Authors note- I officially love your guys. What you all said to me was I cant even explain
Dont take that in offence.
I will take that in offence
Go look at the Authors note I posted then read what everyone said about you in a review.
I know you what you want and I am not giving it to you I am not going to give you the satisfaction of me quitting my story. Yeah I threw a curveball but people are liking it. It cant be a story where its always rainbows and butterflys.
I have the best reviewers that anyone could as for because they are behind me
You have storys of your own you should know.
I want to make my readers want more.
Nobody is forcing you to read my stories so I will say it once.
If you having nothing nice to say. Dont say it at all.
That is what I told her and it is the truth. Thank you all for standing behind me. My power went out for a few minutes so here I am in the dark on my laptop typing out chapters for my stories.
Disclaimer- Nothing
BPOV
I saw...
Emmett.
" Bella. I dont belelive it." He boomed. He put his large arms around me and twirled me around.
" You looking good Arizona." I heard another voice say with a chuckle. Jasper
"Jasper." I said. I gave him a quick hug.
" What no real hug?" He asked
I looked down " I am a little sweaty." I stated. They laughed.
I heard little footsteps behind me.
I saw Charlie she had tears in her eyes. I ran up to her and knelt down on her level.
"Whats wrong sweetheart?" I asked her
" Lightning scary" She mummbled. I she looked behind me and screamed.
" Who dat momma bad people?" She asked
" No no honey. Mommy's friends." I reasured
Emmett came up behind me and smiled at her " Hi" He said.
Charlie hugged my legs " He scary momma make him go way." She said.
" I wont hurt you." He said in a sad voice.
" Your sure." She asked nervously
He nodded. He scooped her up in his arms and she giggled.
" Bella- Boo she's adorable like a mini girl Edward." He said. He ticked her sides and she laughed.
" She really is adorable." Jasper said.
" Well how bout ya'll sit down and I will take a fast shower. Watch Charlie. I trust you." I said.
" TINKER BELL." Charlie schreeched and ran to Alice. They all laughed.
I walked into my bathroom and got the shower ready.
Could I ever tell him? I knew I would have to but what if he has moved on. I dont want him to feel that he has a responsibility for her.
I always thought if it were different if we didnt go our own ways. Would we be married and have Charlie?
She has always asked about her dad and I told her. I would lie and say he left me because it wasnt exactly that.
I admit I up and left and changed my cell number so he couldnt get a hold of me. So I guess even if he was ready again he couldnt come back to me. I knew that was a big part in the problem.
I dont regret having Charlie. I was twenty it wasnt that young I could of been seventeen or eighteen.
My daughter didnt have a chance to meet her dad or her grandfather. Yes she could have a chance of meeting Edward in the future.
I got out of the shower and dried off. I put on a pair of gray sweat pants and Edward's college shirt he gave me.
Yes. I never moved on. I threw my dirty clothes in the basket in the laundry room and went to the family room. Right when I was walking in the power went out.
Shit.
I heard a little screech from Charlie.
" It alright honey." I told her.
I heard Emmett giggle. Yes giggle.
I walked to the kitchen groping around for my candles. I found some and got out a liter.
I like five of them and walked to the family room adn set them on the coffee table. I sat down next to Rose. Charlie walked over to me and crawled into my lap.
" So whats up?" I asked.
" Did you ever move on from Edward?" Jasper asked
" No" I said quietly
I heard Alice sigh " Bella I think you should tell him. Not just for you but for him and Charlie. Bella he hasnt moved on either he was a wreck for the first two years. I think he would be ecstatic to find out that he has a child." She said
" I dont want him to feel he has some parental responsibility if I tell him." I said
" Bella." Rose said " Edward hasnt even dated nor looked at a girl. He moved out here because he was sad. He said he couldnt get a hold of you and why is that?" She asked
I sighed " I changed my number." I said
" Bella" Emmett scolded " He loved no loves you." He said
" I know its bad that I changed my cell and left because he said he needed a break. I thought about it each time if I didnt change numbers mabe he would of called." I said
" I know this is hard but I think he deserves to know." Jasper said
I sighed " I know I will have to tell him. I will when I feel its right." I said
" Bella there wont be a right time or way." Rose said
I shook my head. I looked down at Charlie.
" She a great kid Bella. You did a good job." Alice said
" Thanks. It was hard but worth it." I said. I played with Charlie's hair.
Her eyes drifted closed.
" I'll be right back" I said. I picked her up in my arms. I walked to my room and put her in my bed. So when I went to bed she would feel safe if the thunder woke her.
I went in the family room. I heard my song I miss you play. They were listening to it.
" I like this song" Alice said
" Yeah. Thanks." I said.
We sat for the rest of the nigt and talked until they went home. I crawled into bed adn put my arms around my daughter.
Authors note- Yeah right whe I finished typing "They were listending to it"I got another review saying this
ok i really dont want to be mean but this story was not as good as it was before when bella got pregnat she should have gone after edward and told him. the bella you have in this story woulndnt not face her fears especially if it is something that means so much to edward. if i were you i would think of a way to turn the story around before its too late. my friends who write fanfic tell me that they have readers who jsut drop on them when they have a bad day and dont write to there best and that annoys me beyond belief so i wont do that i will continue to read this story no madder what. sorry if that wasnt waht you wanted to hear but you asked for it
mcfeather
I asked for it?
I think people are getting delirious. Maybe her cat died.
I am igoring it because you all like this story an want me to continue so yeah.
