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I panted as I finished three more men. My stomach was full of that liquid. I kept my breathing and out. In and out. I heard Gwen behind me. My anger had evaporated from the previous argument.I had a worse problem.

I had killed my father.

Of course, he was the worst father imaginable. But he was my father. I'm lucky to have been born. I felt as if a boulder dropped on one of my shoulders. As much as I hated him, despised him, wished he was dead, those were nothing compared to this. I am a murderer, a cold one, I took lives of people who had families, jobs, and health.

Took it and threw it away.

Gwen wanted this for me? Had she wanted to suck in another person for this fiery torture?Had she known I didn't want my old , hurt, painful past?

No she hadn't

I took a deep breath. I could still smell the bit of blood left from my father. I moved his body , only to rip a finger off. I tried again. I rested him on the leaves and turned and kicked the dirt.

Kick

Kick

Kick

Kick

I had a grave.

I snatched a boulder and yanked a large piece out of it. With my fingers, I wrote :

Charles Evenson

A father

A husband

A lost one

1875-1921

RIP

I put his body in there and covered the grave up. I yanked a piece of grass and laid it on top of it.

I walked away.

My emotions ran through me. Happiness , sadness, anger, angst, confusion,.

Is there an emotion when you want to break down, and wish you had never seen the Earth? When you want to be hit with a automobile a hundred times?

I felt it.

" I'm so sorry"

I turned around to see Gwen, her face sorrowful, and a hint of remorse,

"There is nothing to be sorry about"

'I-, sorry"

" Don't"

She walked over and took my hands, both of them in hers. She looked up at me fiercely.

"Now don't you do this to me! Your going to live forever and he was going to die anyways! You're a vampire, and that's what they do dammit!", she finished with a huff. I just looked at her. My emotions stirred and I felt something new. I couldn't put my finger quite to it. Her eyes were vivid red and her hands felt warm against mine. Sighing, I leaned down and put my head on her shoulder. Silently, she stroked my wet brown hair, as if to soothe me like a child.

Bliss

" Ok, we need clothes, and lots of it", Gwen said as she inspected my tattered clothes.

" How are we going to get it?'

" Well, I'm going to need your size to know what type of clothes to get you"

"Er, this size?"

" I'll get going"

She walked off, her body swaying side to side, caught me in a trance. She looked back and smiled, then ran.

I sighed. Her smile, her wit, her heavy sarcasm, her touch, all had me as soft as a pillow. Lately she had been watching me more carefully, as if I would crack like a porcelain doll in an earthquake . Of course, I didn't mind, as long as her eyes were on me.

Had she noticed something about me as I changed that week? Can she tell who I am? My heart wanted to beat so badly as I thought about her. Her lips, red from blood, her eyes burgundy, her hair swaying in the wind….

Am I in love? Me the person whom nobody loves? Me the heartless murderer?

Could I ?

Whom does she love? It feels silly for my affection to be wasted for someone unknown. For she had been the one who had brought me to this newer and more painful life. My emotions were stronger, my hormones were wild, just like any other teenage boy.

I answered my own question. I am in love.

How do I tell her? How do I make her love me? I had never done this. Never. Damn hormones. I needed something really, anything. To surprise her. To thank her, even an excuse to give her a peck on the cheek.

Or even better, the lips.

I paced around the Canadian forest in which me and Gwen traveled to a few days view was great, astonishing even. From miles away I could hear Niagara falls, splashing noisily.I just had to fall in love as soon as a I had freedom

It feels good.

Being vampire gives you limited choices. If I was human , I could take her out to eat, or take her to watch a film. Or I could take her shopping. None of this work without me massacring the whole place. And we also cant eat. I hated these human ideas, almost made me want to be human.

I got a plan

Sorry it's real short, but I'll have a long romantic chapter waiting- srry srry srry!!!!!!

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