Hello readers and welcome to the first chapter of the Maelstrom of Cocoon, a challenge given by ThePyschoPath96. Here the rules for the challenge:
Rules so you must include these options
Naruto had a crush on Lightning but Lightning also has crush on him and years later they still have a crush on each other
You must have Snow, Lightning and Serah punch Naruto in the face or in Serah case slap him across the face when they are reunited.
Naruto and Lightning Pairing and must confess to each other in the story
No Harem
Naruto must have Aero, Thunder, Water, Light and Dark element
Hope will see Naruto as a brother figure
Naruto is a dual swordsmen
Naruto is a smoker and Lightning doesn't approve
Lightning can be jealous when some girls are around Naruto like flirting
Naruto canon world doesn't exist so no Chakra or Shinobi
The Jinchuuriki must each have an amulet and doing their part to protect it
The amulets must be a key to keep something locked up like a God or a terrible monster
Optional so it's your choice if you want to add these options so really its your choice
Naruto can save Nora (Hope's mother) on the way and she decided to go with Naruto in hope of finding Hope and decide rather she is a L'cie or not
Can have Lightning and Fang or another girl like Yugito or Fuu be a rival for Naruto love
Can have the Akatsuki chase after Naruto and the other Jinchuuriki for their amulet
Naruto swords can be Oath Keeper and Oblivion and can have them combined to make 2 become one (the Two Become One Keyblade)
You can only have one or two jinchuriki be in the group if you want like Gaara, Killer B or Yagura.
Naruto Eidolon can be Hades that turned into a dragon or be Kurama that transform into a the nine tails fox
The other eight Jinchuriki can be l'Cie
Pairing
Naruto x Lightning
Snow x Serah
Hope x Vanille
Others are optional if you decided to add some characters in or choose to save Nora or include the jinchuuriki
Phoenix: YO Phoenix here with spirit. We are bringing you this challenge and really interesting and now I will hand it over to spirit.
Spirit: Thank you. When Pyscho told of me of the challenge, I got interested. I told him that I will do this after I finish with at least one or two of my stories and I intend to keep that promise.
Phoenix: Speaking of stories well will be working on more trust me Spirit will not do it alone.
Spirit: Thanks Phoenix. I appreciate it. Also, I would advise the readers to check out a Naruto and Percy Jackson crossover called "The Dark Angels". A story where Naruto is a son of Artemis, but the elemental nation, chakra, or shinobis don't exist in the story. The pairing is Naruto x Zoe.
Phoenix: Oh man I love that story it is a good story.
Spirit: I see you read it to Phoenix. I'm helping Pyscho with the grammar of the story, mostly with the periods and commas. So again, check it out. You'll like it. So, enjoy.
By the way, hello to any new readers.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto or Final Fantasy XIII
Chapter 1: Maelstrom of Cocoon
Cocoon was built by the Fal'Cie many centuries ago under the premise of protecting humanity from the savage world of Pulse. The current population of Cocoon numbers in the tens of millions, although the exact number is unknown. Cocoon is home to many futuristic cities, such as the capital of Eden, the port city of Palumpolum, the beach town of Bodhum, and the carnival city of Nautilus.
There are expansive highroads located in the Hanging Edge, the exotic nature reserve of the Sunleth Waterscape, and ruined city of Bresha located on the outer-rim of Cocoon, but due to the fall of the Fal'Cie Anima,the lake near Bresha is crystallized.
Five centuries later, a Great War between Cocoon and Gran Pulse was waged called the War of Transgression. Little is known about the war, but it is responsible for the large crack in Cocoon's outer shell which exposes its interior.
The people of Gran Pulse believe Cocoon to be a false paradise built by the devil Lindzei, who lured people to live there with sweet promises only to enslave them and steal their souls. Gran Pulse inhabitants see the people of Cocoon as impending intruders and the source of evil in the world. Similarly, the people of Cocoon are made to believe Pulse is an aspect of hell, and its forces are poised to invade their beautiful world.
Cocoon is an artificial world built and powered by the Fal'Cie, who are responsible for running everything from the artificial sun, Phoenix, that provides the world with light and warmth and controls the weather, to cultivating the land and providing food and water, to keeping the world of Cocoon floating within Gran Pulse's atmosphere.
Cocoon has over eight million Fal'Cie. The Fal'Cie Eden maintains Cocoon's complex operational systems, and is itself powered by Fal'Cie Orphan that resides in a deep sleep in Orphan's Cradle, an alternate dimension created by Eden.
But inside Cocoon is a fourth Fal'Cie. One that is more powerful than Pulse, Lindzei, or Etro. He is called Konton.
Konton is one of the strongest and most skilled Fal'Cie. He has pure black armor, red skin and eyes. He wields a blade of fire. He craves only the thing, the thing he is named for, Chaos.
Konton didn't care for the humans. He wanted to control them, to use them as play toys for him to break, to rein chaos on them. The other Fal'Cie wouldn't let him, but he didn't care what they thought, and so the four fought.
It was a chaotic battle. The three Fal'Cie couldn't defeat him and were forced to retreat. Konton went into Cocoon and wreak havoc on the humans. Destroy buildings, fought the soldiers there, slaughter women and children. But soon, stop them.
A L'Cie was chosen by three Fal'Cie to seal up Konton and save Cocoon. The L'Cie created nine special amulets. One can weaken Konton and take away one/ninth of his power. All nine can seal him.
So he led Konton into a trap, using himself as bait, and getting Konton into the trap. He activated the amulets with the three Fal'Cie powers and manages to lock Konton inside the ground of Cocoon. But Konton manage to fatally wound him before he was sealed. With the last of his strength, the L'Cie got nine people to protect the amulet from anyone at any cost. Their children, grandchildren, and descendants will carry the amulet as well.
And one of those descendants was Naruto Uzumaki, the wielder of the Fox Amulet.
(Cocoon)
"NARUTO, GET BACK HERE!"
"YOU'VE DONE IT AGAIN!"
"JUST WAIT TILL WE GET OUR HANDS ON YOU!"
Four PSICOM are chasing a blonde hair boy with blue eyes and whisker marks on his cheeks at the markets in the Bodhum. The boy is wearing a red leather jacket with an orange shirt and black jeans. He's riding on a hovering skateboard and has a big grin on his face. Why, because he got another successful prank on his mind. Oh, and his name is Naruto Namikaze.
"Come on, you couldn't catch me all the other time!" Naruto called out to them, "What make you think you can catch me now!" He speed up and went to an alley and the PSICOM follow him a few minutes later. The PSICOM went through the alley and when they couldn't any sign of him, they split up to search for him. They didn't see a part of the wall peel out like wallpaper, revealing Naruto.
"Hehe, the always fail for it," Naruto said, snicker quietly to himself. That always been his free time when he isn't training or hanging out with his friends. Pranking the hell out of the PSICOM. Speaking of his friends, he went on his skateboard and sped off, careful not to run to any of the PSICOM. He going to meet up with everyone.
It took a few minutes and couple of evading from PSICOM, but he manage to make it to his meeting spot. A outdoor restaurant with tables and seating booth. There he saw all of his friends.
He saw Snow in one of the table, with his arm around Serah who is sitting right beside. At another table is Lightning, who is giving Snow a glare that could scare a bear. The group, NORA, is at the seating booths. Everyone is chatting with one another.
"Hey guys, I'm here!" Naruto called out, getting off his board. They all turn to see him walking towards them. Snow grin and wave, along with Gadot.
"Just in time Naruto," Snow said, as the blonde hair boy sat with Lightning. The girl blush a little, but didn't say anything. "Where were you? You was nearly late?"
Naruto grin his famous troublemaker grin and pointed to the TV. Everyone look at the TV to see the news coming on.
"And today, we found that the PSICOM base is cover with hentaii photos, from the outside to the inside." The reporter said, and she show the base cover with hentaii pictures, from the outside to the in. "Some think that the PSICOM turn perverted. Others, thinks that it is another prank from Naruto Namikaze." Everyone, once again, turn to Naruto who is still grinning. There were different reactions.
Snow and Gadot laugh and gave Naruto a thumb up, Maqui laugh really hard that he nearly fell out of his seat, Yuj smirk in amusement, and the girls gave Naruto disapproving stares.
"Man Naruto," Snow said, still laughing. "You never seem to have a end of pranks. PSICOM is not going to live this down," Naruto smile and gave a thumbs up until Lightning bonk him on the head. He let out a loud "OWW!" that many people heard.
Naruto rub his head and groan, a red bump on the middle, "What was that for Lightning?" Naruto complained. Lightning gave a chastise glare.
"That's for doing another prank," Lightning scolded, "The PSICOM don't take those things lightly and one day, they're going to catch you for one of those pranks." Despite her scolding tone, Naruto, Snow, and Serah heard the hint of worry in the voice.
Naruto gave Lightning a one arm hug, making the girl blush. "No need to worry Light." the boy said in a lighthearted, but soft tone, "I've been careful when it comes to pranking. If I hadn't been caught before, I won't be caught now." Lightning smile and return Naruto's one arm hug with a quick full hug. The others share a knowing look. They all know of Naruto's and Lightning's crush on each other.
Soon, they all got more comfortable and talk about different things. Snow stole kisses from Serah when Lightning isn't looking and when she does see them, she give him her famous glare, making Naruto and the other laugh a little.
Soon, it was evening and the sun was setting, getting everyone to go back to their house.
"Meet each other tomorrow? Same time, same place?" Naruto ask. Everyone nodded in agreement. "Alright, see you guys tomorrow." With that, Naruto went off on his board. Snow and Serah shared a goodbye kiss, much to Lightning chagrin, before Snow left with the group, NORA. Lightning and Serah was the last to leave.
"So when are you going to admit you have a crush on Naruto?" Serah asked. Lightning blush and glare at her, making her giggle. It real fun seeing her sister being in denial.
"I don't have a crush on him!" Lightning exclaimed which only made Serah giggle more. "Why do you always think I have a crush on him, Serah?"
"Because you blush every time he compliment you or put his arms around you," Serah shot back, making Lightning blush more. "I also hear you say Naruto's name in your sleep." If possible, Lightning just turn into a Christmas light bulb.
So all the way home, Serah kept on teasing her sister even more while Lightning stay red the whole way.
Meanwhile, Naruto kept riding his way home, avoiding any PSICOM near him. It was incredibly easy to do so, since half the PSICOM can't find their own way to their house. After a couple of minutes, he finally got to his house.
His home isn't really that fancy. Just a one story house, with two bedrooms, a kitchen and living room con
nected, and three bathrooms. His mom didn't want to be in a large building, so they got this small home.
"Mom, dad, I'm home!" Naruto called out inside the house. He expected some kind of response, but there was none. "Mom? Dad?"
He started looking. He looks in the kitchen, but they weren't there. He looks inside all the rooms, but they weren't in any of them. The more he looks, the more he began to worry. His parents always came out at this hour, after their time with the Guardian Corp. When he checks all around the house, he decided to check at the backyard. They got to be there. So he went outside, hoping to see them at the backyard, but when he did, he didn't saw anybody.
"Where can they be?" Naruto mumbled, moving inside. He eyes burrow in worry, thinking that something important might've happened or an accident. But that would've been on the news by now. When he walks back in the living room, he saw something on the living room table that piques his interest. It was a blood red amulet, shape like a fox. Why hadn't he notice that before? Oh yeah, because he was focus on finding his parents.
When he picks the amulet up, he felt something. It felt chaos and mischief in there, wrapped into one. He felt like a powerful wind was blowing at him. Something powerful is in there, something dangerous.
He stares at thing, trying to see if there is any opening. He look around it, but there is nothing to indicate that there's a secret storage compartment in it. Then, the strangest thing happen with the amulet.
The eyes opened, revealing red pupils with black slits.
"What the hell?!" Naruto shouted, dropping the amulet like it was poison. But the amulet floated up, staring at the boy unblinking. This is really strange. Naruto felt the urge to run away from the freaky jewelry, but stand still. Running away isn't his way, unless it's to outsmart the PSICOM. The amulet moved around him in circle two or three times, before moving back to the blond.
"So you are the holder," The amulet spoke, making Naruto nearly freak out again. The red jewel can speak as well?! "Hello Naruto Namikaze. My name is Kurama, the Kitsune amulet."
Naruto started getting out of his shock and then started speaking, "How are you speaking?" The blonde stare fiercely at the amulet, "And where are my parents? I swear, if you did anything to them…"
"Don't bother with the threat," The amulet said, rolling it's eyes, "I can't be destroyed. A lot of people tried to do it, but failed. How am I speaking, I honestly don't know. Probably something to do with my creator. And as for your parents, I don't know. They're not dead, I can tell you that. They're most likely leading anyone who wants me away from both of us."
"Why?" Naruto asked, "I doubt that many know about a talking amulet." The demon chuckle and Naruto had to hold back a shiver. That sounded real creepy like.
"On the contrary, while there are not many people that know of my existence, the ones who do hold a lot of power." The amulet said, "That's why your mom and dad are gone probably, to lead the chasers away from you."
Naruto frowned. He doesn't his parents getting in danger because of him. He need to find him. But there is one last question that lingers in his brain.
"Why do I need to protect you?" Naruto asked the thing. "Why not hide it in a secure place? What so important about you? What is your history?" If the amulet had arms or shoulders, it would've shrug.
"Hell if I know," The Kitsune said, "I was only made self-aware. I have no idea what I could do. Only my guardians can find out." Naruto frown. So he needs to do two things. One is to find his parents. And the other is the meaning of these amulets.
Suddenly, the amulet floated up to him. Naruto was surprise by that and move back, but the thing kept moving. And then it suddenly got on his hand. Scratch that, more like getting into his hand. Naruto scream in pain and try to pull the thing out, but it wouldn't budge. The boy was suddenly hold up by an invisible force and got surrounded by red energy. Naruto scream even more, feeling the pain. His nails started turning into claws. His birthmarks started turning into actual whiskers. His eyes turn blood slit red and nine tails sprouted behind him. And an L'cie symbol sprouted on his arm
The red energy began to fade away and Naruto got on his hands and knees, breathing heavily. He look at his to see a L'Cie mark on his arm. Nine orange tails are sprouted around it. When he got up, he saw a case on the floor. How do things keep appearing in his house? Still, he went to case and cautiously opened it. And when he did, his eyes glowed with awe.
In there, are two unique swords. One is a pure white sword, with a yellow tip on it, and a white heart jewel and green feathers on the hilt. The other is a pure black sword, with a purple jewel and batwings on the hilt.
'They are called Oathkeeper and Oblivion. The last one to use it was your mother,' Naruto was startled when he heard a voice in his head.
'Kurama? Is that you?' Naruto said in his head. He can already see that Kurama is talking in his head, so he didn't need to talk out loud.
'Yeah, it's me.' The amulet said, 'Glad to see you figure out that I'm talking in your head. No people will look at you like you're a crazy man. So what's our first order of business?' Naruto eyes harden, knowing exactly what he going to do.
'We're going to find my parents,' Naruto told the fox with determination, 'And also find out why you are made and what you can do.' Naruto then pull out his sword and strap them on his belt. He gather supplies he need for the road and took out some paper and a pen. He hastily wrote down a note and put it on the table, for his friends. Snow, Lightning, and Serah can get to it.
As Naruto walk down the door, he hesitated a bit. Shouldn't he tell Lightning and the others that he's leaving? It seems a bit cold to just leave them, without saying goodbye. But then he shook his head. No, he can't. They would only try to convince him not to or worse, join them. He can't let them do that; he can't let them risk their lives for him. So he left, on a journey to find his parents and find the meaning to this amulet.
(The next day)
Lightning, Serah, and Snow are walking to the Namikaze house. While walking, Snow and Lightning are having an argument while Serah is caught in the middle of it.
"I'm telling you something is wrong!" Lightning said, growling at Snow. "Naruto always meet up with us in the morning every time!"
"And I'm telling you that there's nothing to worry about!" Snow argued with Lightning, "Naruto is probably sick or something! Nothing would've happened to him, especially with Kushina and Minato protecting him!"
"Naruto never had gotten sick." Lightning pointed out, "And even if he did, Kushina or Minato would've called and told us. And don't say he was grounded either, they would've called us for that as well." Snow was about to argue more, but Serah had enough and step between the two of them.
"Guys enough," Serah said sternly, "We don't have time to argue. Let just see if anything happen to Naruto, that's our concern right now." Lightning and Snow immediately stop, a little surprised by how stern Serah sound. But she got a point. Naruto is their main concern right now. The three of them got to the door, with Snow the one knocking it.
"Hey Naruto, are you there?" Snow called out, knocking on the door. "Kushina? Minato? Hey anybody in here. Are you asleep or something?" And still nothing.
"Okay, move." Lightning said, moving Snow out of the way. She ignores the "Hey!" from him and opens the door.
"...I knew it was unlocked." Snow said weakly, scratching his head sheepishly. "I just, wanted to be polite." Lightning gave Snow a look that says "Suuure," before rolling her eyes and entering in the house. Snow and Serah enter in after her, ignoring the fact that they are breaking and entering.
"Naruto?" Lightning called out, receiving. "If this is a prank, this is not funny!" Snow and Serah begin helping and calling out for Naruto as well, with the only thing answering them being silence.
Lightning and Snow went to check on the kitchen first, while Serah went into the living room to look for him. As she is calling out his name, she spotted a note on the table. And she recognizes the handwriting as Naruto's.
"Guys, there's a note." Serah called out to Lightning and Snow. "It's from Naruto." The two of them rush to the living room while Serah started reading. When she started reading, she gasp and put her free hand over her mouth, getting the attention of Lightning and Snow. As she kept reading, tears brim in her eyes. When she finish, she could barely hold back her tears and gave Snow the note, ignoring the worry looks her boyfriend and sister is giving her. As Snow kept reading, Lightning is trying to see why Serah is crying.
"Serah, what's the matter?" Lightning said, a little bit concerned. "What did it say on that note?" Serah tried to talk, but is too choked up to speak. She suddenly a bang and she look to see an angry Snow, with his fist on the table.
"And I thought I was the idiot." Snow mumbled in anger, rubbing his hair in frustration. Lightning took the note from Snow's hand and read to see what got the two so distresses, fearing the worst. As she reads, her hand tightens more and more and her eyes started to get glossy.
Dear Serah, Snow, and Light
I'm sorry about this, but I'm gone from Bodhum. Sorry for not telling you or went to say goodbye to you all, but I know you would want the reason why I left and I couldn't risk you guys persuading me to stay or trying to join me. When I got home yesterday, my parents weren't here. I found out that they went somewhere to lead a group of people away from me. They gave me something that those people wants and want to keep me, as well as the object, safe. After I found out, I left Cocoon to find my parents and why this object is so important. Again, I'm sorry I didn't tell you, but I couldn't risk you guys trying to follow me. I don't want you guys risking your lives for me. Don't worry though; I'm sure we'll meet up again. Believe it!
Naruto, the Maelstrom of Cocoon
As Lightning finished reading, tears started pouring down her eyes. Her fist tightens onto the paper, until it was ripped in half. Why did that idiot have to go out alone? Did he think that his departure wouldn't affect them at all?
"Damn it Naruto." Lightning said, her voice cracking up. Snow hugs Serah in his chest as she cried more. "When I find you, I will give a punch that will knock your teeth out."
"Agreed," Snow and surprisingly, Serah said, the latter being muffle due to her face on Snow's chest. They will find him and give him a piece of their mind for not saying goodbye.
(Six year later)
A young blonde is walking through the street of Eden. He went to one of the dining area and order a cup of coffee, trying to stay awake for the meeting. It has been a long time since he slept and wanted to stay awake.
He sigh a little, tired from his journey. It has been a long time since he left his home. It look the same as ever, except with more PSICOM in the area. He had to hide his L'cie mark just in case one of them corner him.
He is wearing a black jacket with an orange swirl on his back, a long sleeve red shirt, black boots, and black jeans. He has tan skin, showing that he go outside a lot. He has bright blue eyes that can entrance many people by looking at them. His blonde hair is short and spiky. And unique whisker marks on his cheek.
"Glad to see you arrive, Naruto." Someone said from behind him. The man, now reveal as Naruto Namikaze, look at the person behind with his coffee in hand. The person behind him is male, with short spiky red hair, fair skin, pale blue-green eyes, and a tattoo on the left side of his forehead that says "Love" in kanji. The man is wearing a sand color suit and has an emotionless look on his face.
Naruto nodded and smiles at the red headed man. "Good to see you Gaara. Have a seat and order something to drink." Gaara nodded and sat down at the other end. After getting tea from a blushing waitress (who is ogling both Naruto and Gaara) they started talking.
"Have you found anything out about these amulets Gaara?" Naruto asked, after taking a sip of his coffee. The two of them began searching for any information about these amulets. Where are they from, how they are made, why they are made, etc.
The two of them met each other by chance. The both of them were looking for more information about the amulets and the information they had ended up with them meeting each other. Naruto met other amulet holders, though he would do without Killer B ever again. He's still trying to get that horrible rapping out of his head.
Gaara nodded. "I found out a little, but not much. It seems that these amulets are keys. They were made by someone long ago and were given by our ancestors to protect them." Naruto was bit surprised about that, considering these amulets are very powerful. He wonder what those keys are for if they hold that much power.
"What do they unlock then?" Naruto said, leaning forward a little with his arms on the table. "What is locked up and where?" Gaara frown a little.
"I heard some things, but it's only a rumor." Gaara said as his eyebrows furrowed. "It is said that, in the bottom of Cocoon, there is a fourth Fal'Cie. One that is more powerful than the three main ones. It is said that it was locked up due to it chaotic nature. It hunger for chaos, for violence. Not even the Pulse, Lindzei, and Etro combined can defeat the monstrous Fal'Cie."
Naruto sigh and ruffle his spiky hair. Great. A fal'cie that is more powerful than three of the main ones. And they have the key that opens it. And there are people chasing after the things. "Tell me this doesn't get any worse." Naruto pleaded. He knew that it was a stretch, but he hope that lady luck will help him.
Unfortunately, lady luck seems to ignore him when he tries to get away from danger.
"It gets worse." Gaara said, getting Naruto to droop his head. "I found out that the people that are looking for these amulets are called the Akatsuki. Each one of them is extremely dangerous and very skilled. Their leader has one goal in mind. Open the cage that holds the Fal'Cie and gain that power." Naruto groan. Someone up there loves to mess with him, he just them.
Naruto look at Gaara dryly. "Any other news you want to drop on me?" He took a sip of his coffee, trying to get the rising headache. Unfortunately, the coffee will be right out of his mouth at the next news.
"I found that that there is a purge in cocoon." Gaara said, getting Naruto to promptly spit the coffee right out. "The PSICOM are capturing anyone that they even suspects to be a L'Cie."
"WHAT?!" Naruto shouted, nearly getting out of his seat. "And you decided to give me this news, NOW?!" Gaara was unaffected by the outburst he gave and merely shrug.
"I knew that you disregard my other information the moment you knew that your friends maybe endanger." Gaara said simply. Naruto bit back a cry of frustration. Like it or not, it is true.
"Well, not that we have the information we need for these amulets, we need to check if they are alright." Naruto said, quickly paying the waitress, along with a big tip that made her cry in pure joy. After that, Naruto quickly clean up the spit mess he made and quickly went to get his friends. Gaara chuckled a little. He will join Naruto soon, after he finishes his tea
(The Hanging Edge)
Naruto is in on top of the train that is going to The Hanging Edge zone, otherwise known as the restricted zone. He would've went inside the train, but something told that it would better if the PSICOM didn't know he was here. He's wearing a red battle suit, with knife pockets on the arms and a mini shield on his wrist. He is also wearing a black cloak over the armor, with a hoodie to hide his face.
Before he went to the hanging edge, he first went to Bodhum to see if his friends are alright. He found out that Serah was turned into a L'cie and got captured by the fal'cie, Anima. He also found out that Lightning, Snow, and NORA went to rescue Serah and that some of people of Bodhum, along with other cities, got captured and was going to be 'exiled' to Pulse. But he suspects that exiled means executions and the thought made his blood boil.
So Naruto got on top of one of the trains and waited to get to the Hanging Edge zone. He got two objectives in mind. Help the civilians and find his friends.
Finally, Naruto saw light at the tunnel and suddenly, he saw the Hanging Edge. It looked like a factory, or maybe in a prison, to him. With all the railroads, the tall buildings, and the machines patrolling the area. But he also that it's in chaos, with guns blazing, explosions all around, and PSICOM and civilians fighting one another.
Naruto smirk. Look like a rebellion is at hand. Well, the PSICOM should better watch out, cause Naruto Uzumaki has returned and will rien chaos down upon them.
Spirit: And that's the end. We hope you guys enjoyed this chapter. I worked real hard on this chapter, with Phoenix and War Doctor. Tell me your opinion of it and if anything should've been added. I'll accept constructive criticism, but please don't be real harsh about it.
Phoenix: I have to agree with the constructive criticism, we won't appreciate any HARSH criticism. Anything else Spirit?
Spirit: Yeah. Going to start on the other stories soon. The next one will be the rewrite of the Harry Potter and Star Wars crossover. Then reading the Sea of Monster. And lastly, Naruto: Son of the Forger, Champion of the Wise 2: the Labyrinth (I might think of another name). Save the best for last. Review, favorite, and follow and we will see you later.