This is mostly an Author-note, folks.
Thank you to those who might still have any interest in this story, even six or so years after I last updated. It says that there are 16 people who have it Alerted, so I hope you'll get this alright.
I'm just posting this up to let you know that I'm sorry I never continued this story. I don't think I even had an ending planned, at the time. I was young and demanded reviews in return for updates, which was... silly.
Anyway, there is some actual content to be had, here!
I'm rewriting at least part of this story to... make more sense. I've got most of the first chapter/section done, and am posting it on my new account (this one is only here for nostalgia's sake, really).
Here is a preview:
Tohru fretted and fretted for hours before getting up the nerve to walk to the store. It wasn't fully dark out, but one of the boys would have usually accompanied her if the sun was going down. She didn't want to worry them, especially if she'd just gotten the days wrong. They wouldn't want to know about things like that (girl things weren't so known to sheltered boys like that).
She blushed and waved a hand quickly in the direction of the skeptical cashier, "Th-they're for a friend," she mumbled. Tohru wondered if she could even manage to walk home alright, carrying… well, pregnancy tests. It was stupid; she felt stupid. She probably had just not been eating well and gotten anemic, gotten irregular.
Tohru felt equally stupid for thinking that anyone was watching her walk home. Somebody was, of course, when she got up to the house she was allowed to live in (graciously!). Their Tohru didn't just leave without announcing it, unless she was stressed and forgot to, after all. None of them were consulting each other (yet), but all three men had noticed her leaving and glanced outside to see if they could catch her coming back.
While that's about as long as my old chapters used to be, the new first chapter's much longer.
Some things to note: I changed the story. It will probably be darker, will definitely address the enormity of teenage pregnancy. There might be actual sex; the only reason there wasn't in the first place was... because I was in middle school and hadn't ever written anything like that. Magic babies! Yeah!
No, no, now there was actual conception. I'm sorry, lol. I hope nobody minds that.
At any rate, the new story's at .net/s/6689968/1/
Thank you, thank you, et cetera.