Everyone here is the rewritten chapter three. Hope you guys like the changes I'm still debating on wether or not I will rewrite chapter four what do you think? Please remember to review :)
Jacinda's Pov
We had arrived in viridian city around 1:30 in the afternoon. "We made it here in good time" I say to arcanine. I reached for charmanders poke ball and released her. "Come on out charmander" I yelled.
"Char Char" she said with at smile on her face. I smiled down at her, and we continued to walk towards home. We were halfway to the house when charmander stopped.
"What wrong" I asked turning to her? She turned to the side street and ran down. "Arcanine will meet you at the house I am going to go get charmander."
"Ark" he barked and ran the other direction. I ran down the path charmander went. 'Were is she' I thought looking around.
"Char Char" she called. I followed it which lead me to the park.
"There you are " I spoke as I spotted her. As I got to her side I see a girl kicking a psyduck. "Hey stop it charmander stop her." Charmander pushed psyduck out of the way before she could deliver another kick.
"Hey what do you think your doing" She yelled.
"Me your the one who's kicking that poor psyduck" I accused.
"Look this is my pokemon and I will do what I want with it" She explained. I was about to say something when officer Jenny pulled up.
"What seems to be the problem here" She asked looking among up.
"This girl was beating on her psyduck" I informed her.
"How dare you treat a pokemon that way you under arrest" Spoke Jenny as she grabbed her from behind putting her in handcuffs.
"hey let me go" She yelled. But Jenny just pushed her to her partner informing him to take her to the station.
"What going to happen to the psyduck" I asked looking in its direction see it having a conversation with charmander.
"He is free to do what he want," She says "You have a nice day." I gave her a nod and walked over to them. I could see the bruises on it body from the impact of the kicks. I reached into my bag and pulled out some ointment as I walked to them. When psyduck spotted me we hid behind charmander.
"It okey psyduck I am not going to hurt you" I speaking to him in a soft tone.
"Char Charmander" spoke Charmander patting his back. With that spyduck came over to me and open the tube of ointment at began to rub the cream on his bruises. When I was done I could already see them beginning to disappear.
"Does that feel better" I asked him?
"Psyduck" He nodded with a smile.
"Psyduck I want to take you to the pokemon center to see if you have any internal injuries" I tell him. He agrees and we began to walk to the pokemon center.
"Nurse Joy" I called walking up to the front desk of the pokemon center.
"I'll be right with you" I hear her say from the back. After two minutes she walk out "Hi oh Jacinda is that you."
"Hi nurse Joy how have you been" I smiled.
"I've been well dear thank for asking now whats the problem?" She asked.
"This psyduck was being beaten by his owner," I tell her, "I put ointment on his bruises but I did not know if it has any internal injuries so I brought it here."
"Oh that is terrible here let me take him to the back and have a look" She tells me while picking him up and taking him to the back. Charmander and I sat in the waiting room. I here a growling noise come from charmander to see her holding stomach.
"Don't worry charmander after this will head straight home" I tell her. After ten minutes of waiting nurse Joy come out "how is he?"
"He in perfect health" she tells me.
"That's good" I said in relief.
"So Jacinda how have you been?" she asked.
"I've been well nurse Joy I received my first pokemon today" I tell her pointing to Charmander.
"That's wonderful I don't know if you know this but before I went to nursing school I traveled with your mother" she informed me.
"Really?" I asked.
"Yep we didn't do gym battles but we love to travel" she told me.
"Wow I didn't know that" I said.
"Oh before you go I would like you to have this" she reached into her bag and pulled out a large note book. "This book belonged to you mother it has a list of natural remedies she use from plants found around the kanto region."
"Oh thank you nurse Joy," I say tearing up, "well I better go please take care is spyduck." I turned but spyduck then jumped in my arms.
"It looks like spyduck wants you to take care of him" spoke Nurse Joy with a smile.
"Is that true spyduck" I asked him?
"Psyduck" he said with a nod. I toke out a poke ball and taped it on his nose he disappear inside.
"We have a new friend charmander" I tell her as I released spyduck. Him and charmander held hand and began to dance around. "Thank you nurse Joy I better be getting home."
"Your welcome and If you ever need to come back please do not hesitate" She tells me.
"I'll remember that" I tell her as I walked out of the building. "Okay everyone lets get home" I say to charmander and spyduck and began to walk home.
"Here goes nothing" I say to myself and I walked up to the house. As we got to the door I stoped to take a deep breath than put my key in the lock and turned the door knob. I open the door and walked in to see no one in the living room "um hello" I called looking around.
"Jacinda" Yelled May running out of the dinning room. She ran over and gave me a hug, "we were wondering where you went off to."
"I took your advice" I say stepping to the side revealing charmander and psyduck.
"Oh they are so cute," she said petting each of them, "were did you get the psyduck?"
"It's a long story but were is everyone" I asked?
"Oh there in the backyard your dad barbecued come on" she said heading to the door.
"Come on you guyI said looking back at charmander and spyduck and follow May to the backyard.
"Hey everyone Jacinda's back" yelled May as we walked outside.
"Jacinda were have you been." demanded Madison.
"Are you hungry" asked my father?
"Yes actually" I said completely ignoring Madison's question. i didn't notice the slight growl and glare she sent my way but father did.
"Jacinda left to get her first pokemon" May answered for me to my mother. With that being said charmander and spyduck poked there heads out from behind me.
"And I see you picked up a spyduck along the way" said Justin walking up to me.
"He actually tagged along with me" I told he with a smile.
"Alright everyone sit down so we can eat dinner said my father putting a plate of food on the table. I put two plates of pokemon food that my brother gave me on the ground for charmander and spyduck. I sat down grabbed a hamburger from the plate.
"So Jacinda how did you come across that spyduck" asked Arthur?
"He came from an abusive owner" I simply tell him.
"Oh that is sad I hate owners like that" May said with a frown.
"So have eather one of them battled anyone yet" asked Arthur?
"Charmander yes but spyduck no" I answered him.
"Would you like to battle me Jacinda" asked May.
"I would but your pokemon are more experience then mine" I tell her.
"Poliwag and Eevee are still new you can battle then" She said.
"Okay," I said as I got up from my chair, "you guys want to battle" I asked them?
"Char, Duck" The both replied.
"Alright I will be the judge," said Arthur, "In this corner we have Jacinda and in this corner we have May."
"let go Poliwag" she yelled releasing him from its poke ball.
"Go Psyduck" I say to him.
"Psyduck" He was facing the Poliwag.
"let the battle began" yelled Arthur.
" Poliwag use double slap" yelled May. Poliwag charged towards psyduck ready to attack. Using the same tactics I did with Charmander I yell "Psyduck dodge and use scratch" But Psyduck was too slow and got hit. While getting hit with double slap he was still able to use scatch attack sending Poliwag flying.
"Poliwag use water gun" May said as he landed on the ground. Poliwag then turned and used water gun in turn Psyduck hid behind a large rock.
"Psyduck have you learned water gun," I whispered Psyduck nods, "Okay wait on my signal."
"Poliwag use iron tail to break the rock" yell May. Poliwag's tail began to glow, and him charge towards the rock. He then leaped into the air, just when he was about to make contact I yell "Now Psyduck" he jumped on the rock and used water gun causing poliwag to hit the trees trunk, Pliwag fell back to the ground unconscious.
"Poliwag is unable to battle Jacinda is the winner" yell Arthur pointing at me.
"Great Battle Jacinda but you not going to win this one" spoke May sending Eevee outside it's poke ball.
"Well see" I tell her signaling charmander to step foreword.
"Let the battle began" yelled Arthur.
"Alright charnamder use scratch" I demanded. She charged towards Eevee at top speed.
"Use quick attack to dodge than tackle," yelled may. Using quick attack Eevee appeared behind charmander and tackled her to the ground, "keep it use Eevee." Using the same tactics Eevee circled charmander hitting her from all sides. 'I need to get charmander out of this but how' I thought.
"Char" screamed Charmander sending out flamethrower in an attempt to stop Eevee 'charmander learned flamethrower I have a plan' I thought excitedly.
"Charmander jump into the air using your tail" I yell.( I got the from ash when he told bayleaf to do this). Following my command jump high in the air.
"Eevee follow it" grinned May thinking it was an easy win. Eevee jumped strait at her and when she was in the right spot I yell "Flamethrower." A powerful flamethrower shot from her mouth sending Eevee crashing towards the ground.
"Eevee is unable to battle," Spoke Arthur seeing Eevee unconscious, "The winner is Jacinda."
"Char" Charmander cried with joy jumoing into my armes.
"Good job both of you" I said to charmander and psyduck.
"That was an awesome battle" May said walking up to.
"Yes your a natural" replied Arthur.
"Thank you" I tell them.
"Well she has learned from the best" Justin said snicking up behind me.
"Your cockiness is going to get you in trouble some day dear brother" I tell him with a smile.
"Oh my I did not know it had gotten this late" cried Madison. I look at my watch to see that it was ten a clock. We picked up everything outside taking in the house.
"I'll be up in a minute" I told my back outside. "you guys were awesome" I praise my pokemon. I couldn't hold in my excitement and I pulled them in a hug.
"How dare you leave this house" said a voice behind me. I turned to see Maddison glaring at me.
"What do you want" I glared back. Maddison looked shock and was caught of guard with my tone.
"You will not speak to me that way" she hissed.
"I will speak to you in any way I want" I growled I would not let her intimidate me anymore. I turned and put my Pokemon in their balls. At that moment she ran up to me push me hard into the ground. She pit her hand against my mouth to silence my scream as she repeatedly slammed my head into the ground. I heard a roar and Madison being pulled off of me. I looked up to see Madison on the ground my dads black charizard standing over me.
"How dare you put your hands on my daughter" said my father walking up from behind me.
"Adam" she started but my father raised his hand to stop her.
"How long has this been going on" he turned to me.
"Five years" I told him with my head down. Hearing that only made my dad angrier.
"Dear it's not what you think" she started.
"Shut up," he yelled. I have never seen my dad this angry I was almost scared for Madison.
"Jacinda" I turned my head to see Miss Jones, my brother and his friends running towards me. "Oh Jacinda are you alright" she helped me up.
"Yeah I'm fine" I answered feeling dizzy.
"The police are on their way dad" Justin said glaring a Madison.
"What," she shrieked.
"Did you think you could get away with this Madison" my dad growled. Madison glared hard at me and sent a slight shiver down my spin.
"This won't be the last you see of me" she promised before pulling out a poke ball and out came a dragonite. She hoped on its back and took off in the air.
"Charizard stop her" commanded my dad. He roared and took of after them. Dragonitemturn and released a powerful Hyper Beam sending him back into the ground And they left in the distance.
"Oh sweet heart" Miss Jones began to examine my head. "I was coming over to congratulate you when I heard the commotion."
"That evil women" hissed May with Arthur agreeing with her.
"Jacinda" my dad started then he looked at Miss Jones.
"Okey lets get back inside I'll make tea to calm our nerves" she wrangled my brother and his friends into the house. When they stepped in my dad pulled me into a hug.
"I'm sorry" he chanted kissing the top of my head.
"Daddy stop it's not your fault" I told him.
"Yes it is I wasn't here when you needed me the most" he said.
"But your here now dad and that's all that matters to me" I smiled up at him then I felt Charizard mugging against me. "Thank you charizard" I said giving hi a hug.
" you know I was happy to see that you chose a Charmander" he tells me.
"Really" I said.
"Yes I always thought you would take after you mother and chose a bulbasaur," he said then he look at me, "You really are going to make a great pokemon trainer."
"Thank you" I said giving him a hug. He hugged me back and kissed me on the forehead.
"Come on let's get some sleep you have a big day tomorrow" he said. We walked back in the house and headed to our rooms. I jumped in bed excited wanting morning to hurry up and come.
Alright everyone tell me what you think. I'm thinking about revising the fourth chapter too but I'm not sure. please review or pm me nap out comment, questions or advise.