I'm going to be honest; this is becoming a bit fun to write because of how quick it is to make these chapters.

...I feel like I just betrayed the Midnight Crew account by finding I enjoy writing Trollfics when my first love is to burn them...


Lunarpaw stared in shock as she saw her brother curled up next to his mentor Blueflame, their tails twined together and both purring loudly in enjoyment as they just laid on the ground cuddling. The protagonist felt a sting of betrayal at seeing her brother...with Blueflame as his mate!

She quickly turned around and ran back to camp, not able to face the two at that moment.

"Lunarpaw!" Graniteheart said as he approached her when she entered the camp, "Where's the prey? Didn't you catch anything?" he asked in confusion.

That's right! Lunarpaw forgot to bring her prey back to camp! But she couldn't tell her mentor that forgot it because he would ask why and she would have to tell him that she saw Blueflame and Cometpaw together! She couldn't tell him just yet at least!

"I couldn't catch anything today," Lunarpaw lied, she felt bad about lying because she did catch it and now he would probably think she wasn't as perfect as she was.

Graniteheart frowned at this, "All right," he finally said, "We all have a bad day I guess," he said before walking away.

she felt bad now, she had caught all that prey but she couldn't bring it back and now Graniteheart probably thought bad of her. this was all Cometpaws fault! she was going to confront him when he came back to the camp!

So Lunarpaw waited by the entrance for her brother. An hour or so later, he and Blueflame came into the camp carrying a couple of rabbits. After Cometpaw disposed of his prey at the Fresh Kill pile, Lunarpaw approached him.

"Cometpaw!" she hissed softly glaring at him, "I need to talk to you," she ordered.

Her brother looked annoyed but nodded and sat down, "What now?" he asked but she just glared even more.

"We need to talk in private!"

That seemed to annoy him even more but he followed his sister out of the camp. They continued walking until they were in the clearing, this was as good a spot as any Lunarpaw supposed. So she turned on him, reading to chew him out.

Standing tall, she glared at Cometpaw, "I know about you and Blueflame!" she yowled.

He looked surprised and stepped back, "What?" he asked confused, "How do you...what?" he was at a loss of words.

But Lunarpaw didn't hold back, "I saw the two of you alone together!"

"So?!"

"Cometpaw! She's a warrior, you're an apprentice!" Lunarpaw yelled, "You can't be with a warrior! You're too young!"

Cometpaw glared at her, "So what if she's a warrior? I'll be a warrior one day!" he yowled, "What's the big deal about being with her?"

"The age gap, Cometpaw!"

Her brother hissed, his claws unsheathed, "This is why I don't like you, Lunarpaw!" he growled and Lunarpaw let out a gasp, how could he not like her? she was perfect and she was his sister!

"You're so bossy, always taking lead whether they like it or not!" he yelled, "Who died and made you leader?"

Lunarpaw frowned at that, "But Fallingstar already said I was going to be clan leader, he already decided that I was going to become one," she reminded.

He let out a howl before tackling her, about to slash her but stopped, growling and getting off of her, "Just leave me alone, Lunarpaw!" he snapped before running back to camp.

Lunarpaw waited before chasing after him, her brother was so mean! Why couldn't he just accept that apprentices shouldn't take a warrior as a mate? It's not right! She had to go and tell Fallingstar, he would then have to order the two to stop being mates!

she loved her brother and she didn't want him to do something wrong, that's why she was doing this. She was just looking out for her brother.

"Maybe I should go and see Phoenixblaze after this...he might be able to tell me if what I did is right," she mumbled. So instead of going back to camp she went to the Moonclan boarder, and waited for her mate to show up.

After a little bit, the Moonclan deputy appeared, he purred loudly when he approached her.

"Lunarpaw!" He said happily but saw the look on her face, "What's wrong?"

so Lunarpaw told him what had happened and what she learned of her brother and his romance with his mentor Blueflame. When she had finished, Phoenixblaze shook his head in disappointment frowning but gave her a reassuring sad look.

"It's not your fault, Lunarpaw," he comforted her, "Its a pity your brother couldn't be as amazingly perfect as you are though."

Lunarpaw hugged him, "Phoenixblaze, why can't Cometpaw just see that taking a warrior on as your mate is wrong?" she asked.

"I don't know," Phoenixblaze murmured, "I don't know...but he'll see the light eventually, just try to guide him as he's lost his path."

She nodded and let go, "I will," she said and looked at the sky, the sun was beginning to set, "I have to go back to my clan, goodbye Phoenixblaze, I love you."

"and I love you, Lunarpaw. Good luck making him see that he needs to stop being mates with his mentor!" the deputy said.


Wow, Lunarpaw is one hell of a hypocrite aint she?