Hey guys! I'm going try writing a whole chapter in third person instead of Ageha's point of view. Tell me how you like it.
Chapter 10- Second try
The two boys lay in their bed just about to wake up. The boy on the left nudged the one on the left, "Hikaru…" he mumbled. Hikaru yawned and pulled himself up using Kaoru's back.
"Ugh… what Kaoru?" he moaned. Kaoru didn't want to joke around. He remained serious. His mind was thinking about the seven year old girl Ageha. The girl that could possibly be the Hitachiin twins little sister. The afternoon before they both visited the girl's orphanage. And both of them could not forget the image of that place, though they didn't want to admit it was real.
"What are we going to do?" Kaoru asked staring out the window.
"About what?" Hikaru asked in response but he knew exactly what his twin brother was talking about.
"You know…" Kaoru said sadly, Hikaru nodded and the two sighed together.
"I feel like it is our fault…"
"…But we didn't know any better…"
"…does it matter?" Hikaru asked and the boys stared at each other. Thinking about the events of yesterday both twins reached for their phones.
"Boss?" They asked each other and then nodded. While calling Tamaki Suoh the boys attempted to get changed. "Come on boss…" They moaned to the speaker. Tamaki still had not answered the phone.
"Yes?" Tamaki answered the phone with great enthusiasm.
"Boss...?" The twins moaned as they implied the meaning of their call.
"I see..." Tamaki said sadly, but he quickly got over it. "We must go back to that horrible place," the boys gasped in shock because Tamaki actually got a hint. "And we will go INSIDE!" Tamaki announced and the boys clapped while putting their shirts on. Tamaki hung up the phone and rushed to call Kyoya.
The dark haired Kyoya Ootori was still sleeping at this time in the morning. When he heard his phone ring he growled and ignored it. This only caused Tamaki to call again. When Kyoya still didn't answer Tamaki became worried. He called and called and called until finally Kyoya sucked up his pride and answered this phone. "WHAT?!" Kyoya yelled, he was pissed off.
"Kyoya, Kyoya I was so worried! Why did you not answer me?! I was so scared Kyoya."
"Is that why you called Tamaki?" Kyoya asked gritting his teeth.
"Of course not," Kyoya rolled his eyes and tried not to snap the phone in half. "I called for you to come to Ageha's orphanage again!" Tamaki said proudly ignoring the fact Kyoya was about to kill him through a cell phone. Kyoya hung up the phone. Tamaki tried again.
When Kyoya still didn't answer him Tamaki decided to call Haruhi now that he stole her phone number from the twins. Haruhi, who was already awake, reluctantly answered her phone.
"What senpai?" she asked.
"Hi Haruhi!" He yelled totally forgetting why he called.
"Did you just call only to say hi? Because I have to get ready for school," Tamaki gasped on the other side of the phone.
"School…" he just realized that he had a school to go to. The twins were planning to skip so Tamaki never thought about it. "You have to skip school today Haruhi!"
"Why would I do that…?" She wondered rolling her eyes.
"Because you have to come with your daddy to see Ageha's orphanage!"
"We went there yesterday senpai…" Haruhi moaned.
"I know but the twins want to go see inside and ask about her!"
"And…" Haruhi asked so Tamaki would get to the point of his early morning call.
"And I think they are starting to care more about having a little sister. That would be good for them… to accept someone else inside their world."
"Aw… you care…" Haruhi joked. "I can't go… what about school!"
"Skip it."
"I can't skip school or I'll be kicked out of Ouran. Don't tell me you just thought about that senpai…" Haruhi face-palmed. Her father entered the room she was in.
"Who are you talking to sweetie?" he asked searching for his eye shadow for work. He tried to listen into the conversation. "Is that Suoh?" he grabbed the phone from Haruhi's hand. "Don't talk to my daughter! She doesn't like you!" He yelled at Tamaki through the phone. Haruhi struggled to get the phone back but then gave up. She didn't really want to talk to Tamaki on the phone anyway.
Tamaki gave up on trying to get anyone else to come evem though Honey and Mori would probably go along with it. After about 20 minutes pasted the Hitachiin twins showed up at Tamaki's house. They got out of their limo and rang Tamaki's mansion's doorbell. "Milord!" They yelled at the door.
"Hello!" Tamaki said opening the door sparkling and holding a rose out.
"What…"
"…the heck is this?" Kaoru asked then Hikaru finished. Kaoru grabbed the rose but Tamaki snatched it back.
"It's not for you shady twins!" He yelled at them. "It is for Ageha, because she loves flowers so much." The twins rolled their eyes and walked back towards their limo.
"Whatever…" they moaned. Tamaki ran after them. The twins ordered their driver to drive ahead, so Tamaki would have to chase the limo. Eventually they stopped the limo to let Tamaki get it.
When they arrived at the orphanage inside the kids who didn't go to school looked out the window in awe.
"They must be rich!" One girl would shout. When the twins and Tamaki stepped out an older girl pushed her way to the window.
"Hey they're hot!" she would say. The three boys walked across the dead grass lawn and into the building. The kids ran from the windows to see the boys walk in. The twins got a feeling of nostalgia and tried to lay low.
Tamaki on the other hand started to say hello to the kids watching from behind a wall. The kids looked at Tamaki as if he was a real king.
"Hello…" Hikaru said to the lady in an office to the side of the entrance. He felt as if he had been inside this building before. The memory just made him angry.
"...are you the owner?" asked Kaoru. He remembered the orphanage too, but not in the same way Hikaru was. He tried not to think about it at all. He tried to force the thought out of his head.
"Is this where Ageha Hitachiin lives?" they asked together shocking the lady at the desk.
Author's note: OMG you guys chapter 10! That's so far. I'm so happy that I wrote this much and I am getting a positive feedback. Please don't be afraid to give me so constructive critism (Not that you have to…) I should have the next chapter up in about a week or less.
Ps: I also started roleplaying Ageha on istagram so I am getting better at Ageha's personality and her background.
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