Thanks to Flowerfur, tr1xx777, and an anonymous reviewer going by the name Brightspots. To speak to the reviewers:
Flowerfur- I prefer Bloodkit myself; Hollykit is just what my sister would act like XD
Tr1xx777- I know Cinderheart would never name her kit Bloodkit, but I like the name and it's relevant for later on in the story
Brightspots- Don't die now! I can't really tell you that answer because it would ruin the story.
Thanks to all of my reviewer's! Oh, and there were dividers between the different POVs but they didn't show up. On with the story!
"Is this the truth, Hollykit?" Lionblaze snarled. His tail lashed behind him.
"Yes. Why would I lie? They're my sister's and I wouldn't want anything to hurt them." Hollykit hoped Lionblaze would think she was telling the truth.
Cinderheart rose to her paws. "We need to tell Bramblestar about this."
"Yes," Hollykit's father stalked towards Bramblestar's den. "I'll tell him."
Cinderheart stared at Hollykit, "Go and tell Jayfeather. He might have to clean a few scratches when Bloodkit and Redkit get back." She paused. "And tell your father that I've gone to look for your sister's at the abandoned two-leg nest."
Hollykit dipped her head, "Yes, Cinderheart."
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Redkit stared at Bloodkit, her paws rooted to the ground. "Why?"
Her sister trembled furiously. "Redkit; just run."
Redkit twitched her ear in confusion. "Why are you whispering?"
"B-b-b-behind you…"
"What's behind me?" as she spoke, Redkit turned around and was over-whelmed with fear. "What is it?"
Bloodkit swallowed. "A fox."
Suddenly, the fox sprang forwards, almost on top of Redkit. The little red she-kit found that she had her paws free from the ground and pelted towards her sister.
Bloodkit turned tail and followed her sister into the forest.
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Cinderheart turned from her kit and pelted out the thorn tunnel. Soon, her breaths were coming in pants as she ran faster than she ever had before.
The grey she-cat slowed down as she tried to scent her kits. There! Cinderheart swerved to follow her kits' scents.
She soon picked up a fresh fox scent that mingled with Bloodkit's and Redkit's fear scent.
Cinderheart paused for a moment, listening closely for sounds of her kits. She heard a faint squeal towards the WindClan border.
The she-cat soon arrived at the border, all the time scenting the air desperately for Bloodkit and Redkit.
Cinderheart snarled.
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"Cinderheart!" Bloodkit shrieked. She backed away from the fox as it advanced.
"In here, Bloodkit," hissed Redkit. "I'm in a hole."
The dark red she-kit turned tail and scooted into the hole. She whimpered in terror as the fox forced its paw into the rabbit burrow.
Suddenly, the huge paw disappeared and Bloodkit heard an angry snarl; an angry snarl from Cinderheart.
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Cinderheart stared defiantly at the fox. "Don't even think about hurting my kits." The queen launched herself at the fox.
She landed on the fox's back and clamped her jaws around its left ear. Cinderheart then raked her claws across the fox's neck.
The fox, maddened by pain and hunger reared on to its hind legs and fell on its back.
Cinderheart writhed under the mass of revolting fur, trying and failing to get free from the fox. She gasped for air but she only breathed in fox fur.
The desperate she-cat caught site of light brown tabby fur on the WindClan border. "Help me," she gasped, managing to free a paw.
"Why should I?" hissed the tabby. "You took everything from me." Her eyes narrowed in hatred.
Cinderheart twisted under the fox and screeched when it turned over and raked its mangy claws down her belly. "Heathertail; please!"
Heathertail stared at Cinderheart through her heather-coloured eyes. "It was your fault. Me and Lionblaze would've been mates if it wasn't for you; sticking your nose in our business."
Cinderheart didn't reply; couldn't reply. Her breathing was laboured and she found that she couldn't open her eyes anymore.
Heathertail jerked her head up and dived beneath a clump of heather. She watched in glee as Lionblaze came into the scene.
Cinderheart was barely conscious. Her blood choked her airways and she couldn't feel the pain in her belly anymore.
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"Cinderheart; no!" Lionblaze charged the fox and leapt at its throat. "Stay away from my mate, fox-dung!"
The fox, in its already weakened state, back away from the tomcat. It barked angrily at Lionblaze before turning tail and running.
Lionblaze stumbled to his mate's side. He pressed his head against her back. "Cinderheart?"
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Redkit and Bloodkit crawled out of the hole. "Lionblaze? What's wrong with Cinderheart?"
Lionblaze lifted his head. "Nothing Bloodkit; she's just sleeping." He gave a weak smile.
Yeah. I know; short. But that is all I can think of for now and I need to go in the shower. Till next week, readers!
~Badgerclaw~