TEOL story line will be picked up in the new story I'm writing. (eventually)

I am currently re-writing all 3 parts of this story into a single, polished story. The plot is reminiscent of the old one, but from a different angle. Things play out differently and it now takes place after the 'Brotherhood' time-line.

I feel it's enough of a change to possibly make you want to give it a chance.

For what it's worth I would love the opinions of the readers who have read this version.
You guys have the most insight on how I use to write. You'd be able to point out good changes and even bad changes the best.
So if anyone has the time, give it a look.

Thanks for the years of reviews!

-Eve Nightingale