Author Note: it's time for chapter three of this storyline and I can't believe it. I hope that you all had a wonderful Halloween and happy November 1st. Thank you for reading this storyline. We got about seven chapters to go left in this storyline.

Chapter three

Callen's POV

I am getting worried about Allie and Mackynzie. They should have been back by now. I tried to text my daughter and Allie to see what's going on. I finally hear my phone beep. Mackynzie had set me up on twitter before she and Allie left.

Mackynzie tweeted me and said "she's been shot and I'm taken hostage. Get help for Allie and trace my phone. I'll try to keep my phone on. Don't tweet back."

I called my partner to have him meet me at the last known location of Allie. We found her laying there unconscious.

"Allie. Wake up." I said as I move her head towards me.

"Callen they took kenzie. We need to find her." She responded to me as she started to cough

"Hey relax." Sam reminded her as the emt showed up and started working on her. The rest of the team get there and start trying to figure out where my daughter went. I didn't understand what is going on until I get a tweet with my daughter's photo.

"U want 2 see your child again then you will do what I want." The tweet said as I respond back.

"What do u want from me? Don't hurt my daughter." I responded to my daughter's kidnapper.

" I won't as long as you cooperate with us." The tweet responded.

"By how?" I asked

"By bringing Allie and yourself to the warehouse eight tomorrow. That should give her enough time to get medical care." It responded to the tweet that I had sent. I didn't understand why they are doing this to my daughter and now Allie. I know that I could handle my self but this was unfair to the girls.

Mackynzie's POV

I woke up after being out cold for the past two hours. The last thing that I remembered is texting my dad and letting him know what is going on. I hope that he found Allie in time.

Third person POV

I walked into the room to find the one person that I have not seen in a while. Callen had decided to seek full custody of our daughter behind my back and now he has another woman playing mommy to my daughter. I don't get what is in his head but I am going to get my child back and I don't care what happens to her father or that woman.

"Mom? Is that you?" I heard my daughter asked.

"Yes kenzie it's me and its time for you to come home with me where you belong." I revealed to her as Callen busted the door down.

"Emily?" He says in shocked as I turn around.

"You are going to get her killed. You were supposed to wait until the warehouse." I told him while pretty sure that I give my cover away. I don't care since I need time to get things together so we can leave.

"Your lying. Your forgetting that I knew you for many years. You took our daughter without saying a word. You shot Allie without even thinking about it. You made our daughter watch you shoot someone that she cares about." He said to me. Truth was that I felt bad for his girlfriend since she is amazing with our daughter.

"I know and I feel bad about that." I said to him.

"No you don't. If you did then you would not have done. She would be okay." Mackynzie yelled at her mom.

Callen's POV

All I wanted to do is protected my daughter from her mother. I knew that she was going to jail for what she did to Allie and Mackynzie. I also knew that I needed to do what's best for my daughter.

"Why don't you let mackynzie go?" I pleaded with her.

"No. I can't." She said as she grabbed our daughter. I raise my gun as the rest of the team joined us. I am pretty sure that she might died and I don't want my daughter to be witness to that.

"Listen to me, I don't want her here if something bad happens to her mother. I am sure that you don't want her to see that either. Let her go." I pleaded with her as he heard a shoot come out of someone's gun.

Author Note: who do you think was shot? Mackynzie or her mother. I hope that you like this chapter of the storyline. On Tuesday, I will be back posting season five and season 11 chapter six. I hope that you have an amazing Saturday and the rest of the weekend since I don't have anything schedule. Don't forget to join me on my first ever one take Monday. I really hope that you like it. I am not sure if there will be posted this week or next week. I hope that you follow me on Twitter as carson34ff where I updated all the time. Originally I was going to have mackynzie kidnapper at the end of the chapter. Did you know Deeks was in the movie the back up plan? Chapter four will be posted next Saturday morning and I hope that you will enjoy it. Don't forget to watch this week's episode of NCIS:LA. How did you like callen as a teacher? Thanks for reading. Don't forget to read chapter six of NCIS:LA season five coming out this Tuesday which I have to finished watching it.

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