This review just made me laugh and curse at my screen and the person didn't even have the balls to log in.
g.o.d
Kill yourself, disgusting, pathetic, delusional, self-inserting fuckjtard.
One:
"fuckjtard" isn't even a real word. It's fucktard. Learn how to spell, dipshit.
Two:
Who the hell do you think you are to leave a review like this and not even give me the chance to respond to it properly? That's cowardly. What are you afraid of exactly? It's not like I can actually DO ANYTHING over the internet.
Three:
Kill myself? Really? Isn't it bad enough that people commit suicide without ass-hats like you pushing them to it? You sound like an immature brat. Just stop while you're ahead, kiddo.
And finally...
Four:
I'm not self-inserting, disgusting (on most occasions), pathetic (I can't see how when YOU'RE the one leaving a review like this one. Hypocritical, much?), or delusional (you're delusional if you think that something like this can actually hurt my feelings. If anything, it just gives me a good laugh and a way for people to see how much of an imbecilic, immature brat you are). Self-insert means that I'm putting myself in the story. I'm nothing like any of my OCs in this story and there are only three. And two of them happen to be six years old! I'm nineteen on my way to being twenty in May. And the other one who was barely introduced is a hell of a lot stronger and smarter than I am. Not to mention more observant of her surroundings and dead. I'm still alive thank you very much. Get your facts straight before you decide to lecture someone.
If you don't have something constructive to say then don't say anything at all. People like you are what make the Earth a terrible place and gives humanity a bad name.
Sorry for not posting an actual update Swimmy D but I'm almost done with the next installment, I swear. I just had to get this off of my chest first. Keep an eye out for the final installment, my dear!
-sakemori