The Maiden, Captivated By You
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Alice's Point Of View
"Guy's we have to get Edward now!" I shouted, getting up Vampire speed and grabbing Jaspers arm in a death grip, and pulling him quickly to the door. But as I look back all I could see was my family still sitting on couch, mouths wide open still in utter shock.
"Why is she here Alice?" Carlisle being the first one to recover from the shocking news I just informed them of.
"I don't know she just said she wanted to see you-" I said truthfully, when another vision hit me full force, making me even more shocked at the real reason on why she was here.
Vision
It was her and Edward in the Meadow holding hands, as Edward sat down on the green grass of the meadow bringing her to his lap, while hugging her protectively. While they stared lovingly at each other's eyes. Just then Edward raised his left hand and started stoking her cheek softly, still staring into her brown iris's, never breaking each other's gazes. The way Edward was staring at her was as if she was only woman in the world, As if someone was going to snatch her away from him.
"I love you Angel" he whispered
"I love you too" her beautiful childlike voice whispered
Right at those words, Edward grabbed her softly from the back of her head, and crashed his lips to hers. This can only be explained as a passionate kiss, between to lovers.
"Forever" they both whispered, and smiled at each other widely, as Edward brunt her into another passionate kiss. When the vision ended, completely.
Into The Present
"The particular reason she's here, is because…" I couldn't finish, I was in too much shock
"Because…." They all answered
"Edward is her mate" I whispered
When I was finished with my sentence, everyone's jaws fell to the floor in a millisecond…seriously. Their mouths where so wide open a bird house could be built inside, to tell the truth it was pretty funny, but this wasn't a time for joking matter.
"Guys close your mouths, you're going to catch flies" then all of them closed their mouths, but stayed silent for a very long time.
"Guys I don't have all day, she'll be in clearing in 5 minutes, SNAP OUT OF IT!" I screamed, as they shook their heads and got off the couch slowly, and when I mean slowly I mean zombie slowly. I swear can they get more aggravating!
"If you guys don't snap out of it, I'm going alone with Jasper and Edward to meet her, take it or leave it?" well that snapped them out of it, because once I was finished saying that statement they where out the door in a nanosecond.
"I can't believe she's really here" Carlisle whispered tenderly, and I could see from his eyes that he was proud.
"Anything you should warn us about her Carlisle?"
"Well….She's extremely Wise…and don't get her angry, unless you want your arm ripped of your body" Carlisle nodded, and walked forward, leaving Emmet shuddering.
"Don't get her angry, don't get her angry" he kept whispering, it was pretty funny watching a big guy like Emmet be afraid of a girl that's practically my same size. A girl that was practically 5'0, with big brown puppy dog eyes, that you can fall for, pink pouty lips, that it'll make a guy get a hard on just by those lips moving, and of course her cute face, that was vey childlike and innocent. Compared to Emmet's 6'3 size, making him look like one of those body builders on steroids. I mean come on, who would be afraid of that?
"Guys, I think it's best if we don't tell Edward about "her" "I said putting quotation markers around the word her with my fingers, making it a simple and obvious gesture.
"Yea your right, we all knows what Edward will do when he finds out about this" Carlisle chuckled
"He'll run" we all said at once
Edward P.O.V.
Peace.
No ones annoying thoughts, it was just…
Quiet. Relaxing. Peace.
Right now I was lying down in my meadow, eye closed, muscles relaxed, my head facing up to the clear blue sky. The Sun streaming through the meadow, particularly hitting my marble skin, exerting warmth but it didn't feel uncomfortable, it felt nice. The coldness of my body welcomed the warmth; in a way… it made me feel human again. But the only in-human thing about lying in the sun was that my skin was glittering, like a million tiny little diamonds, which made my ego decreased. Instead of making me feel like a big, bad, scary vampire, I felt like a fucking faerie.
But I think it's best if I just rela-
"EDWARD!" I groaned, loudly.
I knew who's annoying thoughts and voice that was.
Alice.
"Come on Alice, why do I have to meet this "person", you speak of, and how is it important to me, why can't I just meet them when they arrive at our home? I grumbled, I really didn't want to meet this "person", I don't even know anything about him or her. Alice won't tell me anything.
"You have to meet her" o so it was a girl, interesting…
"So it's a girl? What's her name?" I asked, but she didn't answer. All she did was ignore my question and masked herself with a poker face. So I read her mind…
"ma, milkshake brings all the boys to the yard damn right, it's better than-
"Ugh! Just tell me, already!"
"You'll see" she smirked, while still singing that annoying song in her head, and she started skipping to the clearing where our family stood, next to each other's mates, holding them in a protective stance. As I thought to myself was it now or never…
I was confused, very confused.
Who was I meeting and why was it so important, why did they have to remove me from my sanctuary, why did they have to take me out of the place I love to be the most, why was here? So many questions, that are un-answered.
What was so god damn important about meeting this "girl"? It's not like the Volturi's was here.
The worst part about it was that the whole family also knew, but they all had a different ways of hiding their thoughts from me. For example, Emmet, always thinking of something that I will never be pleased to see, to say the least. When he was hiding something from me, he would always think about Rosalie and his encounters, when they are spending….quality time with each other. But not the type where they cuddle on a blanket against each other and stare at the moon…..hell no. It was more like hearing moaning, groaning, growls, bangs, snarls, etc… and other thing in between, which always makes me shudder.
Jasper had a different way of hiding his thoughts, he would always think about the civil war, and the facts about it, I'm talking about dates, deaths, famous sergeants, captains, hero's etc…
Esme, she thought about how she was going to redecorate the interior of all of our different homes, we have around the world.
Carlisle would think about the basics of being a surgeon.
I was brought out of my thoughts when I heard footsteps approaching, slow and graceful foot stops, pounding on the mossy ground, making shriveling noises as the person's feet hit the grass. Making everyone cringe, which by the looks of it, I knew this person might me very powerful and could hurt my family.
The footsteps kept approaching slowly, as sky blue heel came to view and stopped right in the center of the clearing.
As I gasped including everyone around me.
Alice's P.O.V.
Oh I can't wait, where going to be best friends!
Emmett's P.O.V.
Hahahahhah, Eddie looks like he's about to shit a brick…
Rosalie's P.O.V.
She's so beautiful and adorable, so childlike and small with big brown eyes and baby face.
I hope she doesn't mind if I treat her like a little sister.
She's too cute.
Esme's P.O.V.
Ohhh, she so adorable…
She's perfect for Edward…
Carlisle P.O.V.
Not a day older from seventeen…
Jasper's P.O.V.
Ohhhh god, I can't take all of this emotional over load.
Back to Edward's P.O.V.
I recognized that body…Every. Single. Inch of it.
She was similar to Alice's height except about 2 inches taller with a petite figure. Of course she had flawless pale skin, but it had a slight pink blush to it, making it look irresistible. She had the most astonishing mahogany hair, where it fell to her waist like a water fall or a beautiful bride's veil.
I tried to take my eyes of her body, but they landed right on her face, first starting at her chin, then her lovely pink pouty lips and a cute button nose. But what captivated me most were her eyes. Where the most beautiful chocolate brown depths stared right back at me.
"Angel" I whispered, as an adorable giggle escaped her parted lips, which I would most gladly lay a gentle kiss upon. But I wanted her, I needed her, I yearned to hold her in my arms and protect her from any means of danger. But that's not what shocked me the most. I suddenly had the urge to run over to her, take her to my house and do unspeakable things to her in my bedroom. Possessiveness and lust coursed through my being and I was no longer Edward. This girl, in a matter of seconds, had turned my world upside-down. I could only register one word in my mind.
Mine.
I knew then that I had found my mate. She was the most beautiful vampire I had ever seen in my entire existence. She's the one.
She's the one I've been waiting for my entire existence.
When I sneaked a glance at her, I saw that she was defiantly "eye fucking me", well…her eyes where mostly trained to my crotch, as she started to lick her lips just by the sight of them.
I started making simple body gestures, to let her know, that I knew she was "eyeing-my-junk". When she finally looked up, all I did was smirk cockily at her, which made her bow her head in embarrassment.
It'll all right sweetheart…wanna take a better look at it?
Do you want me to take off my pants, for you can come and examine it personally?
We can take it to my room if you'd like?
Oh god…where did all these pervert thoughts come from? What's wrong with me?
All of a sudden a beautiful and innocent girl comes along and ends up having this effect on me. I wouldn't blame her or me, she is the most beautiful vampire alive...well you can say that because she has not heartbeat, even if she does have blood coursing through her body.
All of a sudden Alice started approaching her, which brought out my possessive and protective instincts and made me growl at her. While she stopped in her steps, turned around and glared at me. While all of a sudden I felt a wave of calmness sweep through my being. Knowing it was Jasper's doing, I sent him an apologetic and thankful gesture, as he nodded curtly.
"I don't appreciate you growling at my mate Edward" Jasper thought
"Sorry" I whispered quietly
All of a sudden I felt someone calling my name inside my mind…
Edward…Edward
The beautiful voice kept calling, and I felt drawn to it…That's when I noticed my feet where moving, without me even noticing it. But it didn't feel like I was controlling it, it almost felt…natural. Like an elastic band was pushing me towards her, while everything around me disappeared and it was only me and her captivating eyes. That looks as if she can stare right through my soul …If I had one. But now it felt true, it felt right, I felt complete, I really believe I actually have a soul now, because no one can feel the love that's radiating out of my being, the love I held for this lovely creature. And there was no way fighting it.
As I approached her slowly and got closer to her while staring into her eyes, the wind blew her scent towards me. When the most mouthwatering scent hit me like a million steal bricks, making me gasp for breathe and clench my fists to my sides, squeezing them in a vice hold.
It was so hard not wanting to pounce on top of her and sink my teeth into that lovely neck of hers. Just by the sudden thought…I started to grow really hard down there.
Her scent was so mouthwatering.
Like Lilac, Vanilla and…hmmmm….strawberries.
But I had to snap out of it, if I sink my teeth into her neck, I'll hurt her…and I can't let that happen.
The Demon In me was growling at me, to let him out of his cage, to let my animalistic instincts take over me and to let myself go out of control. It wanted to cause chaos, it wanted to cause bloodshed, I was actually thinking about seducing her. Take her to the woods, removing all of her clothes as I pound roughly into her and sink my teeth into her neck and suck her dry till theirs no more.
Just by the thought of these cruel and horrible thoughts made me think of myself in disgust. How could I hurt my own mate, how could I think of me killing and raping her. I think its best if I stay away from her, so then she won't have to be in danger. I couldn't risk the chance of my love getting hurt just by being near me, even if it causes me pain.
Fight or Flight, Fight or Flight.
So I choose what I always did…I ran.
Bella's P.O.V.
Today was the day, the day my life would change…forever.
It was changing because today I was going to meet my Edward. I would finally see him in person, in flesh and in soul through my very own eyes.
But all I wonder is…
How does he look like?
Is He as Beautiful and Handsome as I imagined him?
Will he know who I am once he lays eyes on me?
Will He love me as much as I love him already, without me even seeing him?
Can he handle the fact that everyone is out to get me just because I'm a powerful vampire, and everyone in the world wants an end to me and him?
So many questions I have that are un-answered.
All of a sudden everything around me started disappearing, and I knew I was getting closer, the farther and faster I ran the more I could feel him close by. I didn't even know where I was running; all I knew was that I was following the pull to him and his scent. But even if it was a new experience it still felt…natural. The invisible elastic band that was pulling me to him started vibrating and coming to life, for it started to change colors, from red to green, from green to purple and last it turned a beautiful shade of ocean blue. I could feel it pulling me farther and farther towards his direction, the pull to each of our souls where suddenly coming to life, as my soul started to light up, the soul I thought I never had, due to my existence.
All of a sudden I stopped in my steps and my feet stopped moving all at once…All I could feel was the moss and dirt between my toes, I could see the canopy of trees and all the greenery around me. When I noticed a blue light in shinning in the distance, as if it was alive. The elastic band started to sway erratically out of control, as if informing me that I was very close to what I was searching for, and I knew I was. But that's when I noticed it…2 familiar scents which I already knew where Edward's, Carlisle's and 5 other un-known scents. So I knew the whole coven was here to meet me.
I kept walking closer and slowly taking deep breaths in and out, even when I didn't need them. But as I slowed the pace of my feet, I could see the blue light shinning several steps away from me.
All I could here was the shriveling of the grass and moss as my feet pounded against the earth, my nervous breathing and the several shallow breaths.
When all of a sudden the woods ended, creating a big opening to a large clearing as the trees casted shadows to seven pale figures standing in the distance.
As I stopped and looked up at what I was about to face, I think my heart might have started beating.
I could memorize each person standing several feet away from me.
Firstly I smiled as I saw Carlisle who was holding Esme, I presume, from her caramel hair and heart shaped face. But the way she was standing, I sensed a motherly atmosphere coming out of her. Next there was Emmet standing next to Rosalie and Alice standing near Jasper. There was one last person and I knew he was going to be my mate.
So I picked up my head and cast a glance to the left…where the most gorgeous captivating golden orbs stared back at me.
I swear, I think my panties just caught on fire
He has to be the most gorgeous man I have ever laid eyes upon, he's even sexier than I imagined…a lot more.
"Angel" he whispered, as he stared into my eyes from a distance and I giggled, and all I could see in them where love, lust, adoration, etc…
My eyes trailed up to his face where I saw this most un-usual shade of tousled, messy bronze hair where a few bits fell down into his eyes and my fingers twitched, because I was dying to run my hands through that messy mop of hair. I avoided his eyes but gazed at his features;
His strong jaw line, high cheek bones, perfectly angled nose and full kissable lips I would most defiantly bite. I was sure at that moment that he was sculpted by angels.
I tried to avoid his gorgeous face, but the worst came when I gazed at his lean swimmers body. His navy blue t-shirt that was tight against his body, showing off all his perfect, strong muscles. He was wearing a pair of black jeans that hung loosely on his hips, and trailed down to his trainers.
I was trying really…and I mean really hard not to look at the little exposed pale skin that was showing just near his stomach. So that when I noticed it was his happy trail…
Okay Bella control yourself, don't look down his happy trail…don't look…don't look…
But I looked anyways, and was bombarded with a very…very…very large erection that was straining against his jeans, and all I wanted to do was take care of it or just grind myself against him. I was trying really hard not to pounce on top of him and try to dry hump him like the horny little bunny that I was. I was also bighting back a moan, by chewing on my bottom lip so hard that I could taste blood in my mouth.
But those weren't the biggest problems; I was soooooooo….wet.
But when I looked up, I saw this sexy man smirking cockily at me, so bowed my head in utter embarrassment, because guess what? He caught me staring at his crotch. I think my ego might have decreased 10 point and his increased 90.
Ding ding ding, I guess he caught me looking at his huge…covered crotch, I bet it's begging to be free…I wouldn't mind if he let me sneak a peek at it…or all of it…
Before I could control myself, I looked into his eyes. They were deep pools of gold, full of mystery and wonder. He looked …as if he was in a hypotonic daze…if he only knew that every ounce in my being, his eyes captivated me in a way, I would never understand.
So I decided to try something I never tried before…I was going to try and call him in my mind, to see if he'll react or if he'll here me…
So I tried to push away the blue imaginary shied around me, at lease 20 inches…when all a sudden I felt nothing around me. It felt kind of uncomfortable because I'm not use to being outside of my own shield…so I spoke quickly, for I can get back into my protective bubble…
Edward…Edward
All of a sudden his feet started moving and he started walking towards me, not breaking his gaze from my eyes.
The next thing that happened surprised me to the least; he stopped mid-step and went ridged, as if he smelled something very appetizing, but was trying to strain himself to not go after it. But that wasn't what surprised me, his eyes where this deathly shade of onyx black. All I could see in those coal black eyes was predatory hunger. It looked as if he was trying to not pouncing on top of me. And I knew, ohhhhhh I knew, through those eyes…That I was his prey and he was my predator.
He started walking backwards, as of getting in a position to pounce, and I closed my eyes waiting for the impact…but I felt nothing…
I opened my eyes…
And he was gone.
Bowing my head in utter hurt and pain, and all I could tell myself was…
He didn't want me…
I wasn't good enough…
I'll never be…
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