DAUNTLESS INITIATION TRAINING- Before the death of Tris Prior

She was absolutely beautiful. Despite her dull hair and pale clothes her flawless face portrayed the image of an angel. This sounds ludicrously pathetic but it is true. The thought of her being Abnegation born made me re-think my liking her but it was just impossible. She was the first jumper- which was overly impressive as she was one of the rare Abnegation transfers. She was brave, fierce and the total opposite of selfless person. She also had the most beautiful of eyes. a mesmerising blue ones of which that would only be found on a perfect being.

I wanted her so badly it hurt. Especially when she looked at Four the way everyone did and the way she looked at me, barley a glance, with a disgusted face. I made some resolutions, in which I had to keep, on a sheet of paper on my apartment:

Try to make new friends ( Ha, everyone hates me )

Treat Tris like any other initiate ( impossible)

Avoid Tris (I can't)

Be nicer (funny)

None of my resolutions made were possible so instead I just wrote in big letters:

BE PREPARED FOR PAIN

There was no way in denying the fact that Tris would fall for Four. Four was perfect for her- kind, good looking, Abnegation born as well. They were like a couple to be. A match made in heaven. I was just cold, intimidating, the villain to anyone's eye.

I walked into the training room already disheartened of what will happen in the future. I already saw Four with his hands on Tris's hips guiding her to use her whole body as power.

Trying hard not to look Tris I scanned all the transfer initiates. I easily separated the friendship groups into two. Tris with the Candor transfer and Erudite and some others.

"Four," I bellowed, " What have you been teaching your initiates? 'Cus it looks like your teaching them to tickle their opponents!" I gestured towards Tris who was barley able to move the punching bag. It hurt me to be cruel and pick on her out of all initiates but I was prepared for pain even if it meant I lose Tris- not like I had her previously. I dared myself to take a glimpse at Tris, she scowled at me as if I was a disgusting monster created by the devil himself.

Four just looked at me and sighed, totally ignoring me. With his hands still on Tris's hips he leant in towards her, thinking I wasn't looking and whispered something in her ear. I instantly knew that it was about me as Tris made a wide grin and took a brief look at my way. it was extremely difficult to know how she had already fallen for Four. Everyone fell for Four. No-one fell for me; however even if they did Four just gave them an intake of what was not true- my mask. It felt that everyone who ended up actually caring about me soon turned to despise me all due to Four's false warnings of what future life they would have if they knew me. The hatred that burns off everyone onto me will never be felt by Four, he's just the loved Abnegation transfer.

Me?

I'm just Eric. Almost, or just about, tolerated by everyone. In other terms the dick of Dauntless headquarters.

~ Hi everyone, thanks for the couple reviews I have received and I'm very sorry for being so inactive I have had quite a busy TWO MONTHS but yeah. I hope you've enjoyed Eric's heartbreak so far (That sounds really bad!) ~