Um. Nothing much to report back. I'll get on with the reviews:
Danilynea: Thank you! I could do that… I'll see how that works out.
Tr1xxx777: Thank you! Yeah, I should put Redkit in now… Have I put a Redkit POV yet? And it is kinda like a big fight between Hollykit and Bloodkit, with Redkit stuck in the middle of it.
Sandtail: Yeah. Hollykit annoys me too. And update soon on your story, yeah?
Redkit blinked open her amber eyes to the sound of arguing. Great; Bloodkit and Hollykit are fighting again.
The russet she-kit padded sleepily out of the nursery, leaving her warm nest behind her. She gazed around the clearing before spotting her two littermates by the fresh-kill pile.
"Squirrel is only meant for those that deserve it, fox-dung," spat Bloodkit. "Why don't you starve already?"
Redkit saw Hollykit bristle. "Me? Fox-dung?" she cast her emerald eyes over Bloodkit's body. "I'm not the one who looks like it."
Bloodkit sprang forward. "Take that back you little piece of mouse-dung." She swiped angrily at the black she-kit.
Hollykit hissed threateningly and leaped on to Bloodkit. She unsheathed her claws and ripped them across her sister's face.
Redkit heard Bloodkit shriek in pain and terror as Hollykit pummelled her with unsheathed claws. The she-kit scrambled up to Bramblestar's den.
"Bramblestar! Bramblestar! Hollykit's hurting Bloodkit!" Redkit stumbled to a halt as she saw Squirrelflight and Lionblaze with Bramblestar.
"What?" Redkit's father stared at her. "Why in StarClan's name would she want to do that?"
"They hate each other," wailed the kit. "And Hollykit attacked Bloodkit with claws unsheathed!"
"Unsheathed?" Squirrelflight pelted out of the den to see a few of the apprentices pleading with Hollykit to let her sister go.
"Stop it!" she shrieked. "Get off your sister, Hollykit."
The black she-kit stared murderously at the clan deputy. "No."
Bloodkit mewled pitifully beneath Hollykit. Blood coated one side of her face and dripped into her eye.
Bramblestar strode towards the commotion. "Get off her." He stared angrily down at Lionblaze's daughter. "Now!"
Hollykit scowled. "Why should I? The little rat killed"-
She didn't finish her sentence as the clan leader's paw knocked her off of Bloodkit. He stared at Squirrelflight. "Take Bloodkit to Jayfeather and take Redkit with her." Bramblestar turned to Hollykit. "Stay there."
Redkit turned and followed Bloodkit and Squirrelflight to Jayfeather's den, but not before she saw Hollykit grinning in Bloodkit's direction.
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Bloodkit groaned as she woke. The left side of her face was coated in dried blood and cobwebs.
"Bloodkit?" A shuffling noise followed soon after the words were spoken. "Do you remember what happened?"
The kit shook her head. "No, Jayfeather. What happened?"
Jayfeather stepped closer to Bloodkit and held her gaze sympathetically with his blind eyes. "Hollykit attacked you by the fresh-kill pile. Your left ear was shredded, though you can still hear out of it, you won't be able to move it."
Bloodkit stared at her kin through the eye that wasn't covered in cobweb, "I can't move my ear?" Her voice trembled.
The medicine cat brushed his muzzle against Bloodkit's forehead. "You're also blind in your left eye. I'm so sorry."
"No!" she shrieked. "I don't want to be blind like you!"
Jayfeather sighed and sat down, curling his tail around his paws. "You can still be a warrior, it's not like you're blind in both eyes."
"But it's not fair!"
"Go to sleep, Bloodkit. You'll recover quicker."
Bloodkit sniffed resentfully but curled up in the make-shift nest. "Night, Jayfeather."
"Good night, Bloodkit."
