Okey here is the next chapter hope you enjoy. The first three chapters have be rewritten plus chapter five the parts were it reveals Dons family life. please review and tell me what you think :)
Jacinda P.O.V
"What are you doing here Maddison" glared hatefully at her.
"Why I came to see my lovely child of course" She informed. I looked confused before out of the corner of my eye Don moved towards her.
"Don" I looked on in shock as he stood by her.
"So you've meet my son Jacinda" she wrapped her hand around his shoulder. Don wouldn't look up but I could see he was slightly shaking. I was about to speak what her dragonite came out from behind the trees. "I told you you'll be seeing me again."
"August get out of here" I whisper to her knowing this would end badly
"Oh no nether of you are going anywhere" dragontie then releases a power gust send use crashing into the ground. He then let out flamethrower I quickly raced to August pushing her out of the way.
"Leave August out of this" I growled holding my shoulder where the fire made contact.
"Oh no I can't do that shes a witness" she smirked evilly.
"Mother stop why are you doing this" questioned Don looking shocked I new then that he had nothing to do with this. She turned to him and backed hand him in the face. Eevee growled and Tackle her but it didn't do much damage. Madison then kicked it it in the face. Don ran to him and cradled him in his arms with tears running down his face.
"Dragonite Hyper Beam" she commanded the attack made context with the ground. The impact sent us flying backwards. I hissed in pain as I landed on my burnt shoulder. "Again" the attack sent August into a tree reducing her unconscious.
"August" both Don and I cried out. I ran to her but Dragonite flew in front me and hit me in the chest with its tail. I fell to the ground coughing up blood.
"If I had known you would be such a pain I would have killed you six years ago along with you mother" she confessed. I ran to August again this time I reached her. I grabbed her and ran.
"Pidgey" I called reaching for my pokeball but it was empty. 'That right I never put her back in her poke ball' I looked around but didn't see her hoping she went off to find help. I stopped as I saw Dragonite fly in front off use letting out a Hyper Beam I didn't really have time to get out of the way.
[Pokemon center]
"Hey they've bee gone for a long time you think their okey" asked May looking worried.
"Piga Pigaaa"
"Hey look" said Arthur pointing to the sky. They looked to see a Pidgey flying toward them. It began flying around their head and pulling their clothes franticly.
"Hey little guy what's wrong" asked May reaching out to it.
"Wait isn't this Jacinda Pidgey" asked Justin looking at it closely.
"It wants us to follow it something wrong" spoke Adam. They took off following Pidgey to its destination.
I slowly open my eyes groaning in pain. I looked next to me to see August next to me still unconscious. I looked around but didn't see anyone. I crawled over to August struggling to pick her up.
"Their you are" said Madison coming out of the trees. Dragonite followed her dragging Don and Eevee. "I wouldn't want to miss the finally." I couldn't help but laugh at the situation. "What's so funny" she asked being taking off guard.
"What would you gain from all of this?" I question.
"What do you mean?" She asked glaring.
"You loved my father corrected but he loved my mother so you killed her" I hissed and I began to stand up. "You killed her to be with my father but now I'm starting to wonder what would you gain by killing me?" She glared angrily at me and I looked to Don to see him being held to the ground by Dragonite.
"Jacinda stop" begged Don.
"You would always call me pathetic but in reality it you," I smirked, "you, wanting a man who doesn't give a rats ass about you if that's not pathetic then I don't know what is." The look in her eyes told me I went to far but I didn't care. I was showing her that no matter what she did to me I would not break.
"Dragonite" she hissed shaking in rage. I stepped in front of August body wanting to protect her. I closed my eyes when I saw the powerful hyper beam coming towards me. Though I was sad I would be leaving my dad and brother at least I would see my mom again.
"Flamethrower" at that word I opened my eyes and saw the two attacks collide. The blast of the explosion knocked me on my back over August. I could hear screaming and yelling all around be. I saw Madison on her Dragonite carrying Don away and could hear someone saying my name but everything went black.
I began to wake up. I felt around to feel that I was laying in something soft most likely a bed and toke that as a meaning that I wasn't dead. I slowly open my eyes only to be blinded by sunlight. When I was able to see I looked around to see I was in the hospital. my brother was sleeping on a couch and dad was sleeping in a chair. I looked to the floor to see my pokemon all asleep on a large blanket. I looked to the clock on the wall to see it was seven in the morning. I sat up noticing my arm was in a braise and a bandage around my head. I reached for the notebook on the table and tore out pieces of paper. I then balled them up and threw them at my dad and Justin.
"Oow what the" said Justin sitting up from the couch. "Oh my god Jasinda" he shot up from the couch and ran over to me. His yell woke both my father and pokemon.
"Oh sweet heart how are you feeling?" my dad asked.
"Hungry" I replied my pokemon all jumped in the bed surrounding me.
"Are you in any pain" he asked shook my head. "Justin go get the doctor."
"Is August okey?" I asked worried.
"Yes she woke up a day before you minor head injuries but nothing to worry about" he informed me.
"How long was I out?" I asked.
"Three days" I turned to see the doctor walk in. "How are you feeling Jacinda any pain?"
"No I'm good" I told him.
"Like August you also suffered from head injuries with a dislocated shoulder and cracked ribs. He informed me taking the bandaged and braise off. He them instructed me to move my arm around there was a slight pain but nothing serious. "I'll have the nurse give you a heat pack for it but otherwise your fine." He said with a smile.
"Thank you doctor" said my dad shaking his hand Before he left. He then pulled me in a hug. "I thought I lost you."
"We both did" said Justing hugging me on my other side." I reach out and pulled all of my pokemon in a hug.
"It was your Pidgey that lead us to you" informed my dad.
"Good girl fei" I smiled she then began to glow in a white light. my arm sunk down slightly as she got bigger. The glowing stopped to reveal a pidgeotto.
"Wow she evolved" smiled Justin.
"Jasinda" cried a voice. I looked to see August running towards me. "Are you okey?"
"Yeah you" I asked pulling her into a hug.
"Miss Jacinda" I looked up to see Officer Jenny. "I would like to ask you some question about the event I already got August statement."
"Yeahs sure" I say and began to tell her everything that happens the I could remember.
"I know this May be hard bit thank you is there anything else?" She asked.
"Yes um, she admitted to being responsible to my mothers death" I remembered.
"What" my father said shocked.
"Are you sure" she questioned.
"Yes she said she should have killed me along with her" I spoke She nodded writhing everything I said down.
"Now why did she take Don?" asked Jenny.
"He's her son but he didn't know this would happen" I quickly added.
"Yeah he was as shocked as we were" replied August.
"That's impossible" my dad said lifting his head up.
"What do you mean Mr. Smith" asked Jenny.
"Madison can't have kids" he revealed.
"How old is is" asked officer Jenny.
"Were all the same ages except he is a month older then me he had a younger sister too" I informed her.
"Is it possible she adopted dad?" asked Justin.
"Maybe but why didn't she bring him when she lived with use?" Dad questioned. We began talking about the possibility when dad notice officer Jenny was silent. "Is everything okey?"
"I remember seven years ago a report was made on a missing child" she revealed.
"Yes that was Miss Jones" remembered dad.
"She had a child" I said never knowing this.
"Yes, a son he disappeared while they were in the park she blamed herself and still looks for him to this day" he informed us.
"Two years after that a baby girl went missing" said Officer Jenny.
"You don't think" stared my dad.
"I don't know but I will put it in the report. Where does he live," I told her he lived in Saffron Citywith his grandfather she finished up writing, "Thank you for your time."
"When can I get out of here" I asked my dad.
"Today if you want I get your things and well head home" he said.
"What no" I looked shocked.
"What do you mean no I want you home so you can be safe" he said as if it was the end of the discussion.
"If I leave now shes going to think she's scared me away and won," I said getting out of bed, "I'm not going anywhere."
"I told him you wouldn't go" replied Justin with a smile causing dad to smack him in the back of the head.
"I know you just want to protect me but I'm not walking away not after everything that's happened" I told him.
"Your so stubborn just like your mother," he said pulling me in a hug, "alright fine you can stay."
"Thanks dad" I smiled.
"I'm staying too"announced August.
"So what now?" asked Justin.
"Well we have a gym battle to prepare for right guys" I say to my pokemon I smiled when they cheered.
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