Well, I decided I should explain some things before I go further into the story.
One- Bella knows Jacob is a werewolf, but I'm not sure if I'm going to put him in the story. If you guys have any ideas or want him to be in here go ahead and tell me, and if I like it I'll put it in my story, of course putting credit to that person, only if that person wants me to.
Two- Laurent never got to Bella yet, so he's still alive.
Three- Reviews always makes me happy helps me think of new ideas and update quicker. Not saying you have to, just saying it is.
Four- If I don't update for a bit, it's either because I am updating my other story, or I need to put a lot more thought into how I want to continue this story.
Five- I hope you guys enjoy this story, I'm doing mostly what I can to make this story the way you like it.
Okay, that's enough from me right now. If I ever need to explain some things I'll go ahead and do that. If you have any questions, I don't mind answering. I would like for everyone to understand. Oh, and if you guys want to ask a question without anyone seeing it in your review, go ahead and PM me, I always keep a tab open with me logged in my email, so I know when people review/update their stories/PM me/etc. Enough talking for now... Enjoy!
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Chapter Five - Unexpected Visitor
I sat by Bella, never leaving her side. I didn't speak much, no one would ever make the guilt in me any less. I hurt my angel and it was all my fault. I refused to blame anyone but myself. It was my fault.
Most of the family begged me to go hunting- I haven't hunted in weeks. I wanted to stay by Bella. My eyes were the black you see in a bottomless pit of darkness. I had no trouble to ignore the burning in my throat. I refused everyone in my family that insisted me to go hunting. I didn't want to leave Bella, and certainly didn't want to be away whenever she wakes up, if she ever does. I kept making myself believe she was going to wake up.
Sometimes I talked to Bella when we were alone. It was either apologizing or talking about our past. A doctor told me before that it might help her wake up if I talked to her, that the doctor has seen many patients wake up because of how much people loved the one that was in a coma.
The only times I left was to change my flowers every time it needed changing. I let out a sigh, rubbing my temples. I have been in this room with Bella for three weeks now, and there was no sign of her waking up yet. No improvements. Each day I felt worse and keep asking me why I had to do this to the one I loved the most.
My thoughts were interrupted when Alice came into the room. She looked really angry. I knew she was angry at me.
"I don't care what you say, Edward. Not anymore. I'm forcing you to go hunting with us, whether you like it or not," her voice was thick in acid. As if on cue, Emmett came in and grabbed me, pinning me to him with all his strength. I let out a sigh. There was no way I can break out of Emmett's grasp, so I gave up and let them take me hunting.
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Laurent's POV
Only seconds after Alice and Jasper left, I got to the scene of the crash. I cursed to myself when I noticed Bella's parents' bodies weren't in the truck anymore. The blood stained in the truck made me thirsty. I let out a sigh, and before I could be seen, I ran.
It has been three weeks since the crash now, and the cars were gone. Either in a repair shop or in the junkyard. Who knew? I didn't care anyways. I was glad that the Cullens came back- those stinking werewolves couldn't come and kill me on their territory- they would break the treaty. A soft laugh escaped my lips.
I was glad Victoria died, that meant I can kill Bela myself. I smiled. I was going to find where she was today, and if it was safe enough, I'd steal her and take her somewhere to kill her. I heard from the whole town that she was in a coma. That was perfect. But then again, it disappointed me also. I would have no challenge to killing her. I shrugged. At least I get to kill her.
I watched from afar as Edward was being forced to leave the hospital. Good. Alice, Jasper, and Rosalie were with them. That meant only Esme and Carlisle were in the hospital, well of course other humans too, but who cares? The humans were no threat to me. I waited until they were out of sight and hearing range, then quickly ran around until I found Bella's scent. I jumped up to the window that it was coming from and silently opened the window, stepping into the room. Luckily no one was there.
I'd have to hurry if I wanted to kidnap before anyone finds out I'm stealing her. I grabbed Bella's unconscious body and left the hospital, running at full speed to the perfect place to kill her.
((Hmmm... I was thinking of stopping here, but that's cruel. I'll continue for you guys.))
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Alice's POV
We only hunted a few animals when me and Edward froze, watching my vision play.
Laurent set Bella down, in an area I knew perfectly. He bit into her arm, starting to suck her blood from her. ((I'd use more detail, but I was planning on using the detail of the area where they were in when I go to Laurent's POV again.))
Edward and I gasped. We both looked at each other. As if someone shouted 'GO!' in a race, we both ran as fast as we could to where the place was, not bothering to tell the others what we were doing. We needed to get there in time. Of course Edward was ahead of me because of how fast he could go, and he went even faster than he usually does bcause of Bella being in danger.
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Laurent's POV
Bella's scent was like any other normal humans scent, but still didn't mean that it smelled good due to my thirst. My throat burned and I licked my lips as I looked at Bella's peaceful face. I smiled. Though the girl had been connected to a machine that helped her breathe, she could breathe alone now. I watched as her chest moved up and down a little as a sign of her breathing. I smiled. At least she wouldn't die as I ran from her choking. That meant I can get fresh, warm blood.
I soon entered the place I was heading for. I stopped in the familiar area, smiling. It was near the Denali's home, but in an area clear of people. I didn't notice that Irina was in the bushes, watching me when she saw me. I set Bella down. We were surrounded by trees, and the dirt underneath my feet felt warm to me. It was cloudy as usual.
A crow crowed when I bit into Bella's arm. Her warm blod went into my mouth and I drank happily. At least, until I felt something as hard as me crashed into me, causing me to fly back.
"Don't you dare try to kill Bella," Edward hissed, his voice filled with acid. He was near me and before I could do anything, my life ended.
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Edward's POV
After shredding Laurent to pieces and setting him on fire, I picked up Bella and bit my lip. Alice soon came by. I looked at her and asked the one question I needed to know the answer to.
"Should I take the venom out of her or let her turn into one of us?"
To be continued...
Yes, I know this is a cliffie, and I'm sorry about that. Hoped you guys enjoyed it! And, if you review, I might give you a sneak peek for the next chapter. Haha, I have no clue why I'd do this, but I decided I should give you guys at least something in return so.. If you guys want that Sneak Peek all you have to do is review.