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Disclaimer:All ownership of Inuyasha belongs to Rumiko Takahashi, the song lyrics below belong to the writers and artists only. And might I add, both of the songs for this chapter work perfectly. :) Thank you!
Genera:Romance/Angst—Angst in first chapter. Possible angst late, I'm not giving away any hints. :-p
Song listening to that do not effect the story:"The Bad Touch"-Bloodhound Gang
"Luv Addict"-Family Force 5
"Jesus Freak"-Toby Mac
"I'm so sick"-Fly Leaf
…I know the first three are rather ironic to each other . ….
Song/s listening to that effect the story:"Holding Out For a Hero"-Frou Frou
"Who's
Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf"-B5
"Broken"-Lindsey
Haun
Line/s portraying to this chapter from song/s above:"Where have all the good men gone? And where are all the gods? Where's the street-wise Hercules, to fight the rising odds? Isn't there a white knight upon a fiery steed? Late at night toss and turn and dream of what I need."- Holding Out For a Hero
"I need a hero.
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the end of the night. He's gotta be
strong and he's gotta be fast and he's gotta be fresh from the fight.
I need a hero. I'm holding out for a hero 'til the morning light.
He's gotta be sure and it's gotta be soon. And he's gotta be larger
than life."- Holding Out For a Hero
"Who's afraid of the big bad wolf, the big bad wolf, the big bad wolf. Who's afraid of the big bad wolf? We ain't afraid y'all, we ain't afraid. Who's afraid of the big bad wolf, the big bad wolf, the big bad wolf. Who's afraid of the big bad wolf? We ain't afraid y'all, we ain't afraid."-Who's Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf
"When your broken in a million little pieces, and you're trying, but you can't hold on anymore. Every tear falls down for a reason. Don't you stop believing in yourself, when your broken."-BrokenRandom question to viewers:What is Kagome's mother's name? O.o
Chapter 3-You love to break me…
The shojin doors of an empty well house opened, in their turn revealing a time traveling miko and her small fluffy companion. The wind swayed to her power and laughed with her careless soul. In return she smiled to nature and entered her childhood home.
"Mama! I'm home!" A cheerful voice spoke out from her place in front of the screen door. Just as quickly, petite feet scurried their way into the kitchen and stopped before a priestess clad in but a kimono.
Warm arms sung in an embrace, a sign of how much a mother can truly worry for their child. But since this was no ordinary child, the hug was much tighter then it truly needed to be. This only in turn stiffed a soft chuckle from the woman gasping for breath. Where have all the good men gone?
"I'm fine! I'm fine!" She laughed as the dark haired woman before her began to bombard her sweet, little girl of 18 with questions and comments.
"Kagome I haven't seen you in a month! Why did you take so long to get back to us?" Kagome only smiled and sat down with her mother, a worried expression plastered to her beautiful middle-aged features. Kagome sighed and placed an ivory hand upon the table and smiled.
"I know it's been a while mama, but I have good reasons! The last time I went out I could have sworn I was being followed! I was so worried that Koga might know my secret, that I had to lay off for a while." Her mother's smile returned once more, seeing as her only daughter wasn't just neglecting to come, or had been seriously hurt.
Karen smiled and returned her conversation. "And as for Koga…you aren't, you didn't…" Her question was left there as Kagome quickly began to shake her head, her hands rapidly slashing back and forth in a silent no.
"No, no, no! I'm not his mate. And the way things are going between him and I mama, I promise I'll never be his mate!" Kagome laughed slightly, an awkward silence laugh to be exact.
Shippo, not wanting to sit and listen to the two woman converse, quickly scampered away, up the stairs, and into his uncle's room. No doubt to play a contraption Souta had told him about, called a 'Playstation.'
Soon, with Shippo's entertainment out of their hands, they were within deep conversation, a long awaited thing that most would hope to avoid with their mothers. But, as we've analyzed before, this was no normal relationship between the mother and daughter. For all anyone knew, this could very well be their last meeting…
Kagome explained how Miroku and Sango were and their children; something Karen had become ecstatic to hear about each time Kagome came home. She had come to see the two older people, as she does own, and their children, as her grandchildren. And that thrilled our little miko tickle pink.
A whistle broke the two chattering maidens from their intense concentration of one another. Karen quickly scampered from her chair and to the stove where a teakettle had begun to ring.
Kagome smile and stood up as her mother ran off to the stove. "Hey mama, I'm going to head up stairs to take a bath, okay? It's been a long day." Karen just smiled, her usual face, and continued on with her tea extravaganza.
Making her way past the dining room and up the stairs, Kagome sighed in relief as she entered her bedroom. Eyeing the furniture of choice, she quickly scrambled over and hopped onto her small, but comfortable, bed.
She sighed in contentment and laid back, her eyes closed, and her breathing paced. The aches and pains of the week washed over her and began to dissipate as the soft luxury of the bed below her, cushioned them all away.
Fighting the urge to fall asleep, she slowly pushed her way off the bed, and over to her closet. Pulling out a white wife beater and a pair of black short shorts, she hauled herself away from her closet and into the bathroom next door.
And where are all the gods?
The sound of rushing water was sudden as she turned the knob on the faucet of the tub. Steam began to envelop the room as the gushing, hot tresses of water poured aimlessly into the white, tiled surface below.
Kagome sighed as she entered the steamy abyss below her sight, the water slightly biting at her heels. The hazy pool embraced her small figure as she lay her head back in wonder. So many things to think upon, but what one to focus on?
She sighed as she finally admitted defeat to the one thing that had occupied her mind her all day.
Sesshomaru.
Well, not Sesshomaru in a sense, but his actions towards her. Why had he pursued her? I mean, there were several other mikos in the world somewhere, he could have had his pick from any of them, let alone Kikyo still wandered this earth as far as she knew and she held greater power then she ever would…
Sesshomaru was an enigma that was for sure. It hadn't surprised her that Rin had some type of holy sense to her. It would explain why she was able to dispel that ogre demon, which Takimaru had sent to capture them, with the prayer beads after they broke for the tenth time it seemed.
But, why choose her? From her previous engagements with the said Daiyoukai, she figured he would rather melt her to the ground then have her teach his ward in the art of holy Kei. Actually, she figured his too proud to ask anyone, for anything. Usually from her experience, he just bossed everyone around. He's never really asked for anything.
Then again when did either brother ever ask…for anything?
Kagome sighed softly as she averted her attention to the beads in question previously. They lay sprawled out on her bathroom counter, stacked nicely upon her folded clothes to be put on. Moaning in a sad response to her stinging memories, Kagome turned her head away.
Wishing she could use her shampoo, but knowing sadly it would not end well on her part, she simply ducked her head back into the water's glossy surface. Sighing into the warmth that enveloped her small body, she eased back her sore muscles.
Pulling water, wrinkled limbs from the slightly cooled water, Kagome grabbed her towel. Dragging herself to her clothes she let out a long exasperated breath. Soon she would have to return to that barren annoyance that was Koga. To put salt into already oozing wounds, he would most likely be forced into a mating even the gods know is a bad match.
Where's the street-wise Hercules, to fight the rising odds?
Drying the last, few reminisces of water from her plump skin, she dressed. She turned and walked out the door. White, gym socked, feet scooted down the stairs, the body above it finally relaxed and soothed.
Pulling into the kitchen, Kagome's nostrils flared to the sweet sensation that only her mother's cooking could accomplish. She smiled and nearly floated further to her seat around the small floor table.
"Mama! You didn't have to go all out for me!" Kagome smiled out with glee. Her mama always spoiled her when she came home. Though, that didn't mean she was complaining.
Karen just looked back with a big smile on her lips; the smile Kagome had luckily inherited. "Oh honey, it's my pleasure!" Kagome softly rolled her brownie eyes to her mother's cheerfulness and continued on.
"Why are we having dinner so early?" Karen turned her head once more, that happy grin still plastered to her face.
"Have you forgotten already? It's your birthday Kagome! We need at least a little bit of time to celebrate!" Karen exclaimed with her normal jollity.
Almost instantly Kagome soft smile faded to a dull frown. Turning her head so her mother would not see, Kagome sighed as out memories reappeared for the hundredth time today.
Dinner went by aimlessly after their prayers had been said. The intermittent glance was made to one another, but mainly it passed by with nothing much but the occasional 'good food' or, 'you outdid yourself once again, Karen'.
Sighing sadly, but covering it with a mock smile, Kagome thanked her family for the presents as they one by one appeared in her hands. To keep it basic, her mother had supplied her with a few cotton kimonos and a pair of leather heeled moccasins, which she'd found at an old thrift shop. Her mother thought that they would be great for her little time adventure trips.
Her grandpa, or Ji-chan, had given her a dried up raven's claw, claiming it had mystic powers that would help protect her. Souta though, had probably given her the most thoughtful gift of all…
Isn't there a white knight upon a fiery steed?
"Kagome. I want you to have this…" With that said he reached into his jeans and pulled out a small golden locket. The lettering on the outside was small, but she could read it loud and clear.
'Friends may be forever, but family is timeless.' And on the inside held a picture of Kagome and her family, father, whom had died on the line of duty as a police officer when she was six, included. Looking up in the thirteen-year-old eyes that were those of her little brother, she smiled. It would seem all thoughts of Inuyasha had faded away…
…If not just for that moment…
Smiling as she packed everything into her overly stretched-out, black backpack, Kagome hummed. The yellow one had long lost its invitation to live after a trip to Sango's last summer. Where, undoubtedly, it had ripped under the pressure of Carmen's small form trying to invade its privacy. Koga hadn't taken much notice to it. Concerning it was practically just a leather back bag, she simply said Sango had made it and oiled it up with the blood of a centipede demon, to give it a nice black luster.
Koga wasn't always the brightest…
The kimonos were folded nicely and placed into the bottom of the bag. She laid her moccasins on top of said kimonos and laced the locket softly around her neck. Pulling out a few other necessities, she cringed as she caught look at the raven's claw. That thing was gross…
She smiled softly as she glanced at a picture of her and her friends. How long ago it had seemed they were all together for her birthday, she had turned fourteen that summer…She humored herself as she thought back to the day those ninja demons had found that picture and tried to use it against her. She was so young, naïve, she only thought that they were her friend's ancestors because of Hojo's.
Late at night toss and turn and dream of what I need.
She smiled once more and shook her head. There were so many things she could look back upon…now if only she could actually go back…
Kagome descended the stairs once more, socked feet making soft sluicing noises as they went along. A soft song graced the vocal cords of a woman in pain, while an unfamiliar smile played across her lips. Sadly, she sighed and entered the kitchen to her mother doing the dishes.
"Mama, I'm sorry to say this, but Shippo and I have to leave tonight. I don't want Koga getting curious as to what's taking me so long. He starts to believe Sango and Miroku less each time that he questions them…" Karen only smiled and wiped her hands clean of the remaining foam on her arms.
"Ah, well, I hope you birthday was good, honey! We'll miss you, try not to take so long this time to come and see us, okay? And if you can't, well, we'll be happy to see you when we can!" Her cheerful smile make Kagome's stomach notch in guilt, it really was hard on her family every time she left off.
She smiled as Karen called out to Ji-chan and the boys to come out. Shippo ran in quickly while Souta stand gasping for breath behind him. They smile while Shippo ran over and hugged Kagome's leg. She only laughed and bent over to pick up his seemingly two-year-old form.
They all said their good-byes and wished Kagome the best of luck. She was bound to need it with Koga tonight…
I need a hero…
The lip of the well creaked as lean fingers snaked around the edge. A mollifying moan was emitted as, just as lean, legs dipped over the ledge. Warm arms wrapped themselves around the soft body clinging to the larger one on the well side. And then they slid off into the dark abyss that was the well, until they were swallowed in a hearty blue glow.
Kagome's feet buoyantly decked the dusty surface that was the well's bottom of the feudal era. Shippo yawned happily as her reached out of her arms. Taking him in the well with her made the trip longer, due to the unholy chi of demonic energy that flowed throughout his dwarfed frame.
But, the vines remained unused as within seconds the time traveler and the kit found themselves on solid grass, facing the eyes of deep brown, glaring down at them. His tail twitched violently as he looked on her, his glare past comprehensible. He knew she had been up to something…
"Koga…" He barked out at her, his fangs baring dangerously as he stood straight to her, his back uptight, while his leg muscles jerked.
Who's afraid of the big bad wolf, the big bad wolf, the big bad wolf…
"Is this where you've gone each time you go out to bathe!" His voice made her cringe beneath him. She'd seen Koga angry before, but it was nothing compared to the heated look of over bearing protection in his eyes.
She parted her lips to speak, but quickly stopped her actions as his broiled stare replaced to an upset one. "How…could you lie to me this whole time? I've given you everything! A home, a family, a mate!" Kagome's throat knotted in frustration at the end.
"Koga! Please, don't you understand? I don't want to be your mate! You've never let me finish I try to tell you this! Why can't you comprehend that? I want nothing more then to just be friends!" The tears that bit at her eyes burned and stung with each word.
Who's afraid of the big bad wolf?
Koga stood, dumb struck. How could this be possible? He'd given her everything, and he meant everything he had…."Kagome, I'm sorry…but I can't except that." Kagome took a step back, her own bewildered expression foreign to her.
"You…you wouldn't…"Koga's eyes brimmed red slightly, a sign that he was upset enough to do anything…Shippo squirmed in her arms as she watched Koga approach closer. His figure was tall, strong, and angry. Before Shippo could react, he found himself hurtled head first into a tree while blackness crossed his vision as he watch Koga move closer to Kagome.
"Leave her...al…" His words vanished as his little, green eyes closed in defeat.
Kagome gasped, nearly coughing, as she reached out for Shippo as he was yanked from her arms and into a tree. She turned to look at Koga's acidic stare, her insides twisting and riding up in fear and displeasure, though still twining in anger. Large taloned hands coarsely grabbed her shoulders, his nails digging into her shoulder blades. Her grave, cinnamon eyes glossed over in fear as she leaned back.
We ain't afraid y'all, we ain't afraid…
Her knees gave out as he squeezed harder, stopping her attempts at hitting his chest. She whimpered as his grip became tighter, blood beginning to drip down his claws. His eyes gave way to the red that seeped into them and he growled. Kagome, in a last attempt at freedom, tried to bat away his arms, only to greet her exertion with a harder squeeze.
"Koga…please…" Her whimpers were only closed off by a jagged kiss to her already bruising lips. His fangs reached out on her lips, cutting the tender skin as her pushed harder.
Kagome squealed as she felt the coverage of her lip begin to bleed. The taste of copper leaked into her mouth as she felt him try and part her lips. She jerked her head away, trying her best to stop the crushing kiss. But finding her attempts in vain, she did the next best thing. She bit his lip and kicked his groin from where he had her legs dangling.
Who's afraid of the big bad wolf, the big bad wolf, the big bad wolf…
Her body came crashing to the ground as he howled out in frustration and pain. She cried out and rubbed her backside, but found herself before a howling demon, and finally took the initiative to get up and move. She rolled to her feet and made a dash for Shippo, her shoulders feel as though they were on fire as she pumped her arms with the movement of her legs.
By the time her hands had reached out for Shippo, Koga had already come back to senses, as the blood lust seemed to dip deeper into his eyes. The smell of Kagome's blood upon his claws drove is inner youkai crazy as he sprinted out after her. It took but a few mere seconds to have her arms in his hand once more.
Who's afraid of the big bad wolf?
Kagome turned her eyes enraged with the fire he'd put her to. Her arms reached out to beat his chest to make him let go, phase him, anything! He just looked down as deep breathes gasped from her chest while his beast called out for her, Koga's body seeming to be unresponsive to her threats. He began to bend down for a kiss once more, but Kagome beat him to it and slapped him crisp upon the cheek. She pulled back, her hand red and stinging from the hard realization of the impact she'd just made.
His nostrils flared, like a bull to the rider, he growled once more and lifted his own hand. And before Kagome could duck, the strong palm of death warmed over smacked straight unto her porcelain cheek, and she found her body hurtling to the ground once more. Her head smacked hard ground, as though it was concrete. She looked up into the eyes of a cruel and heartless man that was after her own soft one, and she cried inside as her vision blacked out to the harsh reality that happiness was a lie.
We ain't afraid y'all, we ain't afraid…
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Koga looked down unto the out-cold woman below his footing. He'd lost control and he knew it, but the thought of not having her by his side, not having her within his pack, not having her love…was more then he was ever going to take in a risk. She would love him, and she would become his mate, whether she wanted to be so or not.
"Hakkaku, Ginta…destroy the well." His words were deep, harsh, and just plain bone chilling. The boys just stood there, their normal dumb founded expression plastered to his face.
"But Koga, that's her only resort to her time! She'll hate you forever if you, or one of us, break the well!" Koga merely growled and turned his head, crossing his arms over his chest.
"Do you test my authority, Hakkaku? You may be my right hand men, but I am your alpha! Now do as I say," he turned once more and reached down to pick Kagome up, straddling her over his shoulder, "She's going to hate me regardless anyhow…" He simply stated his facts and began to move, but stopped for a mid second. "Do it."
His feet catapulted off to the sound of wood cracking and chips flying through the air, destroying the bond one small girl and the future had once held…
Who's afraid of the big bad wolf?
Kagome awoke to a groggy groan, her head was spinning and her body was aching in places she wasn't sure should ache…Voices in the opposing room tore her from her painful thoughts and to the situation at hand. Finally, she lifted her head to scan her surroundings. The last thing she remembered was Koga's hand crashing down on her, and the internal darkness that soon followed.
Finally clicking in the comprehension that her current position was upon a pallet of furs in Koga's chambers, she groaned more. He wasn't joking…The only reason she should come to this analysis, was for the fact that this is where she'd slept for the first four months of her capture. Even after sleeping in a different pallet then him, still didn't stop his attempts at getting into her pants; she'd finally forced him to let her have a different section of the cave to sleep in. Though it did take forever to convince him…
Stubborn kiba…
Quickly realizing her chances of being able to disobey him becoming pretty slim, Kagome jumped off the pallet of furs her body had been dumped onto during her black out session. Running to the door, she stopped mid-track and listened. Hakkaku and Ginta were outside the door, no doubt to keep guard, speaking of the past events. When your broken in a million little pieces…
They spoke low, no doubt to keep her from overhearing if she were awake. This made it hard to hear through the thick bear pelts covering the hole of the cave, used as a 'door'. The most she could make out were only a few minor details, such as, "the well…" or "that was a hard hit…" Kagome, sadly, only found confusion in their little discussion and soon grew restless.
She pushed away the pelts that led out of Koga's chambers and made her way out. Hakkaku and Ginta stood looking like they'd seen a bat out of hell as they turned to meet her gaze. Those two never paid enough attention.
"Sister! You're awake! Koga's been waiting all day for you to awaken!" Ginta pronounced happily, even though he knew all too well that she was going to be pissed off more then a drenched cat…
"Oh…"Kagome sighed and rubbed her head. She did not want to deal with him right now. She did not want to deal with him in a little while. She did not want to deal with him ever.
And you're trying, but you can't hold on anymore…
Koga, whom was most likely rounding back around to check up on her, turned the corner and came face to face against her and the two kiba speaking. He smiled as she jerked backwards, her arms slipping through the pelted doorway. Koga looked to Hakkaku and Ginta; the gaze spoke out only a few words.
Guard the door.
Kagome backed up slowly as her advanced towards her; his look was gentle, but somehow stern at the same time. This only further improved to scare the hell out of her further. He got himself close enough to gently nudge her into the room with his palms as he entered as well; Hakkaku and Ginta quickly tracing their steps to guard the door as ordered.
Kagome breath came in rigid, short, snorted breaths as she walked backwards, weary of the searing look in Koga's boggy, brown eyes. His lips were straight, as though they had been permanently glued that way. His expression in itself seemed all the same, just intent, serious…. Obsessive.
"Kagome…"His voice was husky and low, as if it had been a growl and not words. His eyes were glossed over in covet and almost seemly lacking in normal behavior as he kept his strong feet moving. They only stopped when Kagome's own smaller, more petite ones did. Too bad they only stopped once she'd found herself trapped up against the wall…
"Koga please…let me go…" Her voice, body, thoughts, everything screamed please, begging him to let her go, let her live in peace. Let her free herself from his tanned grip…
Koga only slightly shook his head; she'd used up all her 'pleases' and 'don't do this'. He wanted her and he was tired of waiting, he was not a normally ruthless man, but this had crossed his path of 'smooth.' She would be his, and she would be his tonight.
She parted her lips once more, but was cut off by the steamy set of lips that belonged to only her enemy. She mentally screamed as she felt her body being forced against the wall; her fingers dug aimlessly into the stone crypt walls that were the cave room boundaries.
Every tear falls down for a reason…
Kagome squealed against his lips and hit his arms, which had found a place on her head, pulling her head to his own. She glared and pushed him away. "Koga please, no! I don't fe…" Once more she found herself restrained against his chiseled body, her anger rising, as well as the fear of no way out.
He lifted his hands and locked hers against the wall as she kicked and tried to claw her way from his grip, but he held strong. She even went as far as to try and push out her aura a bit, as a warning, but it simply did nothing to phase him. He looked into her colossal, frightened eyes and growled low in his throat as he bent to her ear.
"To I hold of no more." Kagome's eyes widened and he violent attempts at freedom began once more. She kicked and screams, as well as cursed, her way into his nerves. Her barked out a warning to her in response, but she only intensified her plea attempts. He closed his eyes and growled once more.
"Kagome…" His voice was low, unearthly, and deadly as he returned his gaze to her own. Her feet kept kicking to a good measure as she stared back terribly infuriated. She finally found her footing and took one swift kick to his groin; he dropped his hold on her wrists in an instant and fell to a bent over position.
As fast as she could she made a leap for the door, but only found herself trapped under the pressure of a very angered kibayoukai. His eyes flicked red with the heat of his infatuation as he held down her body with his own. She screamed out in his ear, still madly kicking her legs beneath his straddle. He glared down as she snarled up, she kicked his legs in response and he howled in anger and frustration as well. He lifted his hand with a swift intake of air, and slapped it across her left cheek.
Kagome stopped moving; dazed, as she lay under the strain of his furious palm. She turned her head with a soft 'crack' and looked him dead in the eyes. "That, didn't hurt." Though in true manner it hurt like a lighting bolt had struck her face, she held strong in her glare to him. He huffed violently once more and struck her again, this time emitting a large streak from her bruising lips. It rang through the cave walls, causing Ginta to jump in surprise, and wince in a silent sorry to his soon-to-be-sister.
This went on for a short while; each time her yelp would louder, until finally it had developed into a high-pitched scream that even the most deaf of people within a 7 mile radius had to heard. Koga stopped with her noticed the deep red welt appearing on her tear stained cheek. His eyes softened as he looked down upon the crumbled, but still infuriated, woman below his muscled form. He sighed.
"I told you this could come easy or hard…" He looked down upon his own chest and reached up to pull a stray branch of hair from her eyes. She flinched and growled out a 'don't touch me.' He shook his head and reached down for the hem of her shirt; he was tired of playing games.
Don't you stop believing in yourself, when you're broken…
Sesshomaru stood with his legs tall, his body lean, and his head high as he looked across the lake that stretched from the cave within the waterfall, to his feet resting on the rocky shore. He sought silently as he inspected through his thoughts. I need a hero. I'm holding out for a hero 'til the end of the night…
The wolf had destroyed the miko's well. His only analysis on knowing such being that he had made his way to the village to see to a demon whom had run from his grounds to the outskirts of Inuyasha's forest. After the death of the pathetic excuse for a youkai, his senses had picked up on the smell of broken pine and sweat. At first he'd just guess it had been a simply villager shopping wood within the village, but after a further investigation her found the location to be off, as well he could smell the scent of wolves.
He's gotta be strong and he's gotta be fast and he's gotta be fresh from the fight…
He came across the fragment remainders that were once the time traveling well. He took but a few steps into the scene and worked out the possible situation that had happened. He sniffed silently until the clues placed themselves together in his propensity of a mind.
And he's gotta be larger than life…
Now, he stood before the waterfall, waiting, wondering, and deciding if the kiba was going to push it as far as he'd figured most to be.
Kagome lay emotionless against the hard dirt beneath her back. She hated this feeling, this feeling of vulnerability, pain, and weakness…. She still tried to an extent to stop his propositions on her shirt as she lay with her head tilted slightly to the side. The heat of her fury still bubbled within her high built chest as she struggled to breathe beneath his heavy body. She let the tears of anger and pain seep through her as she called out mentally for a miracle.
And then the weight that had crushed her body was gone in a soft bumping noise. Her head whipped to the side silently as she struggled to stay conscious, her brownie eyes glazed out of focus. The body of her previous attacker lay motionless on the dense dirt floor beside her, and then her eyes shifted up. To her happy surprise, she made out the lone figure of white hair and a white Kimono; not at first did she piece the puzzle together but soon found herself fading into black with a sense of security and calm overwhelming her pulsating in pain body.
She smiled and rolled her eyes back into the deep revelation that was a black out.
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