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Chapter 26
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I sighed.
"All right Renge... That's enough..." I said. Renge looked at me, flashlight in hand.
"What?"
"All you're doing is scaring him." I looked at Nekozawa. "Let's face it... You can't make him princely."
At least not in personality...
"That's ridiculous! Anyone can have a character reformation!" She said. She looked me up and down. "You're next"
"What?! What's wrong with my character?" I demanded. She looked at me smugly.
"You have no character. You're one-sided. Flat, you might say." She said. She sat the flashlight down.
"That's not true." Nekozawa said quietly. We both ignored him.
"Those are fighting words Renge" I said. Renge and I were on the verge of a fight when the door opened. It was Kirimi. She peered in and immediately began tearing up.
"It's so dark in here." She whined. Tamaki immediately swept her into his arms. He smiled and lifted her up.
"See? No more scary darkness" he smiled at her sweetly. I couldn't help but smile at him.
He'd make a good father...
Haruhi walked in after her. She sighed.
"I've read aloud to her around 50 manga volumes the past three days." Haruhi sighed.
"You're a good man Haruhi..." I said.
Well, a good girl...
"I am a wonderful princely brother."
I turned around. Nekozawa was pointing the flashlight at himself. I gasped.
"I am a wonderful princely brother." He said again.
"No Nekozawa don't be a hero!" I said. I started to dive towards him.
These cigarettes are making me loopy.
Too late. Nekozawa switched on the flashlight. I closed my eyes as my body made contact with the floor. I waited for the screams to start. When I didn't hear them I opened my eyes. I smiled. Nekozawa was shining the flashlight on himself.
Light: 1 Darkness: 0
"Kirimi. I'm not your brother after all... Your real brother is over there." He smiled and set her down. She turned around, her hair swishing behind her.
Come on Nekozawa this is your big chance!
Nekozawa turned around, the upward light from the flashlight made him look ghastly. Kirimi shivered. A shiver ran up my spine. It was creepy. Kirimi fled screaming monster.
I patted Nekozawa on the shoulder.
"Better luck next time" I said. He looked up at me.
"Thanks."
The Hitachiins opened the curtains a little.
"Isn't that Kirimi? Oh... look... a cat..." said Hitachiin #1.
Nekozawa rushed to the window.
"Kirimi hates cats!"
"I'll go get her" I offered. I turned to the door.
Crash!
"Kirimi!"
Please tell me he didn't just do what I thought he did...
I turned around. There was a big gaping hole in the window.
Of course he did.
And thus the episode of Kirimi and Nekozawa came to a close.
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I wasn't sure how to end this so... this is what you get... sorry... Please review!