HELLO GUYS , HAPPY SATURDAY!19 reviews again?! CRAZZZZZZY and I have new reviewers! I normally post the chapters at about 10/11pm my time and when I wake up my inbox is going crazy on my IPod. I'd just like to say thank you to all of you! 172 reviews in 13 chapters...28 until my goal by the time I post chapter 16
Thank you for all of you who replied to my questions, I've decided I'm going to stick to my original outcome, but that doesn't mean you won't get a few shocks along the way. Plus I love how you all like Jason! It's hard to write his character but it's obviously going well
Chapter Dedications: Okay guy's same as the last chapter. All of them are amazing, and definitely worth reading, so check them out, or else
xoxoteamjonasandedward4evaxoxo's fic two different worlds collide- LetTheRadioBreakTheSilence 's fic 'see you in the dark'!!
SunshineAtMidnight 's Best Friends and last but certainly not least Alyssa4Music4Life 's fic When you look me in the eyes. So there ya go! Thats my dedications for chapter 14
So without further wait here is chapter 14: SORRY FOR TYPO'S ITS 22:28 AND IM TIREEEEEDDD
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Mitchie POV
I bit my lip as I got out the car to look at the sight before me, this beach really was as beautiful as people had said, but this wasn't just any beach, it was the beach, the one where couples and potential couples go to, but maybe Nate didn't know this, after all I didn't want to ruin the gesture.
I looked across the sea to see the deep shades of red and orange reflecting off the clear turquoise water. I had heard so many things about this place, yet I had never been here myself, this was partly the reason why I had agreed to Nate's invitation in the first place. It might not come as much of a surprise for you to know that I am not particularly experienced in the boyfriend department... two boyfriends in all of my sixteen years, and neither of them lasted anymore than a couple of weeks. And why? Shane...either Shane had scared them off or apparently I was already involved in some sort of secret relationship with him. If only.
Nate opened the boot of his car and pulled out a brown wicker basket and a plaid blanket, before walking around the car and next to me.
"Come on then" he said as he began to walk off. Maybe I had watched too many chick flicks in my time but this seemed to be different from your usual friendly outing.
I followed him as we picked a spot a few metres from the car, before settling down on the blanket. I spaced out slightly as he began unpacking the food he had prepared himself. Ever since the end of class I couldn't help over analyse mine and Nate's relationship.
Over the past few weeks we've gone from absolutely nothing to spending every waking moment with each other. I had always had serious issues when it came to trusting people, but it was safe to say i trust Nate, i really do.
But did I see our relationship progressing any further? I don't know.
If you had asked me a month ago I would have called you crazy for even mentioning it, but now I wouldn't, hell I think I'd say yes.
"Mitchie, are you even listening to me?" I snapped out of my thoughts and looked at him completely clueless
"I'm sorry what?"
"I said do you like pasta?"
I nodded "Yeah...did you really make this yourself?"
"Yep" he smiled proudly, a smile that could make you go slightly weak at the knees.
I returned the smile as I stabbed a few pasta pieces with a fork and ate. God, he really knew how to cook "Since when have you been able to cook like this?"
He shrugged "My mom taught me" she obviously forgot to teach Shane, who cant even cook toast. I remember the time he almost electricuted himself after sticking a knife in the toaster to remove a slice of bread, whilst it was still toasting.
"Wow you really are full of surprises aren't you Mr Grey. First I discover that you're secretly a musical genius and now you can cook...What other hidden talents do you have?" as soon as I finished my sentence I realised how suggestive my tone had sounded.
"Ah, now that my dear Mitchie, that would be telling "he winked.
We ate in a comfortable silence, looking at the sun setting, stealing quick glances at one another. I couldn't help but over think every look, smile, movement.
I must have started shivering at some point as the next thing I knew I had Nate's leather jacket draping around my shoulders. I couldn't help but breathe in the scent of his cologne, that's one thing I was a sucker for...nice smelling men...and muscular arms. Which Nate ticked both boxes
Once we had finished I dragged Nate along the beach, I felt so full from dinner I felt the need to burn at least some of the calories off.
"I'm having a really nice time Nate, thank you" I said sincerely.
"Hey that's what I'm here for"
"No I mean it, Thank you for everything, you've been really great to me, and I really don't deserve it" I stopped and looked at my feet
"Hey, hey enough of that" he lifted my chin so I was now looking at him in eyes "you do deserve it, don't ever put yourself down. You're an amazing girl Mitch, don't forget that"
My eyes widened slightly, that was quite possibly the sweetest thing, anyone had ever said to me. I engulfed him in a bone crushing hug as I felt his arms wrap around my torso. I could stay like this for a long time. I pulled away, reluctantly and got on my tip toes and placed a quick kiss on his lips as a gesture of thanks, not caring at that particular moment, I was still caught up in the comment he had said to me.
I watched his face carefully as I watched for a reaction, now worried that he was still frozen to the spot. Oh god, I've lost another Grey brother.
"Nate I'm sorry, I should have never-" I was silenced as he placed a finger against my lips.
"Mitch, calm down" he shot me one of his famous smiles, instantly putting me at ease "Well that was the highlight of my evening"
I hit him playfully on the arm, it was mine too...
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2 weeks later...
Shane POV
Ever since I had told Jake about my feelings he's been acting different towards me, as if he was walking on egg shells around me. The Torres's siblings sure are complex. There wasn't a day that went past where I hadn't asked about Mitchie, and I always got the same answer 'She's fine, she has Nate' Yeah she has...Nate. My darling brother. The one who has seemed to have now devoted all of his time all to one certain girl....My Girl. Call me crazy but I'm sure he likes her again. And the last thing I need is a potential threat.
I hadn't spoken to Nate in two weeks, I don't know why, I guess I just didn't want to hear him gushing over his latest antics with Mitchie... and the last thing I wanted to hear about was the 'date'. I knew it had to be one, there was no way you would take a friend to the beach. I had taken several girls in my time there and not one of them ended without me getting lucky.
It made my stomach churn, the very thought of them, but hey I could be over reacting, it could really have been just a friendly outing. Unlikely, but possible, right?
I continue to pack the entire contents of my wardrobe into my suitcase, it was finally time to go back home. Halloween had always been my favourite holiday of the year, mainly because of mine and Mitchie's annual Halloween traditions, but I guess that tradition ended last year...
I had called Jason earlier in the day begging him to come with me; I didn't particularly fancy a whole week of being ignored and receiving a load of crap from my parents. And at least with Jason there wouldn't be a dull moment.
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Jason POV
I pulled my cell out of my pocket to see Shane's name illuminating the screen, I answered before it had a chance to ring a second time
"HELLOOOOOOOOOO!"I said a little too enthusiastically, but it couldn't be helped, no one ever called me on my cell, besides my mum and my network operator.
"Hi Jason."
"How are you on this fine day Mr 'Slash my wrists and black my eyes'" Oh I'm funny.
"Very funny." SEE! "Anyway I was wondering what you're doing next week..."
I thought long and hard, well I was going to go bird watching and maybe have a shower or two... "Nothing that can't wait..."
"Great! How do you fancy coming back home with me for the week?"
OH MY GOD I'M GOING TO MEET SHANE'S PARENTS! WHAT IF THEY DONT LIKE ME? OH MY GOD, WHAT DO I WEAR?
"Err...SURE!" Brilliant, I was going to spend the week with Shane! We could play guitar hero, we could practise our music...We could play cludeo! This is better than an invitation to Disney land
"Great! Well get packing, we've got to leave tonight, I promised my mom I'd arrive before dark"
"Okay Great see you later" I ended the call and jumped up and down a few times. I ran out of my bedroom, through living room and towards my closet pulling out my leopard print suitcase, better get packing!
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I dragged my suitcase to Shane's car to see him tapping at his steering wheel singing along to the radio, I wish I could drive, but I've never been good with transportation. I remember when I was 16 I got on a bus to take me to the supermarket to collect some shopping for my mom, I ended up at a supermarket, just 45km away from home.
I got in the passenger's seat and closed the door behind me
"You ready?" he asked
"ROADDDDDDDDDDDD TRIPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!"
Shane rolled his eyes at me before pulling away, why wasn't he as excited as me?
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"I spy with my little eye something beginning with... C"
"Err I don't know...Car?"
"OH MY GOD ARE YOU PYSCHIC?" I asked, completely blown away
"Yes, Jason, Yes I am, it's not like we're on a busy motorway or anything full of cars..."
"Okay AGAIN AGAIN! I spy with my little eye something beginning with C"
Shane groaned "Car?"
"YES! YOU ROCK AT THIS GAME"
"So do you Jason, so do you"
The rest of the journey consisted of fun filled car games, including the number plate game, and that one where you create a story about the people in the car next door. I was having a blast, I wasn't so sure about Shane though; he didn't seem to contribute much.
We pulled up outside of what must have been his house as I looked around in awe, it was big! I got out the car and dragged my suitcase along the pavement whilst Shane shot me a weird look
"What?" I asked
"Jason. Why on earth do you have a leopard print suitcase?"
"Why don't you?" I shot back. I thought it was rather trendy
"Because I'm a man..."
My jaw dropped "Excuse me I'm just as much of a man as you are" I protested
"Of course you are...I'm sorry for ever saying such a thing"
"Apology accepted"
"Right time to face the music"
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Nate POV
I sat on one side of the bed as Mitchie leaned up against me scribbling away in her notebook. God knows what she was writing.
I strummed effortlessly on my guitar, I still hadn't told her how I felt, I hadn't had the balls. Our 'date' went great, scrap that it went better than expected. I've had several opportunities since then to just put myself out there and confess everything. Yet I didn't. Why? Because I was a coward.
But it was getting more and more difficult.
"Mitch?" I asked as he raised her head from her notebook and looked directly at me
"Yeah?"
"I-I-" Smooth Nate, just stutter over your words why don't you
She raised an eyebrow at me. Okay lets weigh out the options; verbalise everything and watch her run away OR kiss her and then watch her run away...
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Shane POV
I entered the house with Jason in tow, my parents were out and the house seemed pretty quiet. Nate must be out.
"We'll just drop our stuff in my room to begin with, Oh I'll warn you I share a room with my brother, so you'll be on the floor, sorry"
"Don't worry about it!"
I laughed, Jason seemed to see the positive out of every situation. I began to climb the stairs to see the bedroom door slightly open, the light cracking through. Music blaring from the room. Nate must be in.
I glanced behind me to see Jason lugging his 'attractive' suitcase up the stairs with a pained expression across his face. I laughed to myself as I reached the top, helping Jason, he really needed to work on his stamina.
I opened the door slightly as my eye widened. I froze, my heart pounding in my chest at a million beats per second, I couldn't believe it...Nate...Mitchie...
"Dude, stop gawping at your brother sucking face with his girl"
So there you go! HAAAA SHANE CAUGHT THEM OUT! I'M EVIL! SO YOU KNOW THE DRILL ...11 REVIEWS TIL THE NEXT CHAPTER! TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK, IT MEANS ALOT!
QUESTION: MORE SARAH? Anyone who you want more POV from, More jake? Caitlyn? another OC?
SPOLILERS:
FIGHT!
JASON POV
JASON LIKES HALLOWEEN LOL.
JASON PLAYS JESUS (not literally, more like a peacemaker, but imagine Jason as a biblical figure...)
BASICALLY THIS IS A CHAPTER EVOLVING AROUND JASON, IT WILL BE LITTERALLY ALL HIM (BESIDES A LIL NATE AND SHANE). Which I'm sure many of you will love