Ah so I've come up with the whole plot for the sequel today when I was supposed to doing my math. All I can say is that it's going to shock the shit out of you. So I have a QUESTION: NEW STORY FOR SEQUEL OR CONTINUE THIS STORY AND MAKE THE SEQUEL PART 2:?
Anyway thanks for all the alerts/favourites and reviews! i love them! keep them up and i'll keep writing!
Chapter dedications. : xoxoteamjonasandedward4evaxoxo's fic two different worlds collide (NOW COMPLETED!!!) and the sequel 'unexpected love' please give it a read, its full of drama and will keep you on the edge of your seat.
.Also SunshineAtMidnight's fic Best friends, which is now completed, i love this fic, and she better write a sequel or i'll hunt her down!
ANDDDDDDDDD! LetTheRadioBreakTheSilence's fic Bad girl, this is actualy amazing, read it or else! for the NITCHIE shippers!
and last but not least ilovejoe15's fic angel and devil! i adore this fic, and i need her to update cos i'm dying of anticipation
-sorry for typo's well im not that sorry. disclaimer: i do not own camp rock or any of the jonas' but when i do become world leader, Nick will be mine
MITCHIE POV
I hate birthdays. It's just like any other day but you are reminded that you are officially one year older, therefore nearer death. Aren't I the optimist today? Okay so maybe I'm slightly more pessimistic then I usually am but I have a good enough reason- I'm a coward. Okay thats not good reason but still.
I'm A stupid fucking coward.
Why?
Because I still haven't told him.
I had prepared myself to confess everything on the day of his discharge from hospital, but was ruined by the one and only bitch extraordinaire – Sarah. Sure I knew he loved me. God that feels weird to say, and he knows that I like him...kind of, but we were not yet at the stage to determine whether or not we were still 'just friends' or in a relationship.
The tension had been building up between us more and more as the days passed, our feelings on the tips of both of our tounges , but the ball was now in my court. And just like typical stupid Mitchie, I was prolonging the pain for no viable reason.
But hey today I'm 17. And it's going to be a good day, it has to be.
I rolled over as the sunlight streamed through my curtains momentarily blinding me, I cautiously opened my eyes as I tried to adjust myself to the light. I pulled myself up into a sitting position as I heard heavy footsteps racing up my stair case, I glanced at the clock- 7:45, who the hell is awake at 7:45 on a Sunday morning!?
My question was answered as the door burst open revealing a beaming Jason, still dressed in his pyjamas. Honestly how can anyone have the balls to leave the house, dressed in an all in one pyjama set with the face of the cookie monster plastered all over them.
"HAPPY BIRTHDAY MITCHIEEEEEEEEEE!" I laughed as he was practically jumping around the room before throwing himself at me with open arms.
"Thanks...but Jason I can't breathe" I struggled slightly, trying to loosen myself from the arms of Jason. As much as I love his hugs, I don't love being crushed to death.
He automatically loosened his grip "Sorry! I didn't hurt you did I?" his eyes widened with alarm
"No! I'm fine" I reassured him as his expression softened significantly
"So...What's it like being 17?" he asked curiously as he sat the end of my bed cross legged
I rolled my eyes at his comment, I love Jason but he is such an air head "Jason, you've been 17 as well you know... not long ago"
"Oh yeah! I forgot"
"Sure you did"
"So what's the birthday girl got planned on her special day?"
"Nothing" and that was the truth, for the past 48 hours I've been avoided by both Shane and Nate, like I had some sort of vile disease. Every time I had, texted, called or even knocked on their door to arrange something for my birthday I was either ignored or sent straight to voicemail. Nice to know that your friends care.
"Oh" he said a little taken back "Well good because I'm taking you out, this is going to be a birthday you'll never forget"
I raised my eyebrow intrigued, a birthday I'll never forget aye?
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NATE POV
I ran around the house, between rooms trying to organise everything the best I could. Today was the one and only Mitchie Torres' birthday and Shane, Jason and I had all agreed that it had to be the best yet. Shane especially felt it necessary to make sure she had the most amazing, unforgettable birthday as not only a symbol for his love for her, but also as a form of apology for all the shit he's put her through these past months.
Yep I know Shane loves her and do I like it? Not at all, but even though as much as I like Mitchie, a part of me knows I could never love her to the extent Shane obviously does. Don't get me wrong, I love her and she's the bestest friend I could wish for, but I'm not in love with her.
So just how were we going to make this such an amazing birthday for her? Why throw a party of course. We didn't want to give anything away so we've ignored her for the last two days, and it practically killed Shane. So whilst Shane and I got the house together and invited all of Mitchies family and friends, Jason has whisked her off for an all expensed day to the mall, courtesy of her parents.
"Shane are you just going to sit there or are you actually going to do something useful?"
"If you haven't noticed I'm still in a bloody wheelchair, so yes I'll be sitting"
"Well then, whilst I sort out the food, music and everything else, you can blow up the balloons" I threw him a large carrier bag full of balloons waiting to be blown up. I exited the room into the hallway when I heard
"Nate! There's hundreds of balloons in here, I'll never get through all of them" he shouted
"Well, you better shut up and try"
I walked through into the kitchen, opening the adjoining doors into a large function room that we barely ever used. I picked up the numerous bags of decorations and banners. Let's get this show on the road.
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MITCHIE POV
"Jase where exactly are we going?" I asked the question for the millionth time we sat in the back of a taxi, after all Jason can't drive. It was now 10am I was still awaiting a birthday text or call from the Grey brothers. Ever since I can remember I could barely get to 9 o clock before I had Shane on the phone or in my kitchen wishing me a happy birthday, why is he so distant this year?
"Well, we're going to the mall" he said simply
"Why? I have no money"
"Ah that's where you're wrong" I looked at him confused as he pulled out a crisp white envelope from his pocket "You're parents said to give it to you once we are out of the house."
I carefully took it from his grasp before turning it over and opening in it, my eyes widening as I saw what was lying inside. 10 crisp $50 dollar notes.
"This is from my parents?" I asked completely shocked. My parents never spent this much on me. Sure they weren't tight but $500 that's crazy!
He nodded "They said you've not had the easiest time recently, plus you're doing really well at school and you deserve to get something nice for yourself"
I shuffled the notes in my hands happily, never in my life have I been in possession with this much money at once.
We arrived at the Mall where Jason pulled out a $20 bill and paid the driver before escorting me out "Now let's shop till we drop" he said enthusiastically as I laughed
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"Oh my God this is so cute, Mitchie you should totally buy it" I turned around from browsing numerous rails of dresses and tops to see Jason holding a pair of patient deep purple heels along with a purple Grecian style dress.
Admittedly it looked amazing, but still I couldn't help but smile at Jason's comment, he would make such an amazing girl.
I walked towards him and took the dress out of his grasp "You know it is pretty cute"
"You should so try it on!"
I nodded before taking the dress and heels into the nearest changing room. I opened the door to see Jason looking at me in awe
"You look amazing Mitchie"
I looked into the full length mirror, admiring my appearance, hell I did look good! And look at my legs, it's as if they go on for miles.
"Jason I actually love it"
"Good, well I'll buy it for you, my gift to you"
I gasped "No! I can't let you do that it comes to like $95!"
"Mitchie please, I want to"
I sighed in defeat "Okay, but at least let me buy you a pretzel to say thanks"
"DEAL!!!!!!!!!"
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NATE POV
I looked at the room in satisfaction, it looked good, gold and silver balloons scattered everywhere along with a large banner reading 'Happy Birthday Mitchie! X'. Shane rolled himself into the room nodding
"Nice" he said obviously impressed "Very nice indeed Nate, she's going to love it." He continued to look around the room, his eyes settling on the make shift stage
"Do you think she'll like our surprise present?" he asked
"Of course she will, she will totally not expect it"
Now I'll let you into a little bit of a secret, after little persuasion from Jason, Shane and I had agreed that the three of us should perform a few songs that Shane and I had wrote tonight at Mitchie's party. And we sound pretty damn good. Shane and I would sing vocals as well as guitar whilst Jason will play various other instruments.
I glanced at the clock on the wall- 5:50, party started at 7 and guests would arrive at 6:30 to get ready for Mitchie's surprise, well I hope it's still a surprise, after all Jason does have a rather loose mouth when it comes to secrets.
"C'mon we better start getting ready"
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JASON POV
I dragged myself up Mitchie's porch, my arms full of bags from various shops that Mitchie had been in and brought endless amounts of clothes. I knew girls liked to shop, but jeez! Who knew one girl would need this amount of clothes. I swear she could clothe a small country.
As we entered her house I glanced at the clock- 6pm, perfect.
"Mitch" I called from the hallway as she exited the living room
"Yeah?" she turned around to face me
"Go and put on that dress and heels" I stated
"Why?"
"Because I said so" This was hard. I wanted to tell her about the party, about everything, but if I did I wouldn't get the smiley faced pancakes Nate and Shane had promised me. Life was unfair.
"Okay..." I handed her the bag and nudged her up the stairs. As soon as she was out of sight I pulled off my shirt, pulling another one from my back pack. I slipped on the crisp grey shirt, and tied a tie casually around my neck.
I threw myself down on the sofa and watched the clock tick by slowly, how long does it take girls to get ready?
Fifty five minutes later, Mitchie stood at the doorway, wearing the outfit I had brought her earlier in the day, her hair curled loosely and her make up done. If I wasn't that way inclined, I would certainly try my luck with her.
"How do I look?" she asked as she twirled around
"Like $95"
She laughed "Thanks Jason...I guess"
I smiled "No Mitch you look amazing, you're going to knock Shane off his feet...if he was on his feet, but seeming as he's in a wheelchair maybe you'll knock his wheelchair over...But that would hurt..."
"Okay, okay stop the rambling Jason and tell me what's going on"
I walked up to her offering her my arm as she accepted apprehensively "Well you are about to find out"
With my free hand I pulled out my cell phone, ringing Nate before hanging up.
Let's get this party started.
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SHANE POV
"She's coming! Everybody hide" Nate called, as we all scurried around the room. Unfortunately that wasn't as easy as it sounded for me so I simply rolled myself behind the door.
The room fell silent as we heard the front door open "Jason why are we in the Greys empty house?" I couldn't help but purse my lips shut as I heard Mitchie's curious voice. Jason managed to keep his secret. I'm impressed.
As soon as we heard footsteps enter the room. Nate switched the lights on as we all leapt from our hiding places and shouted "SURPRISE!"
I watched as her mouth fell open in shock "What the...." she couldn't finish her sentence, she just continued to scan the room along with the various faces, before her gaze fell on me and Nate. She grabbed Jason's hand and pulled him over to us
"Guys, did you do this?" she asked
We all nodded, our faces plastered with big grins "Happy Birthday Mitch" Nate said as he hugged Mitchie, causing a pang of jealousy to surge through me
"Sorry we didn't say it earlier" I added "We didn't want to risk blurting out the surprise to you"
"Well now it all makes sense, I thought you were ignoring me! I was getting upset. And Jason" she looked around to face him "How the hell did you manage to keep this a secret all day?"
"Pancakes" he answered simply
"What?" she laughed
"They promised me pancakes if I kept quiet"
"Typical Jay"
"You look great Mitch" I couldn't help but comment on her appearance, if I thought she couldn't get any more beautiful, she just proved me wrong.
She blushed "Thanks"
"LETS GET THIS PARTY STARTED" Jason shouted, pressing play on the music system.
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MITCHIE POV
The party was now in full swing as people danced and ate, all enjoying themselves. I was never a big fan of parties, but this is by far the best party I've been too. I continued dancing, with a can of Dr Pepper in my hands until the music abruptly stopped.
Nate walked up to a microphone at the front of the room, getting everyone's attention. Oh god he better not be saying a speech
"Everybody, Shane, Jason and I have another surprise for the birthday girl" What? "Come on out guys. I watched as Shane and Jason made their way out on to what appears to be a make shift Stage carrying various instruments and Microphones as Nate quickly grabbed a keyboard and placed it on its stand.
They all adjusted themselves on the stage before Nate spoke again "If you hadn't of already guessed we're going to play a few songs that Shane wrote recently, happy birthday Mitch"
"1,2,3,4"
The music started playing, the soft melody travelling through the room as Nate's voice delivered the lyrics
Well you done done me and you bet I felt it
I tried to be chill but you're so hot that I melted
I fell right through the cracks
and now I'm trying to get back
Before the cool done run out
I'll be giving it my best test
Nothing's going to stop me but divine intervention
I reckon it's again my turn to win some or learn some
I smiled as Shane opened his mouth and sung. I knew he could write songs, but this was amazing!
I won't hesitate no more, no more
It cannot wait, I'm yours
Well open up your mind and see like me
Open up your plans and damn you're free
Look into your heart and you'll find love love love
Listen to the music of the moment maybe sing with me
A lá peaceful melody
It's your God-forsaken right to be loved love loved love loved
So I won't hesitate no more, no more
It cannot wait I'm sure
There's no need to complicate
Our time is short
This is our fate, I'm yours
I've been spending way too long checking my tongue in the mirror
And bending over backwards just to try to see it clearer
My breath fogged up the glass
And so I drew a new face and laughed
I guess what I'ma saying is there ain't no better reason
To rid yourself of vanity and just go with the seasons
It's what we aim to do
Our name is our virtue
I won't hesitate no more, no more
It cannot wait I'm sure
There's no need to complicate
Our time is short
this is our fate, I'm yours
Well no no, well open up your mind and see like me
Open up your plans and damn you're free
Look into your heart and you'll find the sky is yours
Listen to the music of the moment come and dance with me
A lá one big family
A lá happy family;
A lá peaceful melody
It's your God-forsaken right to be loved love love love
I won't hesitate no more, no more
It cannot wait, I'm sure
There's no need to complicate
Our time is short
This is our fate, I'm yours
No please, don't complicate
Our time is short
This is our fate, I'm yours
No please, don't hesitate
no more, no more
It cannot wait
The sky is yours!
I swayed, danced and bopped along to the rest of the songs the boys played, totally taken back at how good they sounded together, if I hadn't of known I would have thought they were an actual professional band.
As they finished their set they all rushed over to me, awaiting my verdict
"You were amazing!" I stated over enthusiastically "Did you really write those songs?"
Shane nodded "Except for the last two, Nate wrote those"
I looked at him shocked "Look Nate, I'm really getting fed up of discovering all these musical talents you posses. You tell me you don't see a future in music, well I think you should wake up and realise that you my dear friend are a musical genius and it'll be a crime to humanity if you don't share it with the world"
Nate laughed "We'll see" I nodded in satisfaction before turning to Shane
"Shane do you mind if we go outside for a bit, it's getting really hot in here" I asked as he nodded. We made our way through the people and into the porch, the moon illuminating the night sky.
"Shane, thank you for tonight" I said sincerely "You guys were amazing, you should totally join forces, create a band and claim world domination."
He laughed lightly "Maybe and I'm glad you enjoyed tonight, you deserved it" I bent down and wrapped my arms around his neck, pulling him into a tight but gentle embrace
The cool night air sent shivers up my spine as I continued to hug Shane; this was it, the perfect moment to finally tell Shane,
I pulled back slightly, looking at him, my arms still wrapped around his neck
"Shane"
"Yeah?" I could practically feel his breath tickling my cheek
"I- I need to tell you something" he remained silent looking at me in the eyes "Shane Grey, I love you"
I didn't need to wait for a reply as the wide grin that formed across his face said it all "You don't realise how long I've been waiting for you to say that Mitch"
"You and me both" I joked, it was as if a huge weight had been lifted off my shoulders.
We fell silent, not taking our eyes off one another as if our lives depended on it. I felt my heart rate race as he began to lean in, closing the distance between us.
Our lips met in a soft yet forceful kiss, both of us finally releasing the feelings and tension be had been bottling up for so long.
We both pulled away with goofy smiles upon our face once we realised we needed air
"I've just got one more thing to ask you Miss Torres"
"And what would that be Mr Grey"
"Would you do the honour of becoming my girlfriend?"
I mocked thought for a moment before letting another wide smile spread across my lips "Of course"
This has been the Best. Birthday. Ever.
So guys she's admitted it, he's admitted it, they love each other. Also did you like how all three guys performed together...funny that, I swear there's a fictional band with a Nate, Jason and Shane in...Hmm I wonder what I could be up to.
Only a couple for chapters left for this part but I've got the sequel planned ...kind of, and it's going to be good. Expect a summary for it very soon! I'm really excited for it; it's such a big twist!
Anyway you got me to 437, a little short of my 440 goal, but oh well; still amazing to get 18 reviews in one chapter...I'd love 455 by the time I update on Wednesday/Thursday time. That's 18 reviews
QUESTION: LOOK AT THE TOP A/N AND ARE YOU LOOKING FORWARD TO THE SEQUEL EVEN THOUGH YOU DONT KNOW HOW THIS PART WILL END?
SPOILERS:
OFFICAL SMITCHIE
NATE- WHO'S THE GIRL?
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