seat beside him, and his optional spot had been taken up by a rather snobby old lady. She had a head of gray hair and a blue gown on that was laced with a frill of white and a sky blue broach in the center.
J.D gave the women a large grin, but she simply stared at him with a dull look upon her face, unamused by the childlike behavior coming from the energetic doctor.
"What a uptight grandma." J.D muttered, after another attempt at trying to charm the women with a smile.
"I think she has a crochet needle shoved up her ass." Dr Cox muttered, receiving a snort, and withheld laugh from the other, which in return got them a glare from the old women.
It hadn't taken long after the train has started moving for J.D to fall asleep, he had been bouncing in his seat for the last half hour while watching the scenery go by. Though whether he preferred the overexcited child from before, or the now slobbering, snoring...cute, Newbie who was now conked out on his shoulder, was beyond him.
Dr Cox glanced over at the women, who was now eying the sleeping doctor. Their eyes met and Dr Cox tried to put on a smile, but still it was not return.
Old Hag.
"What is his problem?" Dr Cox was confused for a moment before the women nodded towards J.D. "Isn't he a little old to be acting like an immature child?"
Dr Cox glared at the women. "Well now, aren't we a nasty one? What, you and your over dated gown there, which I'm sure is probably all the rage now among the granny's, but still a piece of out dated rags, have something against someone enjoying themselves alittle? I mean, I don't know, when was the last time you took that old rotting personality of yours and actually acting out a little? Oh, or have you already turned that childhood of yours, if you truly ever had one, over to reality already."
"Well, I beg your pardon?" The women snapped at him, squaring her shoulder's and erected her posture.
Dr Cox simply ignored her reply and glanced down at J.D, a small smile crossing his face. "Plus...I like that childish side of him...it's cute." Dr Cox caught the disgust the women had showed and narrowed his eyes. "Unlike the stiff old hag you are."
The women looked both horrified and disgustedly insulted. "The nerve." She snapped getting up to move off down the aisle, hopefully to find another seat.
Dr Cox glanced down once more with a frown. "That was so a compliment." He muttered, but the other didn't stir.
Oh well...
The doctor sighed.
I'll just tell him when he wakes up...
Dr Cox frown hardened.
I'll leave out the cute part though.
This was actually not how the actually chapter was supposed to go, I actually had another compliment, but when I started talking about J.D's childish behavior I thought of the fact that Dr Cox can't deny he loves the childish behavior of J.D XD.
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