NYAH~ SO HAPPY TODAY~ AYA~ PYA~ OMPH. *ouch.* HAH? NANI…? KYAAAAAHHHH! *faints*

(There's gonna be a (not-so) mini complaint to the Critics United at the bottom…

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Lexie-chan94 - Yup Asari appeared~ Now I wonder what's gonna happen this time?

long live marshmallows - My friend's are interesting alright... Yeah. They are... Ah! Thanks for telling me about the mistake there... I'll try to change it as soon as possible seeing that I have to eat dinner now... Well, thank you very much for the review! I like that people pay attention to my mistakes here and there~ So thanks~

Ayz283 - Yay~! You enjoyed that chappie~ Thank goodness! Thanks!

R3iga1004 - Ahahaha... my eyes just went OwO when I read your review! (Oh shoot, I sound like Yamamoto now... but that's a good thing I believe.)

10th Squad 3rd Seat - Chapter 5 - Yup... EVILLLL LADY! MEANIE!

Chapter 6 - The two twins are weird, I must say. Well, they are weird since I did create them... Ehehehe... Well, thanks for the review!

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Disclaimer: This stupid author does not own the awesome manga called KHR (Or the anime~)

So… what happened before?

Yamamoto put the tip of his bamboo sword on the Vongola ring and it sucked it right in. "I wonder if Asari-san could do that with his ring…"

Before anybody knew it, Asari was standing next to Yamamoto in solid form.

"EHHHH? WHY IS ASARI OF THE VONGOLA HERE?" Rena was stunned. "And even if you were the Vongola, how can you summon someone from the past? This is so unfair! Vongola has such high technology!"

So… what happens now?

"Uh oh… I don't think you should've appeared…"

Asari smiled before his smile went slack. "Wait, but didn't you call me?"

"Ah… I was just wondering if… Never mind." Yamamoto dropped the topic and turned to Mukuro and Chrome. "Ahahaha… Asari-san, since you are here, you wouldn't mind helping out would you?"

And that's what happened… concluding in 10 minutes later, they are seen…

In the girl's bathroom.

"W-Why are we here in a girl's bathroom anyways?" Asari said since he was standing on the toilet seat after listening to what Yamamoto had to explain about the current situation.

"Ahahaha… ask Mukuro…" Yamamoto responded while sitting on the big flush tank behind the toilet.

Mukuro, who was floating on top, stared down at the two and Mukuro answered, "Because, my dear Nagi here, can't go to the boy's washroom."

"Errr… we can't be seen in the girl's washroom either…" Yamamoto nervously chuckled.

"Kufufu… you're not seen. And besides… Kufufu… I could make you invisible…"

"R-right…" Asari laughed nervously before questioning, "Mukuro-kun, if you could make us invisible, doesn't that mean that we can just walk down the hallways and find the others instead of staying here in the girl's washroom?"

"Kufufu… so many questions… Nagi had to go to the washroom." Mukuro raised an eyebrow as if to say, 'Didn't you already figure it out?'

"Hahaha… where is she anyways, Mukuro?" Yamamoto scratched his head in confusion.

"Kufufu… if you would really like to know, my dear Nagi, was in the stall to the left. And now is washing her hands…"

Chrome, who was drying off her hands, blushed a deep red before saying, "A-ano… Mukuro-sama… we could… um… g-go and find Lambo-kun and Bossu n-now…"

Mukuro, in a flash, disappeared from the stall and appeared out with Chrome. "Kufufu… right you are, dear Nagi…"

Yamamoto and Asari climbed out of the stall before walking towards the door and pulling on the handle.

"Hey, hey… We'll definitely be the first ones to find Vongola Decimo, neh?"

"Hah! He won't know what hit him! Oh, oh! And I've checked out all of the student records at school and turns out only 17 of them didn't reveal their occupation, Mukuro Rokudo and Chrome Dokuro, to list a few… I'm not sure about the transfer students this year… it seems as if the school purposely erased their ID records…"

"You're so lucky to be the principle's daughter~"

"Just a minute, okay? I've got to fix my hair."

With that, the mysterious girl began to push open the door to the girl's washroom.

Yamamoto froze along with Asari, Mukuro and Chrome… Oooh… they were in deep trouble now…

So what happened over there? (With Tsuna and Gokudera.)

"Gokudera-kun… I'm quite worried about Chrome and Yamamoto…" Tsuna frowned deeply.

"Is it your Hyper Intuition, Jyuudaime?"

"Yeah. There's a nagging feeling that they're in trouble somewhere." Tsuna scratched his head in frustration.

Gokudera looked at his boss worriedly before reassuring him, "Don't worry, Jyuudaime. Baseball idiot can take care for himself and the quiet girl too. At least… I think."

Tsuna growled slightly and then sighed with his eyebrows scrunched together. "Yeah… I guess. Better find Onii-san or Hibari-san…"

"EXTREMELY AMAZING TO THE EXTREME!"

"I guess we found him…" Tsuna deadpanned at the loud voice the boxer was speaking in.

"AH! SAWA-!" the sun guardian was cut off with a hand on his mouth by none other than Gokudera Hayato.

"Shut up, turf top! Don't yell Jyuudaime's name out or we'll be hunted!" Gokudera snarled before letting go of the hyper boy when Tsuna told him to.

"Eh… good thing you're here, onii-san… We were looking for you." Tsuna mumbled incoherently.

"Eh? WHAT? YOU'RE IT TOO? DAMN! I THOUGHT THE OTHERS WERE IT!" Ryohei shouted as he ran away from Tsuna and Gokudera who had their jaws hung loose.

Tsuna shrieked to Ryohei, "W-WAIT, ONII-SAN, WHAT DO YOU MEAN?" As he said this, Tsuna sprinted towards the direction of the enthusiastic runner with Gokudera following in suit.

"WE'RE PLAYING HIDE AND SEEK GO TAG, RIGHT? EXTREME!"

Tsuna sweat dropped and chased after him. "WAIIITTTT!"

Meanwhile, at Chrome's side…

"Kufufu… do you hear what I'm hearing?" Mukuro cackled creepily.

"EXTREMEEEE!"

"Uh… A really Knuckles-lookalike is coming our way?" Asari shrugged as he offered.

"Ahahaha… H-How did you know?" Yamamoto laughed cheerfully yet awkwardly.

"Because… there's one coming right now and is going to knock you over if you don't step back?"

"…Oh really?" Yamamoto laughed before getting barreled over by a really excited Ryohei.

I'm really sorry for finishing this chapter so soon… but a writer's block conjured up as I wrote it… STUPID WRITER'S BLOCK!

So… just a (NOT SO) quick note,

I have seen other fanfic authors post protests against Critics United. And what the Critics United are said to be, people who want to help improve others' stories, no, they are not 'people who want to help improve others' stories. They are just hurting other authors' feelings.

However, for the pro (good) side, Honestly, I think that what they are doing is somewhat correct but too exaggerated, as in, don't need to go to that much of an effort to do so.

Now, on to the con side, if, just IF, they are actual critics and/or randomly chose to be one, critics are supposed to help others IMPROVE their stories not report it and make the fanfiction managers DELETE it. If I'm not wrong, the correct definitions of critics are people who make judgements on the good AND the bad side of a story, novel, movie, TV show, etc. (cited Thorndike-Barnhart Junior Dictionary)

From what I've seen, many of the supposedly 'critics' are just saying what is horrible about others' fanfictions. It is not the authors' fault that they can't rate it MA, it is also not the readers fault that they browse through the M section. (And no, of course, I don't blame the managers either.) The part where I, myself, am completely disapproving of the Critics United is the part where they swear and call the fanfic authors and/or their stories, 'shitfics' or 'toxic crap.'

That is NOT what critics are supposed to be saying and if you picture them as 'actual' critics, NO. They are NOT critics. They are people who are wannabe critics. (*Which completely utterly fails at it.) So is the Critics United what they are supposed to be (according to what they named themselves), no, that's the answer. This leads to the point where I must post a complaint as well.'^'

-fanfic author, fionlao (I know there are good critics out there so I do acknowledge that not all of the CU are bad…)

(P.S. Just so you know, I don't really care if anyone deletes my story because I'm 'discriminating' against other fanfic authors (CU) and besides, they're doing pure cyber bullying… and that's that… I guess.)