Angel

by quattrolove

STOPPED Angelina hates her life, so ends it. Then she ends up in Middle Earth. What will happen when she falls in love with Legolas, but he has to leave? A visit to Galadriel reveals all... A little bit of W.I.T.C.H thrown in, but changed names!

3. Chapter 3

-- AUTHOR NOTE –

I know I haven't updated in ages, and I'm incredibly sorry to all those people who reviewed and asked me to update.

I felt that, even though I did get some good reviews and even though it was my first and favourite story, and even though I have about 60 chapters I wrote about 3 years ago, Angel was becoming too Mary-Sue-ish. The second chapter was published with the intent of rectifying that, but I couldn't go on from that point. This was reinforced by the C2 community it was put into, which helped me see I needed to do something about it. So, at the moment, I'm working to a rewrite. A complete rewrite. Most elements of the plot will be the same, but I'm going to try and get anything remotely Mary-Sue over and done with in the first couple of chapters so then I can get on with a good story (I hope). This will not be published for a very long time, because I'm going to write it out and get it read over by my friend, who is an exceptional writer, even though she doesn't write fanfiction.

If anyone wants to read the original version, then leave a comment with your email address and I'll see if I can type it up and email it to you. You can read it, and if anyone has any ideas on how I can improve it, I'd be incredibly grateful.

I know that I'm going to disappoint some people, but I've lost all passion for the story. I don't feel that the story as I originally wrote is any good.

Honestly, if anyone does have any ideas, then please let me know. I need them.