Ok… so before I can continue with the story, I have had a lot of complaints that people are thoroughly confused

So I have come up with a plot update!! This should help clear some things up, and will hopefully make more sense. I will post

the next chapter by Thursday next week, and by then it will all make perfect sense.

But of course I can't actually write this plot help unless I know what people need help understanding.

This will be a little vague, until I really know what people want to know, so I'll just touch a few things.

Point 1: Jacob is dead

Point 2: Bella is a vampire

Point 3: Bella has a sort of telekinetic power- she can control and move objects with her mind

Point 4: Bella IS NOT! I repeat NOT the feared vampire

Point 5: the vampire that Edward and Bella saw 'eating' in the forest on the bear hunt was Carlisle- I'll come back to the

shape changing later

Point 6: in chapter nine, it is not Edward that meets her; it is Carlisle- again I'll explain later

Point 7: when Bella is attacking pretty much the entire Cullen family, Edward is searching for Bella, Carlisle is hiding in his

office and Rosalie and Esme are getting beaten to death. It says that Bella crushes Esme's windpipe, which happens, but

what with speedy vampire healing and all that, it fixed itself. Rosalie is alive- a piece of wood through her chest wont hurt

her. Emmett is stuck out the back with a chainsaw hovering over him, so he is ok. At this present point in time, everyone

except Jacob is alive.

Point 8: I nearly killed myself when I made this happen, but it was Jasper that Bella kissed. Passionately. And Edward kissed

Alice… passionately. And possibly lost his virtue- I'll let you guys be the judge of that one

All whilst this is happening, Carlisle is in his office, concocting a way to murder the family- minus Rosalie and Esme.

Point 9: I now get to the most confusing part of the story- the fight between Bella and Carlisle. I know that it was a little

gruesome to hear that Carlisle killed Jacob in this chapter, and that Bella had been writing names in blood, but just go along

with it.

My writing gets a little muddled when I'm explaining the reason that Bella black out- remember that she is a vampire now so

it doesn't happen often.

Carlisle's power is to control souls. What happens is that when Carlisle decides he wants to take control of a soul, he can

extract the soul from the person's body. When he does this, he also extracts an essence of the person's features. So this

explains the reason that Edward wasn't Edward the night of the proposal. Carlisle left Bella that night because the effect of

the person's features and looks does not last for the entire time Carlisle has control over the soul. Depending on the

willpower of the stolen soul, (the willpower to get back to it's 'owner') that is the length that Carlisle has the features. For

example, if the soul he steals really wants to get back to it's original body, the effect of the features wont last very long.

In chapter 14, Bella's soul was so willing and wanting to get back to it's original body that it pulled the (we'll call it an item,

for want of a better word) 'item' that was holding Bella's soul in Carlisle's body, back with it into Bella's body. The 'item' that

was holding onto Bella's soul was Carlisle's power. So therefore, Bella took Carlisle's ability to control souls back into her

own body. Carlisle also has now been left powerless.

Point 10: now Jasper and Bella are keeping an eye on the new powerless Carlisle, and have gone to Texas. They are back

to normal now- the usual B/E and A/J. they have contacted the others, and Emmett has escaped alive and he is on his way

too.

Point 11: CARLISLE IS NOT THE FEARED ONE. He is merely a distraction from the real problems. Remember I said that the

feared one could choose any power that they wanted. Of course, like other vampires they could also choose to not show

their powers. Don't we all love esme? Didn't Carlisle change her after feeling a great love for her? Do we ever hear about her

eyes? NO! We think she is innocent. Think again.

Esme is the feared one

Rosalie is in on this as well. I can't tell you why yet though- you'll just have to wait.

So it has been explained. Enjoy and wait for more surprises to come

xox aimee