Ok, so I would love to hear your thoughts? And I think that I should have a little rant to you. I miss my boyfriend :( Yeah. He lives like eighty odd miles away from me, and I miss him dearly, but oh wells. And to top of the absolutely boring day I had, I had to just walk out into my garden to feed my rabbits.. and it was pouring rain, no, seriously, Im drenched. Not a very attractive look might I add.
I am in the middle of writting the sequel to this,. And I am actually enjoying it :)x
Anyhoooo.. on with review replies...
GroowyL: Thank you for reviewing, really. I am so sorry about not being able to write and everything, but I should be able to soon, I hope, I have just been really busy with my boyfriend and everything.. Hope you enjoy this, :Dx
EmmaJonasBrothersMcfly: Haha, yeah, I know what you mean, but for a while, you were like a silent reader to me, I am hoping you will enjoy this, and I am going to begin writting the sequel really soon :). x
McFlyinhHigh: First of all, I would like to say, WOW. Your review was huuuuge. And I dont actually live anywhere near there, I live in scotland, and have never been to america in my life, its just what I imagined in my mind, but I would always love to go there, I love places like Glasgow and Edinburgh here, but NYC must be about ten times the size of this. I totally understand what you mean by the whole work thing, I would be doing that if I wasnt busy, I always try and squeeze in some writting time but recently I have been really busy with things like my boyfriend, work, babysitting, family and friends, I have had to do a lot of things around the house to get ready for things like the T IN THE PARK festival, should be amazing. Hoping you like this chapter, and I am hoping to hear from you soon :D x
Roxy's P.O.V
I was sat on my bed with my guitar in hand, I remembered where I had got it from, I had gotten it when I had been downtown in New York. I started to strum on the guitar. Thinking quietly to myself.
I started quietly humming to myself, and decided to sing the song that I had once written about a boy. I'll let you decide who it was.
I didn't know what was in store.
When I walked right through the door.
Then I saw you over there, our blue eyes locked in a stare.
I didn't know quite what to say, sometimes words get in the way.
And I remember the night you said,
"Lets go for a ride" I didn't want the night to end.
Would we be more than friends?
Yet little did I know before,
we would be something more.
In black and white I read the screen, all your lines and in-between.
Then your message on the phone, I save to hear when I'm all alone.
And Now I know just what to say, this doesn't happen everyday.
And I remember the night you said,
"Lets go for a ride" I didn't want the night to end.
Would we be more than friends?
Yet little did I know before, we would be something more.
Something more, something more. (na na na na,na na na na yeah)
We would be something more, something more, something more.
I know we're both young, but we know how we feel.
We know what is false, and we know what is real.
And I remember the night you said "lets go for a ride"...
I didnt want the night to end....
And I remember the night you said,
"Lets go for a ride" I didn't want the night to end.
Would we be more than friends?
Yet little did I know before, we would be something more.
And I remember the night you said,
"Lets go for a ride" I didn't want the night to end.
Would we be more than friends?
Yet little did I know before, we would be something more.
Something more, something more. (na na na na,na na na na yeah)
Something more, something more. (na na na na,na na na na yeah)
I suddenly stopped singing. I heard something move over by the door, thats when I seen him. The boy this was written about. And no. Danny would never know it was about him.
Danny's P.O.V
I walked up the stairs to find Roxy, and thats when I heard it, the most beautiful noise known to man. Someone was humming. I wanted to investigate and so I followed my ears. I followed it until it brought me to Roxy's bedroom.
I didn't know what was in store.
When I walked right through the door.
Then I saw you over there, our blue eyes locked in a stare.
I didn't know quite what to say, sometimes words get in the way.
I stood almost behind the door just enough so that I could see her but she wouldn't see me.
And I remember the night you said,
"Lets go for a ride" I didn't want the night to end.
Would we be more than friends?
Yet little did I know before,
we would be something more.
In black and white I read the screen, all your lines and in-between.
Then your message on the phone, I save to hear when I'm all alone.
And Now I know just what to say, this doesn't happen everyday.
I stood silently listening to every word to escape her lips.
And I remember the night you said,
"Lets go for a ride" I didn't want the night to end.
Would we be more than friends?
Yet little did I know before, we would be something more.
Something more, something more. (na na na na,na na na yeah)
We would be something more, something more, something more.
I know we're both young, but we know how we feel.
We know what is false, and we know what is real.
And I remember the night you said "lets go for a ride"...
I didnt want the night to end....
She looked magnificent. With the guitar sitting on her lap. He voice leaving me speachless.
And I remember the night you said,
"Lets go for a ride" I didn't want the night to end.
Would we be more than friends?
Yet little did I know before, we would be something more.
And I remember the night you said,
"Lets go for a ride" I didn't want the night to end.
Would we be more than friends?
Yet little did I know before, we would be something more.
Something more, something more. (na na na na,na na na yeah)
Something more, something more. (na na na na,na na na yeah)
My leg had gone dead so I shifted it, resulting in her sudden stopping of her song.
She spotted me. And so I revealed myself.
I smiled weakly.
"We're you spying on me Jones?" She said, as she stood up and placed her guitar on the bed. I went to speak, but couldnt. I was still speachless from her singing.
"Wakey Wakey Rockstar" She said in my face. "Why're you here?" She asked, resulting in a tear slipping down my face. I thought she was going to break up with me if I told her. But I would rather tell her than have her know from the masterbitch.
"I came to .. to let you know.." I started, my voice breaking.
"Danny, whats wrong hun?" She asked, wrapping her arms around my neck, I hugged her tightly just in case it would be the last time that I was able to.
"I want to tell you, so that you dont hear it from someone else, and I know you will probably break up with me or something but here goes." I managed to speak, although it was extremely fast and she probably didnt hear me.
"What is it" A worried expression on her face, she heard me.
"I cant tell you" I burst out crying, I loved her. And so I searched in my mobile for the text Cerina had sent me. "Read that." I said, handing her the phone.
Her facial expression suddenly turned furious.
"Oh she is for it now!" She yelled, I tried to grab her to stop her leaving the room, but she slid from my grip and burst down the stairs.
Hmmm. Do you like it?
Oh well. Should have more up soon x