This when Edward found Bella in the parking lot in my version of the story.

Italics are Edward hearing someone's thoughts.

Edwards's point of view

I had been following Bella around lately, mostly because the accident with Tyler would have turned deadly. Damn I never should have saved her, and then it would have been easier to avoid her. No, I love her and her blood. I need to find h- no!

Yeah, yeah I don't know whose better my wife or- holy shit a car. ""Hey guys car! Run!"

Where are you going to run to? I saw them run as poor Bella laid on a cement with nothing on. It was so cold out. The only reason I knew this was because I has a thermostat in my car. I got out as the four of them ran. I laughed at them.

In an instant I was in front of them, laughing at their horror struck faces. Then anger filled me. I knew what they were doing to her and I wasn't going to let them get away.

I held them up in my hands, they smelled of alcohol.

Shit we shoulda stayed home

Damn it don't kill me I gotta wife and four kids

I don't want to die I'm only 23

Please don't kill me

I looked at the man with four kids.

"Four kids have you? And you have to rape women? Huh? What else do you do? You bastard!"

"How did you know about my kids?" I put him down and the others. I started hitting them, throwing them down. Stupid human imperfections.

I heard Bella groan in pain "AHHHHHHHHH" she screamed. How I despised seeing her in pain.

"Do you see what you did?!" I grabbed on guy and twisted his arm behind his back.

I got you I head another one from behind run up to me. I quickly threw the guy I was holding on top of the guy running at me from behind. When all four of them were in a line I starred at them. I had a tendency to either scare or dazzle people with my gaze. I now chose hate. As they ran I found some rope near by. I ran to get it, once I did I got the bastards and tied them up. Tied up they had no way of defense, although they never did in the first place. I kicked them, not hard enough to kill or break a bone. I punched them and hit them with the bat they hit Bella with.

"I'm sorry we-we wont do it ever again." Ha they sounded like children, cowering in fear.

"HA. Of coarse you will, because that's what filth does. They attack again and again, women after women. But you will never again hurt anyone like you did tonight." I took a deep breath to show them rage, even though I never needed air. "When the police come you will" I roared at that word so they would understand my meaning of it. "Tell them what you did, and you will tell them everyone else you hurt and why."

Yeah right I've been beaten up worse. I looked at the man who thought that.

"WHAT?!" I roared.

"Nothin, nothing I didn't say anything!"

"Do you really think that I can only hear the words that come out of your mouth?!" The man looked as if he was going to pee his pants. I untied that man

"You have been beaten up worse huh? By who? Your last victim!" I kicked him in his groin. Ha it never hut me. And he tried, he kicked me there but I just pushed him down. I felt blood on his face. Damn it, I was thirsty. I had to leave after that so I wouldn't kill them.

I couldn't kill them. It would make me as low as they had gone on my Bella. My Bella. I can't say that, she isn't mine I had almost killed her the first day of school.

"Ahhhhhhhhhhhh" she cried I could hear her cries, her pleading for those pieces of filth to stop. Poor human is out cold. I could still hear her heart beat so she was still alive. Ohhhhhh she smelled so good. I laid her down in the back seat of my car leaving those guys for the police to get. They should be arriving in 43 seconds. I drove her to Carlisle he could help her.

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