Author Note: alright if I get this done before tomorrow night show then it will be posted if not then it will be posted on Saturday. I wanted to make sure that I finished this chapter by the end of next week. I hope that you like this chapter. I am working on the last chapter right now so that way I can post the new storyline next Saturday.

Chapter four: Don't hurt my daughter

Callen's POV

I watched as Sam takes down Emily with a single shot. I rushed over to my daughter wanting to make sure that she's okay.

"Mackynzie, are you okay?" I asked my daughter as I pulled her towards me.

"Yeah dad. I'm okay. How's Allie?" She asked me

"She's doing okay." I responded to her. "Come on let's get you to the hospital to check you out by a doctor."

We head for the car and headed for the hospital to make sure that Allie and Mackynzie were going to make a full recovery after this.

Mackynzie's POV

It was hard to go to my mom's funeral since she is the one that put me thou thing that a mother should be protecting her daughter. It's been two weeks since I was kidnapped and Allie was released yesterday from the hospital and we convinced her to move in with us. I walked into my dad's bedroom to see if she need anything.

"Hey can I get you anything?" I asked her.

"Yeah some company." She responded to her.

"Okay." I revealed as I sit on the bed.

"What's wrong?" She asked me.

"Nothing." I lied to her.

"Kenzie, I know you. There is something there and I won't tell your dad about it." She responded to me as she is just finally starts crying.

"I fell that I am responsible for getting you hurt." I responded to her as she moves closer to me.

"Sweetie, it's not your fault at all. Your mom wasn't healthy." She revealed to me as we didn't hear my dad come into the room.

"What's going on?" He asked us clueless to what's going on. We both look at each other. "Come on guys."

"Okay. I feel guilty of her getting shot." I responded to my dad.

"Honey, your not responsible for what your mom did." He said to her.

"I know. I just need some time to think about it." I said as I stand up from the bed and walk out of the room.

Callen's POV

I walked into work knowing that I am worried about kenzie since its hard on her. I figure that I am going to asked Hetty for some time off to be with her and Allie.

"Hey Hetty, do you have a second?" I asked her.

"Oh yes Mr. Callen. What's going on?" She asked me.

"I need some time off. My daughter needs me right now and I was hoping that you give me some time." I revealed to her.

"Let me think about it and I will get back to you after we finished this case." She responded to me.

"Alright." I said as we headed up stairs to find out that the new case is. I knew that she might give me the time since she knows what happened to both kenzie and Allie and that they need me at home.

Three months later

Allie's POV

It's been three months since I moved in with Callen and Mackynzie. I must say that I am very happy to be here. I knew that he was planning something since he was being really secretive with mackynzie. I decided that I wanted to see if Callen and Kenzie would let me adopt her. Callen told me that we were going out for dinner and I was told that my clothes were on the bed. Mackynzie said that she was going over to her friends house. I watched as he helped me load into the car and then he got into the car.

"Where are we going?" I asked him as he just smiled at me. I know that something is up.

We pulled up to the place and he helped me out of the truck and we headed into the room where we found the team and Mackynzie waiting for us.

"Callen, what's going on?" I asked him as he got down to one knee.

"Allison, you have given me so much joy in the past year and I wanted to know if you would be my wife?" He asked me. "Will you please marry me?"

I was expectlng this proposal but I wanted to make sure that it's best for all of us so I don't know what I am going to say in response to his proposal.

Author Note: who's looking forward to next week episode of NCIS:LA where Callen knows that they could lose their jobs and face jail time. I am thinking about writing a Facebook storyline in a sequel to this storyline. What do you guys think of that I idea? Twitter basically save this family. alright that's is where we are going to leave you at. What do you think is going to be her answer to his question. I'll be back on Saturday with the final chapter of this storyline. Don't forget to check out my Twitter as carson34ff where I would love to talk to you about any of the storylines. Don't forget to check out my blog where I updated all the time.

Have you check out my other storylines for NCIS:LA and Hawaii five o. Alright I will see you next chapter and please review and let me know what you think of it. I will be back tomorrow with another chapter and wrapping this storyline up. What was your favorite Halloween moments. Also I will have a veteran's day for both Sam and Callen storyline out. Now remind you that it's going to be a two storylines.