All right here's the next chapter that will hopefully map out things a bit more but first…FAN MAIL!
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All right folks here's round two of the story, we're still kind of in the prologue, these first few chapters as the first few days in Kingdom Hearts II where you play as Roxas.
Anyway: ON WITH THE STORY!
The next day, Naruto woke up and stretched. He took a few minutes in the bathroom to get use to his new appearance.
"I wonder if Kyubi can hear me right now." Naruto said.
Loud and clear kid, Kyubi's voice echoed in his head.
"Great, so I've got you rooting around in my head huh?" Naruto said.
'Fraid so, by the way, you like the cosmetic changes? Kyubi asked.
"Yeah they're not bad, and you even made me taller." Naruto said with a smile. "Of course now I'm going to need some new cloths."
I also know a couple of things we'll need. Kyubi said. Take a seat at the table and let me take control of your right hand. Naruto did as he was told. A minute later, he hand came to life on its own and began scribbling out notes on the paper. When he was finished, Naruto took a look at what the Kyubi had created and his eyes widened.
"Kyubi, this is," he said but found himself unable to finish.
Yeah, believe me, it's going to be a pain for the weapons smith to make, but they'll be useful in the long run I promise you. Kyubi said. Naruto nodded and took the scroll and threw on a tank top and some shorts before leaving his apartment and taking off to one of the only stores that didn't throw him out on sight: the Chignon Weapons shop, the store run by ninja for ninja.
A bell dinged to signal to the owners that they had a customer.
"Hello sir, can I help you?" asked an old man with a long white beard and mustache.
"Well Old Man Azure, I'm in need of some new cloths and a couple of special orders." Naruto said. The man Azure looked at Naruto with wide eyes.
"Naruto, is that you?" Azure asked, looking the boy up and down. "What happened to you?"
"It's a long story." Naruto said rubbing the back of his head. "So, you think you can help me out."
"Of course," Azure said, "let me see this special order and Tenten will help you with the cloths. Tenten!" he called back into the store to get his granddaughter's attention. Tenten walked in wearing her usual pink Chinese dress and her hair in its usual buns.
"Hey grandpa what do you need?" Tenten asked.
"It's more what Naruto here needs," Azure said pointing to the boy in question.
"Naruto?" Tenten said looking up and down at the handsome young man before her. "Naruto Uzumaki?"
"The Maelstrom Whirlpool at your service Ten for Ten," Naruto said with a smile.
"Wow Naruto, what happened to turn you into such a stud?" Tenten asked.
"It's a kind of a long story." Naruto said with a smile. "One I don't really want to tell while your grandpa is arms length of various sharp and dangerous objects." The Chignons chuckled as Tenten led Naruto back towards the cloths section of the store while Azure looked at Naruto's order.
"So no training or missions today?" Naruto asked.
"Just a light workout today," Tenten said. "Although I think Lee and Gai sensei are still going at it."
"Wouldn't surprise me, from what you've told me those two are nuts on Kami knows how many levels." Naruto said.
"So what kinds of outfits are you looking for?" Tenten asked.
"Well I was thinking about getting something in black with maybe a little bit of orange." Naruto said.
"I've got just the thing." Tenten said. "Go wait in the dressing room and I'll bring it to you." Naruto nodded and followed orders. A moment later he walked out wearing a black jacket, shirt, and pants with an orange lining in the jacket.
"Hmmm, feels good." Naruto said.
"Looks good too," Tenten said with a smile. "For a little something extra we could have the back of it personalized." Naruto tapped his chin in though until it hit him.
"I want a whirlpool pattern with 9 tails coming off of it." Naruto said.
"I get the whirlpool but why the tails?" Tenten asked.
"It's part of that long story I told you about." Naruto said with a wink. "I'll tell you about it someday." Tenten just shrugged and took the jacket from Naruto as well as the others and started heading back to get them personalized. At the desk Azure was tapping the plans for Naruto's order.
"Naruto I've got good news and bad news." He said. "The good news is that the first part of your order will be ready in about a day, in time to pick up with your jackets. The bad news is that the rest will take me till you're ready to get your ninja team."
"Works for me." Naruto said, "what am I gonna owe you?"
"Under normal circumstances, a lot, a wholllle lot," Azure said, emphasizing the whole part, "but seeing as how it's you and this will more than likely be my masterpiece as a weapons smith, I'll just charge you for the grieves and the personalized jackets, your cloths are free as always."
"Thanks Old Man Azure." Naruto said with a smile.
"Is there anything else you need?" Azure asked.
"Yeah," Naruto said pulling out his new leaf headband and his old goggles. "Do you think you can combine these into a new set of goggles?"
"Give me five minutes." Azure said disappearing into the back room.
"Congratulations on graduating." Tenten said, glancing over the plans Naruto had brought in. "But why did you want them made into goggles, and where the heck did you come up with these plans?"
"I got those goggles from someone special to me." Naruto said. "And let's just say the plans came to me in a dream." Tenten just shrugged as started working on figuring out a total for Naruto's order. She was so focused she didn't see Naruto's eyes glaze over as the Kyubi quickly spoke to him.
"Do you think you could add some seal ink and a brush to the order?" Naruto asked.
"New hobby?" Tenten asked. Naruto just shrugged in response. After Azure returned with Naruto's order, Naruto paid for the order, depleting almost all his money. With his new cloths, goggles, and ink in hand, Naruto started heading to his apartment building, or he was until his stomach growled, signaling to the boy that it was time to chow down. Shrugging, Naruto made it to the one and only place that let him eat fairly: Ichiraku Raman.
"Yo Old Man Techu, I'll have the Naruto Special." Naruto said. Techu looked up and tapped his knife against the palm of his hand.
"And you are?" Techu asked.
"Come on old man, it's me, Naruto Uzumaki." Naruto said.
"You don't look like Naruto," Ayame said from behind her father. "Prove your him." Naruto sighed and rubbed the back of his head.
"Should have known this was gonna happen, but what can you do." Naruto said with a shrug. "The Naruto special, named after me, is a large serving of miso ramen with roasted pork, it was named after me because it was the first kind of ramen that you guys served me when I was a kid and is my favorite." Naruto looked at the Father-Daughter ramen chiefs with his trademark foxy smile. "Good enough?"
"Naruto?" Ayame said looking the smiling boy up and down. "What happened to you?"
"Been getting the question a lot today," Naruto muttered. "I'm sorry guys but it's kind of a secret. I'd tell you if I could but,"
"It's ok Naruto we understand." Techu said and began working on the boy's order.
"Well whatever happened to you Naruto, it made you look good." Ayame said smiling.
"Like what you see Ayame?" Naruto said with a smile. Ayame giggled and blushed a bit.
"Even if I do, you're still more like a little brother." She said. "So be sure to warn any girlfriends that they'll have to meet my approval." Naruto smiled and chuckled.
"I'll be sure to keep that in mind." He promised. Techu brought out the ramen and slid it in front of Naruto.
"On the house today Naruto, in honor of your becoming a ninja." Naruto smiled and quickly began eating the ramen as the chief started to make more, knowing their number 1 customer's appetite, he wouldn't be finished until about a dozen or so bowls. And sure enough, after a dozen and a half bowls, Naruto was finished.
"Thanks for lunch guys." Naruto said with a wave.
"No problem Naruto, and remember you're always welcome here whenever you like." Techu said with a wave. Naruto returned the wave and started to make his way home.
"Ok Kyubi, answer time, what's with the sealing paint?" Naruto whispered to his partner.
You remember what I said about you being a bit more beastly at night?Kyubi said earning a nod from Naruto.
"Along with the sucking blood thing." Naruto muttered.
Don't worry about that, Kyubi assured him, all it takes to keep that in check is a little will power and self control, something that you have in boatloads. As for the sealing paint, it's to make sure you're cloths aren't ruin your outfit every time you change.
"Glad to hear it." Naruto whispered, walking into his apartment building. "So how are we going do this, are you actually going to teach me these seals or are you going to take over my arm again."
I figure I'll actually teach you the seals, maybe with a bit more study you'll be able to figure out how to bust me out of this seal. Kyubi said.
"Whoa, whoa, whoa, that is not part of the deal!" Naruto exclaimed.
Look, kid, I don't mean bust me out in my full demonic glory, Kyubi said, I mean at least let me out of here in my human form.
"Let's just wait and see where the road takes us." Naruto said. "So how are we going to do these seals?" For the rest of the day, Naruto worked on putting the necessary seals on his new cloths so that when he transformed at night. He finished just in time too when he glanced out the window and saw the sun starting to set. Naruto walked out of the room and flipped up onto the roof. He was wearing an old orange jacket and pants since he was still working on putting the seals on his cloths and he wore his goggles around his neck. When the sun's rays finally faded from the sky Naruto felt a strange feeling reverberate from the core of his body and his eyes became as black as the night's sky.
He dropped to his knees as gold fur began to spread around his body as a red mane started to spread around his head. His clothes started to rip, leaving him in tattered remains of his orange shorts and a sleeveless jacket. Naruto's ears grew pointed as claws shot out from his fingernails and his teeth lengthened into sharp fangs, his canines in particular. Finally the remains of his jacket were ruined as a pair of giant black bat wings exploded from his back. The beast that was once Naruto threw its head back and roared at the night sky with beastly fury.
Ok, I think that's enough of that. Kyubi said sending a small shockwave of chakra threw Naruto's system to wake the boy up. Naruto blinked as he regained his senses and shook his head to clear it.
"What happened?" he asked his voice deeper and a lot more of a growl, than usual.
The change caught you off guard. Kyubi explained. After some training you'll be able to control it better, be able to surpass it at night and change even during the day. But for now just try to get a feel for your new body, especially the wings.
"Wings?" asked Naruto before he reached back and felt them. "Ok, I have wings; they're not just for decoration right?"
Nope so let's practice flying shall we?Kyubi said. Naruto took a deep breath, slid his goggles over his eyes, and started flapping his new wings. Silently praying that he wasn't about to jump to his death, Naruto took a running leap off of the roof and started flapping harder. After a few minutes to get his bearings, Naruto soon found himself flying the skies like he'd been doing it all his life.
"This is awesome!" Naruto cried out, doing a barrel roll and dead drops. Inside his cage, Kyubi just smirked and leaned against the bars, he had more to teach the boy, but it could wait until after the kid had had his fun. Naruto flew through the village before finally coming to a stop at the Hokage tower.
"So, I can fly with this new form, what else am I packing?" Naruto asked his partner.
Eh, nothing much, just the basic stuff really, Kyubi explained, enhanced strength and senses, oh yeah plus my doujutsu.
"Doujutsu?" Naruto nearly shouted. "We have a doujutsu?"
It's nothing much, just a little something that can see into a person's heart. Kyubi explained.
"And you're just now telling me this because?" Naruto demanded.
It never came up before.Kyubi said with a shrug. Naruto face faulted. Naruto spent the rest of the night learning the new strengths and weaknesses of his body. He also got a big kick out of his doujutsu and made it his priority to learn how to use it in his normal form. Taking to the skies again, Naruto started to fly home until he caught sight of something, a flash of yellow which registered to Naruto as fear. Swooping down, Naruto landed on the roof edge of where the fear was coming. Down below him was 3 men glowing orange with avarice and a single girl who was emitting fear's yellow aura. With his enhanced hearing, Naruto could hear what the men were saying and it was enough to get the young half-demon riled up. Growling, he jumped down and landed between the two colors.
"What the hell is this thing?" one of the guys said. Naruto responded by rising up to his full height and letting loose with a window shaking roar. The roar scared most of the thugs enough that they lost control of their bladders.
Naruto leaned in close and whispered, "This is the part where you run away." And run the would-be thugs ran as fast as they could away from the beast. Snorting, Naruto turned back to the girl, who's aura of fear was still shining bright. Now that Naruto got a good look at her he smiled.
"Hinata Hyuga," he growled out with a smile on his face.
"Y-You can talk?" Hinata whispered. "What are you?" Naruto was a little hurt at first, but then he remembered his current form.
"Oh yeah I'm not exactly myself right now." He growled out and raised his goggles. "Does his help?"
It is said that the eyes are the portal to a person's soul. To the Hyuga's this was true as they had learned to read a person's trust by looking into their eyes. And no Hyuga was better at this than Hinata. And right now, even though his body was different and even his eyes were a different color, she knew who this creature was.
"Nar-Naruto?" she whispered.
"You did recognize me." Naruto said with a smile.
"Wh-What h-happened to you?" Hinata asked.
"It's kind of complicated." Naruto said rubbing the back of his head. "I'd tell you if I could but, it's kind of a secret, the Hokage's orders." Hinata smiled and nodded in understanding. Naruto noticed that her aura had changed to a mixture of blue and violet, the colors of Hope and Love. "Um Hinata, part of my new look also gives me a dojutsu that allows me to see the emotions in a person's heart, and right now I'm seeing hope and love. Not to pry but," Hinata blushed a bright crimson red.
"W-Well, um, it- it's just, you've a-always been an in-inspiration to me, to g-get me to push my-myself har-harder." Hinata stuttered out.
"And so the hope and admiration you had for me turned into love?" Naruto asked. Blushing even more furiously, if that was possible, Hinata nodded. "Well I don't know about love, but you are the only person who ever really cared about me apart from the Old Man and a few ANBU," he reach up and cupped Hinata's cheek, "but I do see you as my best friend, and maybe someday it'll be more." Hinata smiled and burned even brighter with hope.
"Th-Thank you Naruto." Hinata stuttered.
"So what were you doing out here anyway?" Naruto asked cocking his head to the side resembling a confused puppy dog. Hinata giggled for a second before her face fell.
"M-My Father t-told me I w-was weak and di-didn't de-deserve to be a Hyuga." Hinata said. Naruto's hand balled into a tight fist and a growl escaped his throat getting a small sliver of fear from Hinata.
"Sorry Hinata, but a father should never say things like that to his child." Naruto said. "Makes me want to go over to the Hyuga compound and see what this body can do in a fight."
"No!" Hinata said "Please don't Naruto." Naruto sighed and rubbed the back of his head. Suddenly and idea hit him.
"Hinata, do you trust me?" asked Naruto. Hinata nodded. "Would you like to fly with me?" Hinata gasped, unsure of what to say. "You don't think that these wings are just for show do you? I mean I'll admit it's my first time with the wings, but I promise I'm good with them."
"I trust you Naruto." Hinata said. Naruto smiled and bent down allowing Hinata to climb onto this back. Jumping into the air, Naruto flapped his wings until he was airborne. He glided around the village for a bit before landing on the Hokage monument.
"That, that's was," Hinata whispered.
"Glad you enjoyed the ride." Naruto said hanging his goggles around his neck. "I never did thank you for these did I?" Hinata looked surprised at Naruto.
"I, I didn't," Hinata stuttered out.
"I saw you dropping them off threw the window." Naruto said with a smile. "They're the best, and really the only birthday present I ever got." Hinata smiled her love aura brighter than ever. She leaned into Naruto who wrapped his arms around her.
"So wh-what other ab-abilities do you have?" Hinata asked.
"Well aside from the big strong furry body, super senses, wings, and dojutsu," Naruto said, "apparently I'm able to recover strength and get stronger by drinking blood."
"Like a vam-vampire?" asked Hinata.
"Yeah I guess, haven't really had a chance to try it out." Naruto said with a shrug. Naruto saw a small sliver of fear appear on Hinata as she spoke.
"You co-could bite me if you wan-wanted." She whispered. Naruto looked at her with wide eyes.
"Hinata, I, I don't know," Naruto said. "What if I lose control of the bloodlust or my inner beast? What if I really hurt you?"
"Naruto," Hinata said cupping his cheek, "I trust you." Naruto sighed and smiled.
"OK, but not here," Naruto said replacing his goggles and bending down so Hinata could climb on his back. The Half-Demon took to the skies and began heading to his apartment, he was a little concerned about what would happen to Hinata if he bit her, even if he did keep control. Would biting her turn her into a half demon like him?
Don't worry about it kid. The Kyubi said. It would be possible to turn her into a half-demon, but only by pumping some of my demonic chakra into her body and, give her a bit of your blood. Before you do that though there are 2 things you should know about demons: 1: we're polygamists and since you can probably pass this off as a blood line you can get away with that. And 2 we mate for life, no if ands or buts.Naruto nodded in understanding as he came down by his apartment building.
"Welcome to my home," Naruto said, opening the door, "enter freely and of your own will." Hinata giggled as she stepped into the small apartment. It was simple with all the necessities, bedroom, kitchen, living room, and bathroom. "I know it's not much but,"
"It's won-wonder-wonderful." Hinata said, earning a smile from Naruto.
"So you're sure about this right?" Naruto said. Hinata responded by removing her leaf headband from her neck and unzipped her jacket enough to show her exposed neck.
"I trust you." She said. Naruto wrapped one arm around her waist and the other gently tilted her neck back. Naruto leaned forward kissed her neck, earning a moan from the young woman. She gasped when his teeth broke the skin but as he began to suck she began to feel aroused.
(Lemon Warning!)
"Naruto," she whispered, "more, please." Naruto bit harder, drinking a bit deeper. Absentmindedly, Naruto reach up and pulled down Hinata's zipper more and began to caress her breast slowly pushing them into, Naruto's bedroom. That was when the scent of Hinata's arousal hit his nose. Naruto, letting his instincts take over; Naruto began kissing down Hinata's body while slowly pushing down her pants.
"N-Naruto," Hinata whispered but gasped when Naruto began to kiss and lick the inside of her thigh. "Oh Naruto." She moaned wrapping her legs around his head as his tongue began to attack her neither lips. For several minutes between Naruto's licks and a few bites to her thigh, it was everything Naruto had not to scream out and scare Naruto or call unwanted attention.
"Oh Naruto!" she silently screamed as her body quaked and she felt like she exploded her juices into Naruto's waiting mouth. The pair of them lay on Naruto's bed panting for air. Without saying a word, Naruto crawled up the bed and wrapped his arms around Hinata who was already in dreamland after what Naruto did to her, not that she was complaining as she snuggled into Naruto's chest.
And there you go. For Naruto's outfit, think the uniforms of Kogarasumaru from Air Gear, for his monster form, imagine a werehog with batwings and black eyes. Speaking of eyes, the doujutsu is based on the how the Black Lantern's see things in Blackest Night.
Anyway, I'm kind of stuck on a part for the next chapter but hopefully I'll have it up sooner or later.
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