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Me(calmly):don't worry...
Turtles: AAAAUUUGGGHHHH...
Mikey: We're still falling...
Donnie(starting to notice a liquefying change in their forms):WHAT"S HAPPENING ?!
Me: l don't suppose you've ever been disintegrated in your original form, and re-integrated in another form, so-
Raph(angry and panicked): GET US OUT OF THIS!
Me(huffs indignantly): Alright, alright, sheesh! lt's not like l'm gonna kill you- you didn't have to interrupt my tea break!
Turtles: AAAAAUUUUUGGGGHHHHH...
Me: Guess l should save them now-enjoy chapter 2!
The five ponies watched helplessly, as they rushed to Twilight's side, desperately trying to help her, for they all knew that this uncontrollable vortex had not been planned. Twilight was not responding to their pleas to 'snap out of it'.
The other ponies in Ponyville seemed to be enjoying the show- as they had never seen anything even remotely close to this astronomical display- they were unaware of what was really going on.
"Twilight, snap out of it!"Pinkie Pie shouted in Twilight's ear, which seemed to do the trick, as Twilight slowly slumped to the ground, passing out from her exhaustion. The others sighed in relief, as they saw their alicorn friend breathing deeply and calmly. At least they knew she was going to be alright.
"Phew, everything's back to normal now" claimed Applejack, as she brushed Twilight's head gently with her hoove.
"Umm, l wouldn't quite say everything dearie..." said Rarity, worry and hesitation clearly evident in her voice.
"What do you mean?" asked Fluttershy, as she covered Twilight with a blanket.
""Well, you might all want to take a look at this."
All the friends joined Rarity's side out on the balcony, eyes wide, and jaws dropped, as they stared into the vortex, which had formerly began to fade, began forming a brilliant light within what was formerly its center.
"Hey, l thought that was all over now..." exclaimed Rainbow, as she leaned over the railing, trying to get a closer look.
"Well, apparently not" stated Applejack.
"It's so pretty...and it's getting bigger and brighter by the minute!" squealed Pinkie excitedly.
"Umm, is it just me, or does it seem to be getting closer?" asked Fluttershy nervously.
All of them looked deeper, and to their horror, it was- right towards them!
"SHOOTING STAR!"
"QUICK, LOOK OUT!"
"TAKE COVER!"
"WATCH OUT!"
"AUUUGGGHHHHH!"
All the ponies scrambled for cover, as the 'star' was rapidly drawing closer with increasing speed.
"Wait, What about...
"Guy's...what...happened?" asked a dazed Twilight, who was confused, mildly stating.
"TWILIGHT!" They cried, as they rushed to her side, gathering in a huddle on the floor, and the room became filled with blinding light, followed by a loud crash, then darkness.
TEN MINUTES LATER...
The six fillies laid on the floor, in the darkened room, groaning and rubbing their heads in confusion.
"What...happened?" groaned Twilight, for the second time that evening.
"Let's see...awesome party...star display...massive out-of-control spiraling vortex...shooting star...loud bang...l think that covers it, other than you passing out." informed Pinkie, who was now bouncing again, now that everything was okay again.
"Twilight, what was that? lt didn't seem natural, even for a star maneuver show."asked Fluttershy.
Twilight sighed in defeat "l don't know...one minute l was doing everything smoothly, the next minute, l wake up on the floor, surrounded by you guys." she said as she walked towards the door "but l am definitely going to find ou...ooff!"
Twilight tripped over someones leg. "Pinkie, why are you on the floor?"
"What are you talking abou-oof!"she said as she tripped over something as well. Something long, furry, and warm.
"Pinkie, are you oka-ayyee!"yelped Fluttershy, as she tried to make her way towards Pinkie, but wound up tripping as well.
"Wait, who did l just trip over?" asked Twilight "Rainbow?"
"No way, l have wings, remember?"
"Rarity?" Twilight asked, starting to worry. Something was off, she could feel it.
" It certainly wasn't me, l haven't moved a bit- l can't see anything!" whined Rarity. She was frustrated, obviously enough.
"I'll spare ya the trouble of asking Twilight- l haven't bothered to move until now, so l don't think you tripped over any of us!" Applejack said, as she stepped on something small and smooth. An unfamilliar groan pain could be heard by everyone, which caused everyone to freeze.
"Umm...Twilight...who..that l just stepped on?" she asked nervously.
"l...l don't know...l thought we were the only ones here.." she answered as she felt for the object she had tripped over. She finally found it, as she felt it move, followed by another groan, a different one this time, which was followed with two other loud groans.
"Rainbow, can you go turn the lights on?" asked Twilight.
""Thought you'd never ask...here goes"
As the light filled the room, the six friends gasped at what they saw.
"ls everyone else seeing what l'm seeing" asked an astonished Rainbow Dash.
"l see it...but...l don't believe it..." breathed Rarity.
They all stood and backed away from the four groaning green ponies sprawled on the floor in front of them, as they started to gain consiousness. One of them, the lightest colored one, spoke, making the girls gasp again.
" Oh man...dudes...where are we?"
Me:Well, there's chapter 2- hope you enjoyed this- let me know by your reviews!