I'm so sorry about this but I've decided to redo this story, I've become better at writing with my other stories I've been doing but I'll be leaving this one up as a reminder of how I use to be. There was only going to be one chapter left anyway. And now redoing it from the start I can change a lot of things and make it better. So keep an eye out for the revised version. Thank you for reading this story and maybe you should check out my other stories.
Lestat the Lil Thief- a Jackie Chan Adventures story that revolves around a half vampire thief named Lestat and Jade
Fight4Heart- I know not many people like care bears but I grew up watching the cartoon and despite being over 21 I still like the old series, don't like the new ones that much. But this story is about a group of cousins who fight monsters instead of teaching others to care, it does have the other bears and cousins in it as well as including the first two movies.
Hmm I guess I can include a teaser of the new version
"hi who are you?" the young three horn's tail wags as if the raptor wasn't deadly, the three horn's sister just stays behind her brother.
The raptor, confused, tilts his head. "my name is Tyran, and you really shouldn't approach me, or any that look like me."
the two three horns back up slightly seeing his teeth, but they remain curious as to what he's doing. "you're a sharp teeth? Why are you just laying there, shouldn't you be looking for food?"
now beyond confused Tyran stands up, the three horn kids only a bit smaller then him. "I've eaten already, and if I hadn't then you'd probably make good meals."
the two take a step back, "wondering away from your herd's protection. That is what gets you killed when my kind is around. And now," Tyran inhales then exhales in a screech before turning and running.