The story continues and stuff
"New"-
Perdido Beach, not as nice as she remembered. The town was messed up tons of graffiti, 'HC' whatever that was, sprayed on every surface. No-one wanted to talk in this part of town. She wanted to pass through this place as quickly as possible.
Caitlin wasn't very lucky, obviously, as a group of guys and a girl came up to her. They were looking for a fight, holding bats and crowbars. The leader seemed to be the snot-nosed boy at the front. Great. She sped up to get past them.
'What's the hurry bitch?' The leader spat, his gang members laughed- not that some of them had the brain power to get why they were laughing. She was tempted to say 'your face, I don't want to see that much of it, I'm afraid I'll go blind- you're that ugly' but something told her that was a bad move, she tried to walk on, ignoring them.
'Haven't seen you around this part of town, are you a moof?' The boy kept on going, stopping her in her tracks. 'A what?' They all laughed, 'Don't act dumb, cow, you freak or normal- tell me so I can beat the crap out of you if you get it wrong.'
Caitlin wondered what the hell he was going on about, 'I'm new to town, so I please explain.' One of the other idiots spoke, 'You from Coates?' Coates was the private school up the road, where bad kids went. 'No… Why?' The leader started speaking, 'If you aint from Coates, where you from, cause I aint seen you round here before.'
Caitlin had only come to Perdido beach on her holidays, visiting her mum. Her parents had split up ages ago, her dad dragged her back to Ireland, but her mum stayed in town- in the house her family had shared till she was five. She didn't remember this jerk. 'Since the barrier thing appeared I've been up in the hills.' The girl sneered, 'It's the FAYZ honey, you really aren't local are you?' trying to make fun of her accent, but sounding more Scottish.
What the hell? FAYZ? Freaks? What the hell?She supposed that Shaun was a "freak" seen as he turned into a ferret most of the time. But what was the FAYZ? Caitlin tried pushing past them again, the second boy pushed her back, raising his bat, 'You follow Zil's rules around here, and pushing Zil gets you're skull cracked open.' He was about to swing it at her when a "rabid ferret" randomly dived at him.
She took her chances at running, Shaun hurtling after her. 'Bitch!' "Zil" yelled after her. Shaun jumped and clung on to her shoulder as she ran out of that part of town.