Thanks for the reviews everyone they are very reassuring, when I first started making this fanfic (that I'm still trying to make a name for) I thought all I would receive were bad reviews and all, I guess I shouldn't do my own thinking, wait if I didn't do my own thinking then I wouldn't have been able to this fic and I would a mindless zombie does that mean that whole life up to this point has been a complete lie, I'm so confused.
For those that asked Naruto is 6 years old and Hana is 12.
"Kit" Kyuubi talking inside Naruto's mindscape
"Hey" Someone thinking
I DON'T OWN NARUTO
Chapter 2: The decision and Transformation
'What will he choose' were the thoughts going through the minds of Tsume Inuzuka, head of the Inuzuka clan, and her daughter Hana Inuzuka, clan heiress.
"I choose to live, I'll become a demon so I can live." Naruto said "I know I might sound selfish but if I die you die Kyuubi-chan and I don't want to be responsible for anyones death."
"Then we must hurry kit there is little time." Kyuubi said thankful that he choose to live.
"Naruto! You can't go through with this." Tsume said, worry laced in her voice.
"Tsume-san again thank you for your concern but all my life I had to deal with beatings and near death experiences and I know what will happen when I become a demon but if I could endure the beatings and near death experiences before, I'll endure it even more now." Naruto said with a glint of determination in his eyes.
"B-but if what kaa-san said was true, about if anyone found out you would be killed, then why do it?" Hana asked as her eyes started to tear up.
"I take your concern to heart, Hana-chan, but I'm dead either way, you heard what Kyuubi-chan said if I don't do this I'll bleed to death before I get to the hospital." Naruto said making Hana blush for the chan suffix.
"Why am I blushing he's six years younger than me?" Hana questioned herself as she felt her cheeks heat up.
Tsume saw the blush and the look on Hana's face after what Naruto said and thought 'Maybe, just maybe if things work out I might do 'that.''
"Okay now that it seems your done talking, Naruto are you ready?" Kyuubi asked
"Yes Kyuubi-chan." Naruto responded enthusiastically.
"Good now before we get started there are some things you need to know the first being that once this is all said and done your sense of smell, sight, taste, and hearing will be enhanced a hundred fold so you will in theory have senses better than the Inuzuka clan but they will need to be trained so you might want to have one of them" motioning with her eyes to Tsume and Hana "train you." Kyuubi said while receiving nods from the two Inuzuka.
"And the second?" Hana questioned.
"The second will be more painful." Kyuubi stated "The second thing you need to know is that every two years after your twelfth birthday you will grow a tail starting on your twelfth birthday and it will painful each time one grows."
"WHAT!" Tsume and Hana shouted while Naruto said the first thing that came to mind.
"COOL! I'll get tails." He said in excitement with one of his fox like grins.
Tsume and Hana Looked at Naruto with a look that said 'Are you crazy.'
"What I always wondered what if would be like to have a tail." Naruto said innocently with another fox like grin on his face.
"There is one last thing that you need to know." Kyuubi exclaimed seriously.
"And that is?" Tsume said not liking the tone of Kyuubi's voice.
"Pain, Lots of pain. When I flood your system with my youki that is all you will feel, gomen." Kyuubi said apologetically.
"Thats okay Kyuubi-chan." Naruto said while mentally prepare himself.
"Okay kit it is time. Now before I send you two ningen back there is something you need to know." Kyuubi said.
"And that is?" Tsume asked still not totally trusting Kyuubi.
Okay thats it for this chapter
NOT
Outside Naruto's Mind
Tsume and Hana had just returned to consciousness. Once Hana got up and shook the proverbial cob webs out of her head she went over to the two bundles of gold fur that were next to the puddle of Naruto's blood and picked them up. Once she picked them up she started to examine them while her mother went to Naruto's unconscious and bloodied form and picked him up bridal style and carried him to the center of her yard and set him down gently before she ran back to Hana.
"Their fine they don't look like they were injured at all." Hana said referring to the two fox kits that she placed back on the ground.
"Thats fine he just asked us to see if they were okay and we did." Tsume said as she thought back to what Kyuubi said.
Flashback a minutes ago mindscape time
"And that is?" Tsume asked still not totally trusting Kyuubi.
"When I start to flood the kit with my youki there will be a shock wave of my youki and if I'm correct he is still next to your home?" When she asked that she got nods "if he is too close to your home it will burn because my youki is so hot it burns, so you might want to move him." Kyuubi explained.
"Ok." Tsume and Hana responded.
"Oh Tsume-san can you do something for me?" Naruto asked.
"Sure Naruto." Tsume said.
"Before I you found me there should have been some fox kits next to my body could you make sure they're ok?" Naruto asked.
"I'll do it." Hana said.
"Arigatou." Naruto said.
"Oh and ningen tell them about what really happened 'that' night so that they have some understanding of what happened and why I'm here..."
Flashback end
Tsume was cut from her thoughts when she felt it, actually she was sure she wasn't the only one who felt it she was sure all of Konoha had felt it and was soiling themselves at that exact moment, then another wave, but this time there was a faint red glow, and another with a deeper red to it, thats when the village nin started to appear, the rank went from Chuunin to the Hokage, the first to appear was the Sandaime Hokage and when he appeared he went straight up to Tsume and asked "Tsume whats going on here?"
Nin kept on appearing around the Inuzuka clan grounds.
"It's the Kyuubi Hokage-sama." Tsume said earning gasps from everyone but Hana.
"Wha-what do you mean Tsume, is the seal breaking?" The Hokage asked, shock written all over his face, he didn't want to have to kill the boy, especially the one he considered a grandson, just because the seal was breaking on him, but he swore he would protect his village from anything even if it killed him. Deep down he knew he would have to kill Naruto to keep the Kyuubi from coming back, even if that meant killing a part of himself in the process.
"No she's just saving a life." Tsume said earning gasps from everyone again.
"First I want to know how you know Kyuubi is a she and secondly what do you mean she is saving a life?" The Sandaime ordered with a face that said 'Tell me now or face the consequences later.'
"I know Kyuubi is female because Kyuubi said so herself when me and my daughter talked to her in person or fox, what ever you want to think," That earned more gasps "when I said she was saving a life I meant she was saving Naruto's life." Tsume explained earning confused looks.
"Hokage-sama you obviously can't believe her." A nin from the crowd shouted over wind that wind that had picked up and the boom that came with each shock wave.
"And why is that Mizuki?" The Sandaime asked.
"Because the demon has obviously corrupted her into saying all that so we do nothing while he charges his charka so he can destroy the village! We have to kill him!" Mizuki shouted getting shouts of agreement from most of the nin present and glares from the nin who believed Naruto wasn't the Kyuubi, Mizuki then proceeded to take one of the two giant shuriken off his back and get ready to throw it at Naruto.
"I wouldn't do that if I were you." Mizuki heard a voice behind him say. He turned around only to see a few Anbu, Jounin, and Chuunin cracking their knuckles.
"H-How could you take his side Iruka he killed your parents! Same for your parents Izumo...Kotetsu..how could any of you take that damn demons side?" Mizuki asked shaking in anger and fear but mostly fear.
"Because, the demon fox might have killed my parents, but Naruto is Naruto and he is just like me after my parents died...a boy looking for attention...besides anyone with half a mind would know that if Naruto was the demon that was sealed in him he would have destroyed Konoha a long time ago." Iruka said trying to restrain his anger.
"What do you think he's doing now Iruka!" Mizuki snapped back.
"He's not doing anything if you heard Tsume-san right he is being healed by the demon, besides if would look around you would notice the unnatural amount of blood on the porch."
Everyone looked at the porch and saw the blood but also noticed what was behind Hana and filed it away for later.
"And what looks to be three slowly healing stab mark over his heart and a hole in his stomach." said an nin in Anbu armor with a mask that looked like an Inu on.
"There is that and if he were trying anything why would he use such a large amount of chakra and pretty much tell all of Konoha that he was up to something unless he knew he was going to win." The Chuunin known as Kotetsu said.
"Any way how do you explain him using chakra when he has had no previous training in using it that we know of." the Chuunin Izumo said.
"Thats not the point that demon is up to something and I'm going to stop him!" Mizuki shouted and something in him finally snapped and he started to spin his giant shurikan as he started charging the barely visible form of Naruto who still had small shock waves of chakra rolling off of him.
When Mizuki was within ten feet of Naruto he started to fell like he was in the middle of a fire and then he screamed as his arms fell to each side of him and blood flew everywhere. He continue to scream as he was bitten by snakes and dogs all over even in a mans most valuable treasures, got stabbed by four giant kunai and two shurikan , saw his own death because of genjustu, got stabbed in his legs by some trench knives, and beaten by a man in green, all before being dragged off to the hospital before he died by a man in a black trench coat and scars on his face and then to Anbu's I.T. Division. (I really don't like Mizuki if you haven't figured it out.)
It gets graphic at this point for Naruto's transformation just to warn you so don't read it if you can't handle it.
After Mizuki was drug off, with everyone watching,everyone started to blood curdling screams of pain coming from Naruto. Everyone turned to look at Naruto some with smirks on their face for the pain Naruto was in, while others had looks of pity and worry on their faces, some even had tears in their eyes. Then looks of pure and utter horror was shown on everyones face as they watched Naruto completely melt off him.
"Kakashi get me medical teams A, B, and D! NOW!" The old Kage yelled to the Inu masked Anbu.
"Hai Hokage-sama." The Inu masked Anbu said quickly before taking off in a poof of smoke.
As everyone waited and watched Naruto, worried for his well being even nin that hurt him on more then one occasion but didn't want to actually kill him were worried, Kakashi arrived back shortly after he left with the medic teams.
Everyone gasped in total shock as they watched Naruto's skin grow back. When the skin was finished growing everyone watched as his muscles began to convulse under his new skin and Naruto's screams got loader.
Everyone began to cringe as they continued to cringe as they saw the muscle continue to convulse and then they heard it, everyone cringed even more when they heard Naruto's bones break and then watched as he grew taller and heard his bones snap back into place. Then everyone turned green as they watched his eyes snap open and melt and then grow back instantly.
By this point Hana was crying, the newly arrived dogs of the Inuzuka clan that were standing next to Hana were whimpering and had their heads turned to the side to try and block out the smell of burnt flesh, and Kiba who had woken up to the screams and had come out to see what was going on could be seen passing out.
Just as soon as the screams and chakra shock waves had started they stopped and Naruto could be seen being guided to the ground by youki and as everyone watched they all realized one thing he was completely naked. Apparently the youki burnt the clothes off of Naruto.
The Hokage rushed forward taking off his Hokage robes, to reveal he was wearing his old battle suit and armor, before he wrapped Naruto in them. When the Hokage was only an arms length away from Naruto though he was thrown back by one last shock wave of youki and then everyone was blinded by a flash of red light and then they a heard the light sound of what sounded like glass breaking and one final scream from Naruto.
When everyone was able to see again they all gasped and got into battle stances except Tsume and Hana. What they saw was a fox the size of one of the Inuzuka clan dogs when they are fully grown with nine tails, all of them firmly wrapped around Naruto.
"Well that was unexpected." The fox said as it looked around.
Gomen-sorry
Sandaime-The third or something like that
Kaa-san-Mother
Arigatou-Thank you
Inu-Dog
Hai-Yes
I want to tell everyone that I wont update until sometime after the 8th of march sorry, but my spring break for college has started and I'm going to visit my great grandmother in Kentucky and she doesn't have INTERNET and I don't have a wireless adapter for my laptop but I will be taking it with me so when I get back I can update right away. I have to type up chapter 3 and I'm almost done writing up chapter 4. I write my chapters in a notebook before I type them, if I didn't I have a serious case of writers block
So how did you all like my second chapter is it good. Tell me if I made any mistakes please, I'll do my best to fix them. I'll be looking for a beta later after I get back from visiting my great grandmother.
I'm still trying to figure out if I should make this a harem fic or not. I'm finding it hard to think of how Naruto would start a relationship and its all because of the lack of me ever being in a relationship so I'm up for any ideas.
If I make this a harem fic. Later I want to know what my readers want so tell who you would like me to put in Naruto's harem if I give him one.
Thanks again for the good reviews