Hi guys! I promised I would update Christmas Day if I got a review, and I did! Thank you, brightpath123 you get a Dapplepaw pushie, a Cherrypaw plushie, and an update! Thia Superstar, no, I don't think that is spamming, don't worry. You're story is very good! I'm grateful that you asked me to read a story, when somebody asks that, most of the time they think you are a role model sort of, is that true?
(Dapplepaw POV)
When I wake up, my eyes feel REALLY heavy! I finally manage to open them, and I gasp at what I see, a huge forest with prey everywhere! And in the middle of a clearing, Cherrypaw! "Cherrypaw! Where are we?!"
"We are in Starclan, sister."
"Are… are we… dead?"
"You are not dead."
"Oh, thank Starclan! Why are we here then?" I ask, not fully taking it in for a heartbeat. "Wait! What about you?! You only said I am not dead! What about you?"
"I… I…" *sigh* "I'm dead."
(Cherrypaw POV)
"I'm dead."
"What? You can't be dead!"
"It's true, she is dead."
"Whitekit!" Dapplepaw and I exclaim at the same time. Dapplepaw continues, mewing, "What are you doing here?" I roll my eyes which I'm pretty sure she catches because then she coughs a bit embarrassed. "Oh yeah, we are in Starclan."
"Duh!" I thwack my paw lightly over her head, causing her to jump on me.
"Stop! Both of you!" We break up, still glaring at each other like sisters do. "Cherrypaw, it is true that you are dead." Duh! "But it was not your time to die." Huh? "You both have a great destiny that your paws are set on, but death occurred to mess it up. Cherrypaw, when we were kits, you and I were very sick, but there is something that Jayfeather did not reveal to you after you revived. You almost died. Starclan came to me in a dream, saying that it was not your time and that I should never have been born. I was a bit confused on what they were talking about, but then they told me a prophecy, The white kit never born, has a chance to revive the Cherry once down. More recently I have received, The Spirit pushed by the Breeze and the White will return the favor to the Breeze by revealing the truth."
"What do you mean?"
"I can say no more, good-bye." Whitekit is slowly vanishing just to be replaced by a blue-gray cat.
"Who are you?"
"I am Bluestar, leader before Firestar, and mentor to him."
(Dapplepaw POV)
"Wow that is ssssssooooooo cool!"
"What are you here for?" My dead sister asks.
"Young Cherrypaw, it was not your time to die, as your sister has probably already told you. With this life, I give you courage; to defend what you believe is right. Use it wisely in the moons to come."
"Wait, what… AAAAHHHHH!"
"Cherrypaw! What are you doing to her?" My sister collapses on the floor, out of breath but a fierce determination shining in her eyes.
"I gave her a life, it was not her time to die and she has a large destiny ahead of her."
"I thought only Clan leaders could get lives from Starclan!"
"Normally, yes, but there are rare times when a cat dies before they fulfill they're destiny. At those times, Starclan are permitted to give a cat back a life."
*o.O* "Wow."
"Good-bye Cherrypaw, and Dapplepaw."
"Good-bye." Starclan's hunting grounds start fading before my very eyes.
Before I wake up, I hear Bluestar repeating in a dreamy voice, "The Spirit pushed by the Breeze and the White will return the favor to the Breeze by revealing the truth." And I can only imagine that Cherrypaw heard it also.
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