Part 2: Precious, precocious and pristine!

by Eve Nightingale

CURRENTLY ALL THREE PARTS ARE BEING RE-WRITTEN AS 'DEEP ROOTS'. Al's been restored to his former self and still the mayhem ensues. A dark cult has taken hold and they have their sights set on high goal, immortality.

39. A total rewrite!

If it interests any of you, I am currently re-writing this 3 part story into a single, polished story. the plot is reminiscent of the old one, but from a different angle. Things play out differently and it now takes place after the 'Brotherhood' time-line.

I feel it's enough of a change to possibly make you want to give it a chance.

For what it's worth I would love the opinions of the readers who have read this version.
You guys have the most insight on how I use to write. You'd be able to point out good changes and even bad changes the best.
So if anyone has the time, give it a look.

Thanks for the years of reviews!

-Eve Nightingale