Chapter 5- Hospital

~Hospital~

Loren could hear the doctors yelling at the nurses to prep for surgery. Loren opens her eyes looking up at the ceiling then her eyes slowly faded away." We're losing her."

The doctors rolled Eddie in after Loren. "It looks like a through and through, he's losing a lot of blood; we need you to donate blood he's going to need it."

Max and Nora donated blood along with Ian, Mel, Jake and Kelly.

~The waiting room~

The doctor came in after an hour. "Duran?" Max walking up to the doctor. The doctor Continue "Mr. Duran is Stable and awake you could see him; but he's weak so don't get him angry." "Are you okay Nora if I leave?" "Max of course...go" Nora was happy for Max but on the other hand there wasn't any news on Loren's condition.

~Eddie's room~

The guys walking in "Eddie, Eduardo, mate" they all said. "Hey...is Loren ok?" "Why don't you worry about getting better." "Pop you didn't answer my question, is Loren ok?"
Eddie looking around the room noticing no one's making eye contact with him, he knew then something was wrong. "Someone answer me!" Eddie yelling. "Eduardo man, relax you just got out of surgery." "Jake don't tell me to relax the women I love is hurt or possibly dead, because none of you will tell me what's going on" just then Nora walked in with a look on her face which made Eddie panic. What was she going to say, Loren can't be dead he can't live without her, she's the reason why he woke up, just to see her smile, to hear her laugh, to feel her warm body next to him. Nora begins to speak "They manage to get the bullet out of her." "That's good news right?" Eddie relieved by what Nora said. But why does she have that look on her face there was something more to this. Nora took a deep breath "when Loren fell she hit her head, there was swelling in her brain. They manage to get the swelling down but the thing is with brain injury's there's no telling what could happen." "What do you mean, no telling what could happen?" "Eddie she's in a coma, they said it could be days or weeks before she could wake up... And in some cases memory lost."

~Loren's room~

Mel was still in shock with her camera in hand still recording. "My best friend is in a coma" Mel trying to wrap her head around the fact that she couldn't call Loren tonight on Skype. Kelly trying to comfort Mel "Loren is strong; she's going to come out on the other side, just think positive." Both of them look at Loren's fragile body.

~Eddie's room~

Eddie couldn't believe the words coming out of Nora's mouth, if she didn't wake up he didn't know what to do with himself Loren is the love of his life. But if she does wake up there's a possible chance that she wouldn't remember him. "Chloe's dead!" "Mate you don't mean that, I know your hurting but Chloe doesn't deserve the time or the effort and besides if you do that you wouldn't be able to see Loren; unless you want to see her in orange jumpers" Nora walking up to Eddie holding his hand "Loren wouldn't want that, so please take care of yourself so that when she wakes up you're the first face she sees." With that Nora left, and what she said to Eddie worked.

~Loren's room~

"Nora I' m sorry I have to go, Lisa wants me home." "Mel it's okay go home and get some rest." Mel gets a ride from Ian. "Nora I could go to your house and get you some clothes when I come back tomorrow." "That would be great Kelly."
~Eddie's room~
"I'm going to handle the press, and I'll bring you some clothes tomorrow." "Sounds great Jake thanks." "Bye Eduardo." "Bye Jake." "Pop I need to see her." "Eddie you're in a hospital bed what do you want me to do." "Wheel me into her room, pop I have to see her." "I'll see what I can do."

~Loren's room~

"Hey honey I know you would want to know that Eddie is fine and he's waiting on you to wake up, Mel is still in shock and I'm-" tears started to fall "Loren your my best-friend and the best daughter I could possibly dream for your smart, beautiful, independent ,talented...I could sit here and go on and on because your special and it's not your time...honey please come back to me, I can't lose you too." Nurse walking in "Mr. Duran insisted upon that Loren be move to a bigger room so that she and Eddie could share a room." "Okay" Nora simply replied.
~Eddie's & Loren's room~
Max and Nora were sitting on the couch in the room, max resting Nora's head on his shoulder and she begins to cry.

The nurse wheeling in Eddie pushing their bed close to one another. Eddie leaning over brushing the hair away from Loren's face, whispering "Hey there beautiful I know I told you a million times, you look cute when you're sleeping but I need you to wake up." Loren not moving. "you know tonight I was going to ask you something, I was going to ask you to move in with me; I had this big speech ready and I was going to give you a promise ring to show how much I love you." Tears falling from his face "I was going to tell you the moment I laid eyes on you I knew that I was in trouble, your big brown eyes is my weakness, your natural beauty and how down to earth you are, your it for me Loren." Eddie leaning over giving Loren the most passionate kiss hoping that maybe she'll open her eyes. Eddie feeling Loren lips move was he dreaming or was his mind playing tricks on him. Pulling back looking at Loren "Loren?"

So I read some of the reviews from this "guest" reader. "SHE CANT SPELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL" " DID SHE SPILL THE MIRROR SONG FROM JT" "LOREN WOULD NEVER SAY LITTLE D WHO WROTE THIS OH AND THIS IS A LITTLE INOPROPRIATE DONT YA THINK" I find it funny how you say I can't spell but yet you misspelled the words spell and inappropriate. And for the lyrics, no I didn't "spill" them you Asshole. And for the "inoppropriate" you could have stop reading if you didn't like it, but instead you kept reading. If you didn't have anything nice to say or don't like it, stop reading and move on to the next one. NO ONE'S PERFECT INCLUDING YOURSELF "GUEST" GET A LIFE OH AND FOR THE LITTLE D. COMMENT Loren didn't say that Eddie did.