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Pray for the broken hearted
I pray for the lives not starting
I pray for the lungs not breathing
I pray for souls that need a break
can you give them one day...
"Caitlyn, Caitlyn, Caitlyn!" Mitchie ran into Caitlyn's room with a grin.
Caitlyn looked up at Mitchie, with a straight face. "Hm?"
Mitchie's smile fell for a second before coming back. "So I was wondering if you wanted to go out shopping."
"Not up for it." Caitlyn walked into her bathroom.
This time Mitchie's smile completely fell. She now had on a confused expression. "Not up for it? Caitlyn when are you not up for shopping? You LOVE shopping!"
"Yeah well I don't want to go. So can we leave it at that?" She asked as she walked out of her bathroom, her face serious.
"Caitlyn I don't understand-" Mitchie tried to say
"You don't understand WHAT? What don't you understand about me not wanting to go shopping?" Caitlyn blew up. "I. DON'T. WANT. TO. GO!"
"Caitlyn-" Once again Mitchie got cut off
"Get OUT and leave me ALONE!" Caitlyn pointed to the door.
Mitchie groaned and walked out the room. "What the hell?" Mitchie rolled her eyes, deciding not to stress over it. She was done with crying over other people. Walking down to the living room, she plopped down on the couch and turned on the TV.
"Hello Mitchie." Paul greeted as he walked into through the living room with paperwork in his hands.
"Hi Paul" Mitchie smiled.
"Everything okay?" Paul asked
"Yeah everything's fine" Mitchie slightly lied
"Oh alright, was just curious, ya know? Your down here by yourself while everyone is home, I thought you'd be hanging with them, or packing."
"Oh…yeah….nope." Mitchie shrugged with a smile.
Paul smiled in return before going into the kitchen. Mitchie let out a yawn and lay down on the couch, watching TV until she fell asleep.
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Shane was out running errands when his cell phone started to ring. Looking at the screen he saw it was his friend Barron calling.
"Aye!" Shane answered with a chuckle
"What up bra?" Barron chuckled
"Not much, just finishing up some errands. What are you up to?" Shane asked as he looked both ways before making his way across a street.
"What are you doing after them errands?" Barron asked
"Probably nothing, why what's up?" Shane asked as he stopped outside a building even though paparazzi were around taking pictures and videos.
"Want to come chill?" Barron asked
"Yeah man, definitely! I'll let you know when I am done with these errands." Shane said
"alright bra, talk to you later, peace!"
"later" Shane chuckled before hanging up, and giving a slight wave to the paparazzi before going inside the building.
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"Have you talked to Shane today?" Mitchie asked as her and Nate walked into the dinning room.
"No, not at all" Nate answered as they took their seats.
"What's wrong?" Denise asked as she looked over at Mitchie
"Have you talked to Shane at all today?" Mitchie asked Denise.
"No, you haven't either?" Denise's face was taken over by worry
Mitchie shook her head as she bit her lip. "No."
"Has anyone?" Denise looked around the table.
Everyone's answer was no and so Denise took out her phone and called Shane. Everyone sat in silence as they watched her on the phone.
"Shane, dear, where are you? You should have finished your errands hours ago. None of us have talked to you all day. I am worried sweetie. Call me back. Okay? Love you!" Denise then put her phone down.
"No answer" Denise sighed and ran her hands over her face.
Dinner was silent, and Mitchie ate slowly as she stared down at her plate wondering where Shane was.
….
It was around 3:30 in the morning when everyone was scared awake by a startling crash. Mitchie rushed out her room and saw Jason walking down the stairs with a bat with Paul, and Denise following. Mitchie met up with Nate and Caitlyn and they followed.
"Shane!" Denise yelled
Mitchie stopped half way down the stairs as she looked over at them. Shane was laughing and Denise was cleaning up the shattered glass, as Paul glared at Shane.
"Shane! Are you drunk?" Paul raised his voice.
"Me? No!" Shane laughed as he stumbled a little bit and swayed.
"Oh my god Shane, I can't believe you'd go get drunk!" Denise yelled.
"I didn't! I'm fine! Sober!" Shane laughed and stumbled again. He then looked up and his eyes locked with Mitchie's. "Mitchie!" He said cheerfully
Mitchie rolled her eyes and turned around, walking back up the stairs.
"Mitchie! Wait!" Shane laughed and rushed after Mitchie, stumbling along the way.
"Shane, Leave me alone!" Mitchie said firmly as she walked into her room.
"Mitchie!" Shane sang out as he stumbled into her room.
"Shane, get out!" Mitchie said as she walked up to him and tried pushing him out her room.
Shane only laughed and stumble a bit causing Mitchie to groan. "Stop babe"
"Shane you're drunk, and I don't want to talk to you!" Mitchie said as she crossed her arms.
"But baby I want to talk to you!" Shane chuckled as he put his hands on Mitchie's arms and lightly pulled her to him. But Mitchie wasn't taking it and pushed him away from her.
"Shane stop!" Mitchie yelled
"Ugh! Mitchie come on!" Shane pouted.
"No." Mitchie whispered.
Shane groaned and stumbled a bit. Mitchie shook her head and sighed. She had to help him; she couldn't just let him stumble around.
Walking over to Shane Mitchie took his arm. "You need to sleep Shane." Mitchie said as she led him out her room and to his room.
"I am not tired!" Shane chuckled.
Mitchie laughed humorlessly and made him lay down as she sat down next to him and brought her knees to her chest as she watched Shane. Shane yawned and rolled onto his side facing her and his eyes slowly shut. Mitchie ran her hand through his hair and in minutes he was asleep. Sighing Mitchie laid down next to him, facing him. She touched his cheek lightly as she slowly shook her head.
"why did you get drunk Shane?" She asked more to herself but out loud. Sighing she closed her eyes ready to fall asleep. She knew she couldn't leave Shane alone, for he will wake up to a major hangover.
"Ugh!" Mitchie was awoken when she heard Shane groaning. Rolling over she opened her eyes and saw Shane sitting on the edge of the bed with his head in his hands. Sitting up she rubbed her eyes before getting off the bed and walking in front Shane. "You okay?" She asked as she ran her hand through his hair.
Shane shook his head with another groan and stood up, stumbling from pain. Mitchie put her hands on his elbows and he grabbed onto her forearms to steady himself. "I feel like crap." Shane mumbled.
"Yeah well I am not shocked." Mitchie said quietly.
"I feel like I am going to be sick." Shane said softly.
"Come on" Mitchie led Shane into the bathroom and he sat down next to the toilet putting his head in his hands which he rested on his knees.
Mitchie sat down next to him and rubbed his knee. "You're an idiot" She said softly.
Shane chuckled weakly. "Thanks Mitchie."
Mitchie smiled softly. "Sorry, you just shouldn't have gone out and got drunk…"
"You don't think I know that?" He mumbled
"Well I mean you went and did it anyways…" Mitchie said quietly.
"Yeah and I regret it now, so I do know that Mitchie." Shane said a bit harshly.
"Sorry" Mitchie said with a tiny attitude.
Shane shrugged before suddenly going to his knees and leaning to the toilet, letting out the contents in his stomach.
Mitchie shivered in disgust like anyone else who hates throw up would. She got up and grabbed a face cloth going to the sink, ready to help Shane even if things were a bit rocky with the two.
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"Nate I don't know what to do! Things have been great for the past 3 years, and then Caitlyn suddenly has problems with things that no one has told me about yet. Apparently Shane's over here having them problems too! He's giving me such attitude! Like we haven't talked normally in days! That's not normal! I don't know what to do!" Mitchie said as her and Nate waited for their coffees at Dunkin Donuts.
"I don't know Mitch, I have noticed it too. Caitlyn won't say anything about it." Nate sighed. "Shane he acts normally with me too, but again won't talk about it."
"This is so confusing, I just want to know what's going on, and just all talk about it, and fix this!" Mitchie said as her and Nate moved up in line. "I am tired of letting things be bad and not work out, we need to be mature and talk it through. I don't want to just let things fall apart."
"I completely understand. The four of us need to go out tonight. Let it start out awkward or whatever then we can start talking."
"Alright, what are we going to do?" They asked as they took their coffees and headed to a table.
"We have to go somewhere, where if an argument happens, it wouldn't be public, ya know?" Nate said as he took a seat sipping his coffee.
Mitchie nodded as she moved her straw around before taking a sip. "And where is a place like that?"
Nate shrugged. "I don't know, when we get home I will Google places I guess."
Mitchie nodded "Good idea! Then text me!"
...
I decided to reserve an area in a resturaunt, i really couldn't think of anything else, but no one would be there but us four and the waiters, who will be in and out. -Nate.
Alright that's fine thanks Nate, go ask caitlyn and then ask shane, since they are both mad at me :/ -Mitchie
Okay Mitch, I'll let you know. -Nate
...
Nate walked into Caitlyn's room to see her at her laptop with headphones on, and editing some music. Going up behind her, he leand over and kissed her cheek causing her to jump and him to laugh. She pulled off her headphones and waked Nate in the chest as she faced him and giggled. "Nate!"
"Sorry babe!" Nate laughed
"It's okay" Caitlyn giggled "What's up?" She asked as she wrapped her arms around Nate's waiste
Nate chuckled and rubbed her shoulders. "I was wondering if you'd like to go out to dinner tonight" a grin spread across Caitlyn's face. "But with Shane and Mitchie with us" And so quickly that grin disappeared. "Why Nate? Why invite them? Why does Mitchie have to be involved in everything! Why do you have to invite her everywhere, to everything we do!"
"Caitlyn! This is all to work things out between the four of us! There is obviously problems going on, and we have to talk about them!" Nate said as Caitlyn paced the room.
"But Nate, I don't want to work things out with her!" Caitlyn complained.
"Caitlyn, you're my girlfriend, and she is my best friend, and I want things fixed between the two of you, and between her and my brother! This all is affecting me, don't you see that? My girlfriend and best friend are having problems, my best friend and her boyfriend who is my brother, are having problems! Things are so messed up right now. Please Caitlyn, do this for me!" Nate begged as he put his hands on her shoulders to stop her infront of him.
Caitlyn sighed as sh looked into his eyes and nodded her head, bringing her hand up to his cheek. "I'll do this for you Nate. I'll go."
Nate grinned causing Caitlyn to giggle, before he bent down and kissed her, wrapping his arms around her waiste and lifting her into the air as she laughed and squealed into the kiss.
...
Nate knocked on Shane's door waiting for a response, one Shane said he could enter, he opened the door and walked in. He saw Shane sitting on his couch with his guitar on his lap as he cleaned it.
"What's up bro?" Shane asked as he looked up at Nate.
"Uhm..." He didn't know how to ask his brother to go on this "double date". It's weird! Like usualy a boyfriend will ask their girlfriend, or a girlfriend will ask a boyfriend, usually a brothers not asking a brother. UGH!
"Yes...?" Shane chuckled
"Want to go out tonight...me, Caityn, you and Mitchie?" Nate asked as he scratched his head akwardly.
"Why?" Shane asked with a straight face, and boring tone.
Nate rolled his eyes. "Please bro, Caityn agreed, Mitchie agreed, so just agree!"
"Alright man, whatever! What time?" Shane asked
"Be ready and downstairs by 8pm!" Nate said with a grin as he left the room. That was easy he thought to himself as he pulled out his phone.
Got them both to agree, be ready and downstairs by 8pm. -Nate
Thank you Nate, and I will ! :] -Mitchie
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Putting on a pair of black skinny jeans and a dressy pink shirt, Mitchie curled her hair, before adding jewerly and grabbing all her things and putting on black heeled boots. she made sure her makeup was okay before she looked at the clock.
7:58pm
Walking out her room she shut off her light and went downstairs. She heard Shane and Nate in the kitchen, and walked in, they both had on a dressy shirt, and some jeans. Good, she dressed right. She walked over to the island they were sitting at and put her purse down.
"Once Caitlyn comes back in here, we can leave" Nate said as he looked over at Mitchie and Shane who weren't talking or even looking at each other. Nate sighed and hoped Caitlyn would hurry up.
A few minutes later, Caitlyn came rushing in the kitchen. "Sorry! I am now ready to go." She said as she looked over at Nate.
Mitchie grabbed her purse and followed the other three out. They stopped outside and Nate faced them all. "How we getting there?"
"I'll drive my car, with Mitchie." Shane said as Nate nodded and took Caitlyn'ss hand.
"Follow my car." Nate told Shane who nodded and everyone headed to the cars they were going in.
Mitchie POV
I awkwardly walk behind Shane to his car, he reaches the passengers door and opens it for me. I smiled small and get in.
"Thank you" I say quietly and he nodded with a small smile, before shutting the door and getting into the car. The ride there was quiet and awkward, but we made it there in about a half hour, before following Nate and Caitlyn into the resturaunt and escorted to the back to the room we reserved. We all took a seat. I sat next to Shane, and Nate sat next to Caitlyn.
We all ordered, before anyone decided to say anything. We all had our food when Nate spoke up.
"Why are the two of you both not talking to Mitchie? Why does it have to be so silent right now?" Nate asked as he looked back and forth between Shane and Caitlyn, as I looked down at my food, waiting for an answer.
Caitlyn shrugged "There's reasons, there's things going on right now, that I have to make decisions, and I...this is how I am handling things..."
"What reasons Caitlyn?" Nate asked and I looked up at Caitlyn.
"I'll be honest alright? I just...I know it's been three years, I know things have been going great with all of us, but..." She stopped, it was obvious she didn't want to share the big reason. "It all leads me to not liking how close you and Mitchie are." My right eyebrow rose in confusion as me and Nate shared confused looks before looking back at her. "I don't like how you two spend so much time together, like you're hanging out with her rather than me. I go to look for you and I always find you with her. You two are so close, and I understand that you two are best friends, I understand that best friends are really close, and spend time together and do things together...but some things that the two of you do...I find to be too close. I don't want to get into detail right now, because...I just...I can't okay. I just I want you to know Mitchie" She looked at me "that I've been ignoring you for reasons that I am dealing with personally, and for the reason that I find you two to be to close. That's why. Okay? I know that you might not understand that I think you are too close, and I understand that you two probably think it's stupid...but my personal reasons...make more sense and I will explain it to yo two...just not now, not today. But I think things can get better...if you two didn't do such close things, but I can't ask you to do that...it's not right." She had tears in her eyes. You could see that she was deep in thought as she explained this to us. Her personal problem was really hitting her hard...but we weren't gonna push her to it. She said she'd tell us when she was ready. "I can try to look past it...but it's hard...I want things to be going back to normal..." She cried. "But this hurts." Nate wrapped his arms around her and she cried. She cried into his chest, as I watched her, feeling bad for her, feeling bad that I was making one of my best friends upset because of how I act with her boyfriend. I felt disrespectful. I felt guilty for it. I had a boyfriend, and I was close with one of my best friends boyfriends making her upset. I looked over at Shane and saw him looking down at his plate as he moved his fork around his plate.
"I uh...I told Shane how I felt about it..." Caitlyn said as she looked over at me. "He thought about it, he tried to convince me otherwise, but I refused to listen. I got him upset by it. Then things went downhill with you two and I am so sorry Mitchie. I am so sorry Shane. I am so sorry" Caitlyn cried.
I looked at her with teary eyes and nodded as she turned her head back into Nate's chest. "It's okay..." I whispered
18 reviews on chapter one! AHHHH! Can we get that or more on this one? So much goes on and don't worry things will be more explained as the story goes on. I got mixed reviews on the first chapter. Some didn't like how Mitchi cried and said she was stronger than that. some didnt. etc etc. But everyone was nice. I love every review I got. Thank YOU!
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