Uh. Internet's playing up again. Review time!
Beckerr: I'm not sure if she's gonna be evil… Let's find out later.
Silverwind1114: I dunno what you mean by the first part of your review, but Bloodkit's name is vital for later on in the story, even if people don't like the name.
Tinckles: I myself blame Heathertail for Cinderheart's death.
Tr1xx777: Thank you
On with the story!
Bloodkit stared up at the full-moon, her amber eyes gleaming in the half-light. She sighed and dropped her head to her paws.
It had been two moons since Cinderheart's death and Bloodkit still felt guilty. She knew Redkit probably felt the same but Bloodkit was the boss off the two and she should have seen this coming.
What did she think would happen? That she and Redkit would find an enemy patrol and chase them out? Or maybe they would catch a mouse? No.
Bloodkit could never cuddle up to Cinderheart and Redkit ever again. Now she had to put up with Hollykit constantly blaming her for everything, and she had to sleep in Daisy's nest.
Bloodkit hated that kittypet; she was useless. Always sitting around doing nothing… Daisy never fought or even went on patrols. When Bloodkit was leader, no kittypets would be allowed to join the clan and make them the laughing stock to the other clans.
The little she-kit snorted. If any kittypet was seen in her territory she would kill it. Bloodkit smiled grimly; all useless cats in the clan would be killed too… But not the elders, the elders deserved to be treated fairly; after all, they had actually helped the clan.
She sighed and stared mournfully up at the sky through the bramble roof, Are you up there, Cinderheart?
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Hollykit stared disdainfully across the nursery to where Redkit and Bloodkit were sitting. The plan had gone all horribly wrong and now her mother was dead.
Cinderheart's death didn't bother Hollykit that much, but she supposed it was useful to make Bloodkit feel bad.
Hollykit snorted. Lionblaze had become a nervous wreck; he stood outside the nursery and always watched his kits.
The little she-kit scowled as she thought about how annoying her father had become. At least he only thinks that Bloodkit and Redkit need watching all the time… I'm glad he doesn't keep me safe.
Her green eyes stared thoughtfully out of the nursery entrance. I wonder what would happen if he knew I was being trained by a StarClan warrior… He'd probably lose his pelt.
She chuckled softly to herself. One day she would be leader of all the clans by the lake, and the tribe too. Every cat would be under command by her. One day.
Okay, so this is just a filler chapter; not very exciting, nothing much happens. It just explains what happens after Cinderheart dies. I know; it's short.
I wonder who the mysterious 'StarClan' cat is. Maybe we'll find out next chapter.
Oh, and apologies for updating so late; I had writer's block.